Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189020
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down

is it hot in here? and i'm not talking about losing the ac in b's apartment. i don't think these two will last mauch longer



Author's Response:

Haha I don't either.  They're a little too interested in one another.  I'm trying to make them hold off a little though. hehe I'm beginning to forget why!  It was definitely very hot I thought :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play

some good comminication after a min meltdown. and add in some bella foot in mouth comments and life is almost good for these two. thw only thing that's messing things up right now is being in different cities. but monday's coming hang on you two.



Author's Response:

Haha Life is pretty good for these two.  She's growing up a little and speaking to him instead of just immediately deciding he's guilty of something (though mentally of course is a different matter) and he's reassuring and sweet.  Monday is coming! hehe I just wanted to show Bella in her environment a little too, her job is as important as his is. :)  So glad you read it all!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting

have i mentioned i love emmie? the shrine was too funny! eddie and bella are gonna chow down and then it's time to head home for dessert.



Author's Response:

Haha Em gets so much love.  I adore it.  His shrine was pretty awesome.  Yeah, food first and then the all-important dessert!  Yay for them!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

Alice was awesome! She had everyone wrapped around her tiny finger. Bella and eddie are official. Yay! And I see comments on the steamy commercial in the future....

Author's Response:

She was, wasn't she?  I had a blast letting her loose on the commercial people.  They are official and yeah, their commercial is coming out at some point ;)   I still have to write that!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown

so funny how manly eddie got anxious about doing the deed. and bella wants to marry his fingers, and toungue, and i'm gonna guess his dick!question though..... there was no mention of a condom....



Author's Response:

Hahah yes, I mention in the next chapter that they already discussed birth control.  I don't find it hot to write about it in the moment and because they planned the day, they're protected.

I think guys get nervous about their first time when the girl matters.  Bella does want all those parts and more!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down

I love em! He is awesome and eddie is funny in all his prettiness!
One day I'm gonna have to come out for a read along, I am always way late, though. :(

Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad you love Em.  He's a blast.  Edward's definitely dreamy. 

Sorry you missed it, but we'll have another one sometime hopefully! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion

How can I get a shower like that? And does it come with a football eddie?

Author's Response:

Hahah I think it costs more than most houses do, but you could make it happen.  Football Eddie is a huge upgrade though :) 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

too funny how dr phil and the rude asshole got eddie to admit his feelings. and bella let it slip first, but love is out there now and they can only move forward from here.



Author's Response:

Haha yes the love is out there.  Rude asshole?  Em was just doing what he had to do to rile his boy up!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

first play of the game and it was hers! *swoon* i wonder if hubbie would let me get a football eddie?



Author's Response:

Heheh couldn't hurt to ask, right?  Yeah, that was definitely a "swoon-worthy" moment wasn't it?  Melted my own heart! 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan

Ok eddie here is the plan for the auction! Give bella your cheque book and let her buy you! Win-win you two get a date and the charity gets tons of your money when bella out bids eveyone else! Perfect

Author's Response:

You got that right, as you have seen :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

I'm glad that even though she met one asshole in the box the rest of the guys gave her a chance. Time to see eddie's pov of the locker room!

Author's Response:

Finally getting these!  Sheesh!  Most of the guys are pretty cool, but of course there have to be some that are dicks.  Just the law of averages! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview

That was awsome! And so fiting for the ultimate guy fantasy! And the cheesy porno shit!? Too funny and oh so true. Heehee em and jasper are gonna be so jealous!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Em and Jas are going to be jealous.  It was pornish but still sexy I thought.  I loved being in his head for that moment.  Such a fantasy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill

Well that went better than she expected time to meet the parents....

Author's Response:

Haha but of course!  I hope you enjoy them!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

Man can I trade my mother in law in for an esme model? Damn that was an awesome first meeting! And yay I was right bella is gonna use eddie's money to buy him that way she doesn't have to share. Heehee

Author's Response:

Haha sorry, I am just NOW getting emails from this site and somehow I missed this in my perusal! 

I think everyone would love an Esme model.  The first meeting went very well, all things considered.  Yeah, she's gonna buy her man! 

