Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117425
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

gotta love the honeymoon! almost time to get back to real life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

home at last. but only to leave again for the tour

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

everyone seems to be having babies. wonder how long until it is one of the 6 main characters?



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143768
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh this looks like fun! i wonder who will be the first to crack?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looks like eddie is trying to show bella his true self, not just what is shown to the masses. here's to hoping that she can see the real him...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok still doesn't count as giving in to what they are feeling but eddie almost caved first. wonder what bella is gonna think of all of this?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh boy a baby! wow! looks like we still have a few weeks to go before bella has to make a decision.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

yay! bella was right that pretty much sounded like the majority of girls'wet dream!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

so cute! eddie is so sweet my teeth hurt, but in a good way! yummy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so cute. i hope that bella tells chrlie about eddie pretending to be with tanya or charlie is gonna hunt him down. shoot first ask questions later.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow this is anawesome plan. they can get over any embarresment issues while phone sexin'it up. then when he gets home it will be an all out sex-olymics!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

yay eddie is home! and he bought her a cute car. glad she took it without too much trouble. the dinner party should be fun. but how will they set ben up when he already has jess? that is kinda sleazy. the meeting with renee should be interesting as well, all of those prego hormones running wild, she's likely to jump sexy eddie man before she knows the whole story.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

alice is kinda freaky! i mean she's not a vamp with special powers in this one and that thing she does would be seriously creepy. awesome but creepy!

can't wait for eddie to meet momma renee.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well i wonder when bella is gonna cave and tell rose and em? rose is gonna be pissed that bella kept it from her! or she'll be all 'yeah and... i'm not stupid  ya know!'

christmas with the cullens should be soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

WHAT IF: During Dead to the World, Eric never regained his memories? What would life be like for Sookie and Eric if he stayed Her Eric instead of going back to being Sheriff of Area 5? What would this mean for everyone else involved?

Lemons & Language: It has that rating for a reason kids

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59865 Read Count: 4179
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so glad you are writting this i've wondered what the outcome to this string would be...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yeah pam watch your tone! heehee. so nice to see that the queen is taking this seriously, not! but eric seems to be happy as long as they get to do the nasty.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

you don't want this eric because he is not the real eric. and if his memories come back in say 6 months or a year well that would be bad.

#1 he would be pissed if you had not tried everything possible to get the old eric back

#2 he would leave and totally break your heart

this way he either gets the old eric back soon and leaves before it is too late for sookie's heart or he stays the new eric.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well pam is the new head bitch in area 5, bill's deviousness is under the microscope and the queen is interested in sookie... where do we go from here?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh eric! so sweet, after all of the important stuff talked about and thought about tonight, you felt the most important of all was admitting your love. all together now...AWWWWWW!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well hot damn! getting both sides of the orgasmic freefall, sounds good to me!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh shit what does the queen have in mind?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

off t the party! i wonder how eric and sookie will handle the protection spell not letting eric get too close? sorta doesn't fit with their fuck like bunnies ways does it?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well son of a bitch! the king said the reverse spell durring his speech! pam should be happy but what will happen between sookie and eric now? i mean they are blood bonded.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh no poor sookie! what will happen now? and why can't eric feel the pain she is going through?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh eric you are an asshole! but at least you are trying in your own fucked up kind of way

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Looks like sookie has learned a few things about eric!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yay that is all there really is to say. He has shown her in so many ways that he wants her and her love

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love pam and eric' banter back and forth. Heehee and the date sounds wonderful

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gotta love it he tries so hard and everything is a bomb! But the fact that he tried and that they were together made up for all of the craptaticness of the night. Plus there was cuddles and awesome sex! Heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh yeah that sounds like an awesome date! being claimed in front of everyone then being claimed while in private while screaming for everyone to hear, then snuggling, then homefor more private sexin. sounds like a damn good night!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

finally pledged in the vamp worl and married in the human world. but best of all together, in love, happy, and all the while remembering everything!

thank you for sharing your story!

suzie :)

Danger is a Dame by Lubadub Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Eric Northman is a famous author struggling with the death of his wife, trying to get back on track.  Even he couldn't predict the impact a sweet Southern Barmaid would have on his life.  AH

Rated for a reason kids, Language and Lemons

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70136 Read Count: 3163
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

he had a spirit walk while in a gym! heehee yeah it was in a meditation class but still. and he realized that loving sookie does not take anything away from his love for his wife. plus she asked for sookie.... it was ment to be.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

so glad that eric is getting over his misplaced guilt. unless you were the drunk behind the wheel it was not your fault sweety.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

a white christmas sure would be a cause for major excitement for the southern belle. me i live in central alberta,canada where a white christmas is the norm and usually comes along with -20C to -40C and probably a windchill that would freeze your socks off.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

such a sweet way to end things off.

thank you for sharing your story with me.

