Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Summary:

Hockey is an emotional sport for the players and the fans. For TT25.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34783 Read Count: 15816
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well she sure took him back quickly, i hope she still makes him work for it!

darling i love your an, wish i could help but alas i fall in the same boat as you with my computer skills! wanted to let you in on my favorite saying! not sure who it came from but it was on thhis site. 'techtarded' i use it whenever i can to explain my abilities with technology.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

sports always have the element of danger and the risk of being hurt. bella knows this but she is seeing it as someone involved now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

being a bitch does not win the guy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

eddie came to her in pheonix!? wow boy has it bad.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

yay they are back together and it should be time to go home soon!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

funny how life in high school bounced from perfect to horrible and back again so quickly.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

the later it gets in the season the more intence it gets. nothing like knowing everything hangs on this game....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow orgies at 14! that is kinda fucked up. but eddie stood up for her honor and took jake down. looks like emotions will be high going into the coming games.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

yay they won! time to celebrate!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

celebrate good times, come on! sorry i'm a geek! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

and they lived happily ever after!

loved the shoot out to tim hortons! it is like legalized crack heehee! us albertans are very into out timmie's coffee!

thank you for sharing your story.

suzie :)

Summary:

Going through the high school social system is not just looking for a gentle curvature. Friend's change, and relationships blossom and wilt all in a matter of seconds. AH, AU, OOC. Mature fic, lemons galore, and intimate story line.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64818 Read Count: 3527
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well at least he admitted it to himself now he just has to show her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

how long till eddie sees she loves him?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looks like mr. eddie has a thing for miss bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oooo! a teacher! good plan to get her eddie.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well that's just not fair. how come it is ok for her to getoff in front of him and he getsto run to the bathroom and finish in private? wonder what bella thought of her first orgasm?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well at least they don't seem to be letting this effect their friendship, yet

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

poor bella, how long she waited! i'd never be able to do that.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

life  isnever easy, but at least she has her eddie.



Author's Response:

Your reviews make me smile :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

poor girl! but at least eddie got to see j and l being bitches to bella. he can deal with it now. and he better!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

he did all of that and then just walked out on her?!?!? holy shit what is she gonna think of that?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh these poor kids they have no clue how to deal with all of this.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well at least he knows he fucked up big time! and now he just has to fix it. and tell her the trueth...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wow i am so glad i didn't have to worry about stuff like that in high school. huh i guess getting knocked up saved me from this petty shit. who'da thunk it? lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow  well now that's all out they can start to move forward and get past the hurt

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

back on the road to recovery...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

a date! heehee i wonder where he's gonna take her?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

all what shit that is still to come?....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

one fire out and crisis averted only to have another pop up

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

will they?...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

damn! well it seemed like it was worth the wait and all of the bullshit

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

so sweet and so them...

thank you for writing! :)

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161902
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

some closure for baby bell. she needs it to feel that this chapter of her life is over and she can move forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well now this looks like it could be interesting...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow they really are gung ho on getting her to open up.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well i guess we all experience deep pain at some point in life. some sooner than others and the support of others makes dealing a whole lot easier

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ok i did not see that comming!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh boy they are going to force her to deal with it

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this is gonna get bad before it gets better right?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

the worst part of this sort of thing, the wrong person takes the blame.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

she is starting to see the light

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

uh oh daddy charlie is gonna kill him!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well that was kinda a break in the stress

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

and now the healing and the hurting. it gets worse before it gets better

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

not to critisise (?) but is there a reason you are pushing the story along so fast? she went from not talking, not touching, in general not dealing with anything to doing all of these things semi freely with c,es,ed,a,j,r,em,m,j in like a week.

please don't take this the wrong way, i hate to leave anything but happy vibes, i was just wondering. sorry:(



Author's Response:

The time span starts to widen as the chapters go on:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh no she din't!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

poor girl has a long way to go...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well it will be a long and windy road but with help she seems to be getting the fact that she can get better and take back her life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well she is seeing the pros ans the cons of sharing her story. she just needs to see that there is far more good that will come from all of this than bad. people may talk but soon there will be something else to get their attention and she will be able to move away from the spotlight.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

one foot in front of the other, tthat is how it is done.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

looks like everyone can see the bond between e & b.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well new look, new bella? well at leasr eddie has stood up and taken notice!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh boy what will the boys do? not sure if bella is ready for this yet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well it looks like these two need to have someone sit them down and have a big talk about how they are feeling.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ugh! nothing sucks worse than the girl you like telling you, you are her best friend. poor eddie!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

poor emmy bear. happy to see that em and bella have come to an understanding on how they feel about eachother.

now what is goning on with jasper?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yay! thet are finnaly putting themselves out there.