Thanks so much for the reviews!  I hope I didn't miss any others!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

Oh my charlie wants to arrest him and set bella up with a smurf from seatle and renee wants to steal him for a strip search with a puppy! No wonder bella is the way she is! Heehee can you imagine when the cullens, the swans, and the friends get together? Total caos and mayham! It will be great!

Author's Response:

Haha yes, Bella very much has bits of both parents inside her.  Renee has no filter whatsoever. hehe

I plan on writing that get together one day, though the mere thought is almost exhausting. hehe  Should be fun!

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

Ok seriously these two are so sweet my teeth hurt! Calling the dentist right now heehee! The interveiw went great.

Author's Response:

Haha that they are :)  Glad you enjoyed it!  I love how in love they are and they're not afraid to show it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Wow a cool half mill! Poor bella will freak once she has time to wrap her head around that! But I am sure eddie will be worth every dime. I can not belive they got momma e to call them by their pecker names! Too funny!

Author's Response:

Haha I think she's accepting of his money, at least a lot more than canon Bella is.  She'll deal.  He is totally worth it.  Having Esme call them by the dick names killed me!  So much fun!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress

Till 5 in the morning and then seconds in the shower! Sounds like the boy is worth every penny! The articles went well but now it is time for the rest of the world to have their say...

Author's Response:

Haha he did live up to his expensive price!  We'll see what the world has in store!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

That last paragraph was just a great big awwwwwwww! I still love em even if he does make jasper want to punch him. Heehee

Author's Response:

Haha thank you!  He's a sweetheart, and he likes to have fun no matter what.  Works for him and for me!  Glad you love him!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Holy shit!!!

Author's Response:

Hehe I will take that as a compliment!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

Dammit missed the read along again! Maybe next time.
Glad to see eddie, jas, and em got to deal with dan. Not what they wanted but they still got their 2 cents in there for her.

Author's Response:

Haha Yeah, another time!  The boys were very effective in what they did get to do.  :)  Thanks so much for all your kind reviews!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

Ghost busters! Really!?! Om my goodness that was hilarious! I would love to see something like that!

Author's Response:

That's my Em!  Fast on his feet and so much fun :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

Ok seriously do not know football but you write it good. I pretty much understand what you're saying and that says something. Looks like bella isn't the only one who has to worry about personal and work colliding.

Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I like to hear that you can kinda see it even if you don't know it!  Nope they're both getting some issues, but they'll work it out together!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

She said yes! As if there was any doubt! Heehee though eddie did sweat a bit

Author's Response:

Haha he did indeed, but I had to make her think about it for a minute or two :) 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

Well em sure shut his mouth quick with rose involved! This rose is perfect for this em! Love em both.

Author's Response:

Haha he certainly did!  Rose is the match he needs!  SO glad you love them!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 23 Outtake, The Second String

Oh rosie! You sure know how to keep your man in line. He just needs a little of his own medicine! Jasper is really touchy about the em date thing. Heehee and alice just left him to the sharks

Author's Response:

Hehe nobody can keep Em in check like Rosie. hee  She rocks!  Jasper was none too pleased about that situation.  But Alice made it up to him later :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

Does that restaurant really exist? Sounds awesome. Loved how bella kinda let the big news slip to renee and then charlie's reaction! Too funny. I wonder what eddie is gonna get charlie for christmas? He better make it good
Well I think I am all caught up now, so next read along I should be there!

Author's Response:

Yes it does!  I'm very jealous and want to go there. 

Bella's verbal vomit strikes again!  I had a lot of fun with that.  We'll have to see how Edward bribes his way into the old man's heart, huh? :)

Glad you're all caught up!  I'll keep you posted on any read alongs or anything else! ;)

Thanks for all your reviews along the way!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/8916/images/Bella's_Revenge_2.jpg

Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

damn i want bella's job! it definately sounds like fun.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Cameron

is it jake? can't be eddie he has a pole up his ass and would freak the fuck out if he knew what bella was doing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Alex

is it eddie stalking her or is it someone else?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella

now is that suppoesed to be 'lots of love' ? as a calling card sort of thing?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chris

ok if this is eddie stalking her why has he not made a big deal and shit a brick over bella's lifestyle.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jacob

what's up with everything being a little off? is it eddie voodoo?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Scott

ok um.... what the fuck?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bella

i am not sure what to think about all of this. kinda sounds like eddie kinda not...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Zack

well now he has owned up to it wonder what she'll do now?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Edward

oh boy eddie is back and she just let him walk right back in.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Lance

aww and he didn't even blow a fit when she came home smelling like sex.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Jeremy

obviously eddie is not following her everywhere or he would have saved bella.

will she tell him what happened?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Edward

eddie is finally gonna give it a try. even if it does mean moving slow and getting used to everything.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bella

yeah looks like he likedit more than once. and so did bella!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Alex & Jacob

poor jake he has loved her since the beginning. but he has to realize that she has moved on. and she has eddie again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Edward & Bella

glad she got to experience the joys of the tongue playing in her girly place. it is by far one of my faves!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica & Alex

ok so eddie has been doing some meddling, some good some bad but all in an effort to help bella or her friends.

and he likes road head!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Bella

you better not have her wake up with bruises and have eddie go all emo 'i'm a monster and i hurt you' !

yay they have finally done the deed!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chris

well it looks like all of the old boy toys have been delt with. and now bella is free to love on eddie forever. i wonder how long till one of them brings up changing bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Edward

damit! i told you not to let him go all emo about this bullshit! i mean he can make peace with her banging everything with a third leg but he can't get over grabbing her a little too hard? the boy needs a good smack to the head!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Alice

well at least alice and rose were right if eddie can't do it for bella than she can do it for herself!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Edward

yay they have moved past the i'll hurt you hurdle! back to the sexin'!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Bella

well thank god you cleared up the no baby thing. it never really made sense to me. bella's right eddie's swimmers should be and would be dead!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Rosalie

bella just has to stand her ground and open up the lines of comminication.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Alice

well what the fuck?!?!



Author's Response:

Hi Sunshine-Sue!  Thanks for reading!  I hope you are enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Charlie

jake's an asshole. plain and simple. yay for charlie!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Edward

yay eddie has come back and again they will try to move forward. 1 step forward two steps back again. all of the worries would be gone if eddie just changed her....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Bella

back to the sexy times! yay for bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Alice

oh shit this doesn't sound good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

well that was so not a nice way to end it off! but lucky for me you have already started the sequel! off to that now!

thanks for sharing your story with me :)



Author's Response:

Well, thank YOU for reading it.  I hope you enjoyed it and the sequel as well.  :)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/10011/images/faithfully.jpg

Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100557
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

*hums* 'i'm in love with a man nearly twice my age'

well this one looks like it is gonna be an interesting ride!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

ok you had me wondering who the brother was for a while there. jazz - no, em - no, jake - no embry - no, quil - no, seth - yes! we were running outta guys. and that is never a good thing in FF! heehee. loved how b delt with rose. but i don't think your rose is good enough for emmy-bear. :( maybe he'll find a new hunny?

can't wait to see how much of a 'gentleman' eddie is gonna be, but unfourtunately it is past my bedtime. :( *pouts*

oh well i'll just read offline at work! *evil laugh*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

very hot and he even followed through and was sorta a 'gentleman'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

very hot! these two have some major chemistry

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

i agree with alice i am so shocked and amazed that they have not 'gone all the way' but that poor boy is probably gonna burst! man is he walking into something good!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

oh boy these two! that was awesome!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

so sweet! and the way b let him off the hook with saying 'i know...' just awesome.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

is it laughable that when i read 'una bella ragazza italiana' that i giggled and thought to myself i know what that means! and it is all because of reading EMANCIPATION PROCLAMATION' see fan fic is not just smut and stories it teaches us all!

loved the costumes i can picture each and every one. can't wait for the awards show!



Author's Response:

haha! I have to agree that Emancipation Proclimation is a fantastic fic! I have thouroughly enjoyed each of your reviews, it makes me so happy that this story is being enjoyed...I have never written before this so it is nice to hear that my efforts are appreciated. If you would like to see the costumes, you can get to the links on my ff.net account or on my blog: lailab-faithfully.blogspot.com.

Again thank you for reading and for your kind words...it makes it so much easier to keep going!