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

a perfect day in eric's current life and making some more peace with his old life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

who dunnit ? was it eric? susannah? danger? natural causes?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

awww. they are now living together officially. when do we see a ring eric?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i like it! and like sookie said it is a perfect lead up to another book at some point. maybe not the next one but definately one that would sneak up ready to be told.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well that's no fair sookie is gonna play susannah but with a different danger? so not fair it would be awesome if they could really go all out with that fantasy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well eric what are you gonna do to get her attention?

*yay 3 miners up! praise God!*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well it would seem eric has found a new muse. and a new friend to help him see things more clearly.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

he has a date and amelia is way too perceptive heehee how are you gonna talk your way outta this eric?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow eric you just went from going in reverse to 120 in 2.1 seconds! heehee it is fate.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

a spectacular first date! i must agree. and i love sookie's explaination on the balance of good and bad.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

aww poor eric! he was trying so hard too. he just kinda really fucked up in the end there....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

pam is so smart! sneeky lady made it all better.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

nothing says thansgiving like good friends, good food, and an orgasm or two! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

heehee eric keeps having wet dreams! too funny, and so not the eric we all know and love.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

she passedout on him! heehee oh well they got to snuggle all night and all day. it's all about the build up - right?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Perfect song and wow what a way to end the night!

Avoidance by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Following the Nevada takeover, Sookie has had little contact from any vampires, including Eric.  She wants Eric, but is confused by her feelings so she does what she does best.  She avoids it.  Soon, as always someone is out to get her.  Will Eric save the day once again?

This is a Dead and Gone Alternative, written before D&G was released, but somewhat based on rumors of D&G.  Spoilers for all books, Gift Wrap short story, and the first chapter of D&G that was posted on CH's website.  This was my first fanfiction and my first writing in a very long time.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113048 Read Count: 9045
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

what the hell happened to sookie? and how can they 'fix' her this time?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh shit sookie what have you gotten into now?

and saying all of that to eric?!? wow but it needed to be said, that and so much more

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

amelia is right eric came for more than just business. wonder what's up with sookie? not hungry, not eating, being watched...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

poor sookie trying so hard to stay away from eric, her feelings, his feelings, and just plain everything hard in life right now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

poor girl just can not catch a break!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

oh boy what about the nightmares? will sookie really be alright without eric?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

that's right eric you keep working on her and she will give in and you two can be together forever.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

working for a living and worring about if she can be a permanent resident at eric's house, well duh!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

funny how this little human woman has brought supes of all kinds to her side and joined them all in a very unlikely friendship. glad to see the asshole fairy got what was comming to him. that was some sick and twisted plans. i am so glad that sookie did not stay to hear what was to become of her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

40 yeah when you put ot that way it does sound way creepy! heehee. but all of these people are your friends sookie and they just want to help keep you safe.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh boy this girl is always in trouble. they gotta wrap her in bubble wrap or tie her to a certain viking vamp's side....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

well hell. off to alaska, that could be good depending what time of year it is - longer nights. but will eric be able to find her? she said the bond feels drawn thin - but that could be from the stress and the drugs

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow this guy is totally fucked up! torture her for hours, heal her quick only to tortuer her again. but she still has eric, in her mind, her dreams and hopefully their bond. is he coming for her?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

honey do not give up eric said he was coming.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wonder if eric brought help or if he is gonna kill everyone there himself?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

eric found and saved her! and he brought her friends and protectors.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

they have had the talk at least the important part of it. loved seeing pam being the good friend that sookie needed. but the sexual teasing is still fun to watch. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

poor sookie all tuckered out and sleeping instead of ' enjoying'  eric. she will be so disappointed in the morning. heehee. good to see she has help with the plan.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

yes my dear sookie there are a great many shifters, weres, and vamps that owe you. even a fairy or two who would stand up for you. time to start calling in some markers....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

cool idea for the fots punishment, definately something that sookie would think of. i wonder what sookie will do when she is in front of the asshole fairy? and what will eric and sookie be able to do with their new found power with the bond?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

looks like we are gonna be off to find preston and see what light he can shed on all of this.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

time to go home and back to normal life. will sookie be able to slip back into her life from befre or will she need to be closer to eric to feel complete?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

closure with bill, and a good talk with dear pam, a good night so far. now she just has to get through the talk with great grandad.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

holy shit great grandaddy sent her a sex toy for christmas! and he doesn't think there is anything wrong with that? damn fairies.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

a little bit closer to a new normal for sookie. and some answers about her fairy family.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

sookie is getting better at the big talks with her viking vamp. and ashower sounds like fun after the talk and tears...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

all about the shower! heehee.