poor jasper, glad to see you made him the 'happy, normal' kid who just got the bad end of the stick.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i agree charlie. 'about fucking time'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

oooo... is belly bean a prankster? wow that could be so much fun!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

uh oh who is there?

glad to see bella trying to find herself again. and charlie finnaly had his version of 'the talk'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well she seems to be finding a lot of different copeing skills. but i wonder what's up with charlie?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow the first fight

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well peter pushed her for answers and she was great. not sure why the whole group has to go to the museum, why can't b and e just go and the others can pick them up later.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

funny how it was like a switch and the light went on...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

you go girl! you take the power back, asshole never deserved it anyways!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

so happy that she is taking her life back one step at a time.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

the prank was classic! loved it!

Summary:

Edward is constantly searching for the next girl and another go at sexual gratification. Bella can't find a meaningful connection, confusing sex with love. A chance meeting over a book brings two lonely hearts together. O/S, AH E&B. Entry for the "Picture is worth 1000 words" contest. To be expanded to full story, separate post.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1118 Read Count: 472
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Two Lonely Hearts O/S

aww love at first sight over a sex book!

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

edward daddy is cute! tattooed edward daddy sounds hot!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so cute how rosa is trying to break the ice and set something up with b&e. wonder if cass was doing the same thing?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loved the interaction between ed and the kids. and the talk with his mom too funny. at least he is getting out of the 'but what about grandbabies' guilt trips. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so cute, talking about the kids all proud and such! at least it shows on  both ends that the kids are the most important

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love how unsure they both seem to be. so adorable that you made edward a blusher too! you have got to think that with his wife walking out leaving him a single dad it would effect his self- confidence.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

and so it begins...

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

such a sweetheart and a gentleman. esme would be proud!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

swimming was great. good to see how close the family is. definately showing bella what she is getting into. surprised you did not have wendy or car comment on bella's ''pretty drawings' (tattoos)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

had to throw in the 'big brother'emmy talk

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wonder what bella has planned for wendy''s gift...

a tinkerbell impersonator for the party? maybe a bag of fairy dust? a video, letter, phone call from a fairy?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

ok squee that was so sweet at the end.

too funny with them pissing their pants in the haunted house.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

`well looks like these two are moving along at a good pace.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

so glad that the kids are all feeling the love as well. cant wait to see what will happen in the morning.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

well this one sounds like it is gonna be fun!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

i wondered who would be the first to touch under the table. looks like daddy c goes for what he wants. i wonder what b is gonna do.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

well daddy c that was not nice to start something if you are not going to finish it! right bella? looks like they are gonna have to find a way out of the house for a while.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss

i think i like your dirty daddy c!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted

well looks like they are caught, i wonder who it is?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

i wonder what esme means about daddy c? what happened to him to cause the 'damage'?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations

wow daddy c needs someone to love and care for him, someone to help him be whole. i wonder who that could be? i am almost hopeing that she ends up picking him over eddie-boy, but i guess we'll just have to see what your eddie is like...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation

i am still rooting for daddy c. it sounds like he has never allowed himself to find and feel love. him and b could be great together. eddie still has forever to find a girl. and come on now it's not like there wouldn't be a line up of girls begging to have a go at all that is edward cullen!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

my vote is still for daddy c! and going by what i've seen of edward i think it's gonna stay with him.

kinda confused as to why carlisle didn't just tell eddie that his momma died, would have made things easier on everyone. but then there would be no conflict here. so i guess it had to be...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen

i wanna hear what daddy c wants! so not fair to leave it off like that. and i'm surprised that bella didn't follow him downstairs to finish that conversation.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Wedding

the wedding was great. so hot that they explored the joys of the backseat of his car. so sweet that they have finnally gotten the chance to cuddle up and fall asleep.

edward needs to back the fuck off! and bella and daddy c need to come clean to everyone, and soon.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

she better not have. he better not have, from the souns of it she passed out! bella really needs to tell him about her and daddy c.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

well looks like they are starting to accept that they both want 'more' now they just have to figure out how they are gonna get it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

oh my, how long has edward known? how did he find out? what will bella say?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

well looks like everything is out in the open now, but what will come of it all? and what the hell did carlilse mean when he said that there was no need to worry about charlie? how long has HE known about what is goning on?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

wow i like your renee! she seems really smart about things and sees things deeper than most would. glad to see we found out why carlilse said charlie wouldn't be a problem, can't believe he told! wonder how everything will turn out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

poor edward! i could not even imagine how it would feel to stand there and have that conversation with my mom. but the journey has been started towards healing for everyone.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

yay everyone gets a happily ever after!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

yay everyone has found their 'one' thank you for writting.