I look forward to hearing what you think of the next one!

Laila

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

They were doing so good! And then they let shit jump in the way again! Fuck just talk to eachother!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

Holy FUCK! So hot!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

hot, wow

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

definately satisfing! whew! is it hot in here?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

i can not even imagine having to go to that extreme! but it sounds like eddie is gonna come and save the day.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

bella had a thing for 'e' too?!? so sweet.

it was nice to see that she went through the normal 'holy shit what am i about to do' thoughts.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they felt the connection even before they were aware of it.   Glad you liked her thoughts too.  Couldn't have a story like this and not cover the disbelief.  :D

Thanks for reading and leavin' some love!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

we all have regrets in life, looks like bella is gonna be able to go back and change hers.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

definately not how i expected it to go. but this was more realistic. hope she gives him a shot.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

he better grab her and kiss her hard!

Summary: Past Featured Story

LYMFoM Banner

What happens when bad girl Bella is forced to attend church when her newly saved mother forces her to go? What happens when the handsome Youth Pastor, Edward, catches Bella's eye? She puts into effect Operation Seduce Mr. Innocent. Will Edward fall from grace or will Bella be his saving Grace?

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143297 Read Count: 48613
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 May 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Man I remember those days! Totally describes my mother in law!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker

Ok how bad is it that in order to make googly eyes at edward she has to go down on jasper?! And maybe more. I wonder what eddie would think of that! Lol to funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Beautiful One

Ok so how old is our eddie here? He is done collegeso that would make him 22-ish? And bella 17-18? Not too big of a gap in the big picture but huge to outsiders now...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Opposite Way

Bella and jasper have a really cool relationship. Love how they look out for eachother. I guess I got my answer on how old b and e are.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 I Still Believe

poor eddie he is so torn... will he get the answer to his prayers? has he already?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith

it is amazing the feeling of being someplace where you can just feel the faith of others and you want to feel that too even if you don't really believe. and like bella mentioned you can tell the true believers and the ones who are there going through the motions for other reasons.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 The Blessing

now there is an interesting prayer request. i am not so sure how the church ladies would respond....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Anyway

looks like someone is in over his head....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Live For Today

this should be a good little talk.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment

they are to cute! and they are gonna snuggle.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign

wow she really brings the bad boy out in him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes

poor jasper i wonder what happened with alice to make him drop e? or was it just his dad?

and edward? wow the boy is starting to let loose!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Is This Love

Sneaking around is hard on the friendship because youy can not really meet everyone for a movie or dinner and hang out together with friends and boyfriend.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Broken Wing

Poor eddie! The guy can't lie or keep a secret very well. He is just to much of a nice guy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough

You never know what you have until it's gone. But I agree with b I don't think jasper is in love with her, he is feeling left behind and like he has been replaced. He will find his happy again, I know it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Slow Fade

Well it seems that the important people are being allowed in on the 'secret'. I remember when my mom brought up birth control and I had to tell her I already had it covered. She did it at the food court at the mall at a table full of our friends and my then boyfriend, now hubbie. I could have died! And hubbie about ran away! To funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Lifesong

what time of year is it now? how long do they have till the tour? what about their birthdays? they will miss both. eddie - june bella - sept.

oh yeah and jane is a bitch!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around

woohoo go eddie! gettin all up in bella's ....well you know. heehee! and don't worry sweety you'll be makin her scream a lot more i am sure and once you get the hang of it you 2 can do it at the same time! then we move on to the oral assignment!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven

wonder what charlie is gonna think?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave

i agree with bella this is a pretty shity christmas. but eddie stood up for her. jasper may be hurt and confused but that was a shit move.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Have We Lost

oh boy eddie is not gonna be happy....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Halo

jasper why would you let them do that to her?!?! and edward, man you gotta learn to contrrol yourself.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement

well bella got to see a bit of the everybody loves edward groupies. but he only haseyes for her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town

time for alice to bitch slap jasper and knock some sence into him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 Angels

this is a huge step for b and the coming separation is gonna suck for both of them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Iris

well good byes suck ass. good for you edward that you stuck to your guns and stopped.