time to see if we can get some answers out of amun.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ok tou two what are we waiting for 4 little words that will mean so much

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thank goodness sookie had to be taken out, she can live knowing that she tried to be there and had to leave for reasons outside of her control. hopefully she will be ok with that.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

finally! not quite the way i was expecting but it is out there now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

yeah when you put it all together sookie has had a hell of a couple of years along with everything else from her entire life of listening to people. it is a wonder that she has not broken yet or talked to someone before now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

well plan b was not a sure thing like i figured it wopuld be. what will they do now ? and what the fuck does preston want?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i wonder what the king shithead will think when he hears about sookie's noghtmare? did eric feel her?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well plan b did work it just took longer than they were hoping for. yay! and sookie kicked some crazy asshole fairy ass and had to save the big bad vamp king. wow way to show him up! life is good and happy untl the next big catastrophy! heehee

thank you for sharing your story!

suzie:)

Leap of Faith by Missus T Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Eric and Sookie are reunited years after a devastating break-up. Eric is an active duty Marine and Sookie is still struggling to move on.  Will they take a second chance at true love, or is there too much history between them? AH/AU/OOC, etc.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121265 Read Count: 8282
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Reunion

well that was definately an asshole move on eric's part. poor sookie

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Cavalry Arrives

oh boy she says she will fall in love again but did it ever really go away?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Country Girl Can Survive

wow there was lies and pain from both sides.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Liar! Liar!

everyone lied to them?!?! i get why but still

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Two Ex's and a Funeral

wow that saying eric's name thing must have stung! but it sounds like alcide deserved it in the end! but showing up at gran's funneral and yelling at sookie? that was uncalled for and a total shit move.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! I am enjoying your reactions chapter by chapter. :)

As for Alcide yelling at Eric, well, he didn't show up there intending it to happen. He thought he'd scoop Sookie up in her weakness and get her back, which is actually not any better. LOL

Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Sandra

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Homework

heehee eric gave sofie one hell of a shocker! 'um dude... she looks like she's having a fucking stroke'lol too funny. but it sure had to be wierd for sookie to know that eric's friends knew about her and that he obviously talked about her often.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Fate is a Fickle Bitch (EPOV outtake)

poor eric he has gone through so much since he has been gone. but the thing with life is that every choice we make leads to an outcome and more choices, everyone of them leading to where we end up, change even one and you change the whole sting of life, kinda like those old choose your own adventure books - but in real life we can't turn back the pages and make a different choice, we have to just move forward in the best way we can and hope and pray for the best possible outcome in the end.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Last Straw

not sure if you ment to but loved the shoot out to our beloved fifty shades! notthing beats the emotional breakdown followed by the 'i gotta have you' makeout session! heehee and to have amelia walk in on them to bring them back down to earth too funny! and poor eric having the thoughts of sookie's barely there underware to haunt him.



Author's Response:

OMG! It is a shout out to Fifty! You made me go check and I must have forgotten to copy/paste the authors note. :) I went in and added it. Snowqueens Ice Dragaon totally derserves the shout out for that! :)

 

Thanks again for reading and leaving me the review love! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Full Circle

well hot damn! after the cock blocking in the house i was thinking we may have to wait for the clothes to come off but hell! and outside in the yard? well what better place to do it like they do on the discovery channel than in the great wide open? heehee at least this time amelia waited until they were done before she interupted again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Inheritance

the things we do out of love for our kids, or in this case grandkids and nefews. both ladies were trying to do what they thought was right and it just got to big to take back once they realized it was wrong.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Old Favorites

so sweet that he just wants them to be ... well them, until he has to go back. i wonder what sookie will think of eric's marine buddies?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chicken Fried

well i must agree shower scenes are always great to read but i've always found them kinda dangerous in real life. heehee i mean you have to pay attention at all times never really losing yourself in the moment cause you might slip and fall1 but hey maybe i'm just crazy. i keep telling hubbie when the kids are gone and we have the money to remodel we will have one of those awesome showers with multiple shower heads and a bench and non slip tiles... then we will go to town! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ursa Major

it is so bittersweet that these two have basically picked up where they left off 7 years ago but with sad reminders thrown in every once in a awhile of the past and the deployment comingup.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Not in the Bathroom

well guys you better get used to it because once married and have kids running around you have some of the oddest conversations in the wierdest places! heehee. but seriously in the bathroom when she was just crying?!?! eric does need to work on his timing.

not sure where or how he will ask i'm just happy he didn't scream it out durring the road head! lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Entrepreneur

time for sookie to see what eric's life has been like for the last 7 years, and who he has spent that 7 years with. it is a good thing she has met and is getting along with sofie, sookie will need someone to talk to while eric is away and someone who has gone through this all before.