Reviews by Dymondgirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40, Mr and Mrs Jones, um, Smith, um, Taylor

LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING,  I'm being greedy but I STILL WANT MORE ,  ;-)  but I guess it all great things has to end some time :-( sooo sad to see it end . But the good  news is that I can now move on to yr other stories, again thanks a bunch for yr fab view of Taylor & Gail xo  

10 STARS ALL THE WAY XO

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

On the start of this book you said if you read fifty shades more than you should start at chapter 3 cause chapter 1 & 2 are repeats of the last two chapters of more... From what I've read that is not true, I went back to fifty more and these first two chapters are not the last two chapters of more... I think you should correct that in your heading as it was a bit confusing at first, thanks 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

On the start of this book you said if you read fifty shades more than you should start at chapter 3 cause chapter 1 & 2 are repeats of the last two chapters of more... From what I've read that is not true, I went back to fifty more and these first two chapters are not the last two chapters of more... I think you should correct that in your heading as it was a bit confusing at first, thanks 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You made a mistake in this chapter. In the first book when christian was shot. They removed his spleen.but in this chapter (22) in the second book when christian couldn't breathe the doctors checked him and said that he was lucky he didn't substain any injury to his spleen.....just thought you should know so u could correct it...thanks hope u have a great day

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: I love you forever

LOVED it, thanks for sharing with us 

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

I just read all three books and finally got to the end.. Amazing job  :-)  but I was just wondering is chapter 150 the end of the books or is there more to come.. I HOPE, PRAY, BEG THERE IS MORE .... PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Is this book done?  I read that you normally post weekly but it's been over a month since you posted and us fans would like to know if there is more coming or should we start looking for another book to read..  I  personally hope you are not done I could read yr writing for years and years and never get bored... Please reply so we all know what's going on please and thank you and thank you so much for these 3 books they have been wonderful xoxo 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Awwww thank you thank thank you for changing yr mind,  I was hoping so bad that they would take her,  I love it and I love yr wring,  or if all the stories I have read (and that's alot) yrs are the best,  I hope you never stop writing cause you are sooo talented,  you make me laugh,  you make me cry,  your just wonderful. Xoxo good job can't wait for more of yr stories xo 

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue: The Little Frog Part 2

 Sorry I have to agree with  FEY AGAPE on her comment about really disliking this particular story... . I like all your stories so far but this one didn't do anything for me at all, it was all over the place,and really  confusing at times and totally not C&A at all,  I know authors like to put a spin on things and you've done that with yr other stories but this was just way over the top and way to UNBELIEBABLE,  to the point of  being frustrating most of the time... 

Compared to this story keep up the good work on writing yr stories.. You are listed as one of my favourite authors on here xoxo 

Summary:

What happens in the months after Ana is released from the hospital after her confrontation with Jack Hyde?  A glimpse into the life of the Greys before and after Teddy's arrival.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Jose Rodriquez/Anastasia Steele
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90526 Read Count: 39613
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVED it PLEASE CONTINUE, I just stated and finished your story the last two days  but YOU LEFT Off SAYING THERE will BE MORE NEXT WEEK  and there's nothing there .. I checked when it was last updated and it said April... Ummm its October .. Fits this mean there will be no more from this story.. I really hope you update though cause yr story was brilliant  ;-)  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Stories of Christian and Ana Grey- Twenty Years Later.  No cheating.  All about the love.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156478 Read Count: 23187
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 46: The Aftermath - Chapter 46

I love when you do the French scenes  BUT  it would be really nice if you could give the translations (in brackets)  beside what he's saying so we understand right away, for me when I get to the end and read the translations it just doesn't fit cause I have to scroll back up to put that phrase in place so it kinda ruins it for me.. Compared to that I love these scenes /stories..... Great job, live yr writin,  keep eh coming and I'll always read em xoxo thanks 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 45: The High Road Less Traveled- Chapter 45

OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER.. KUDOS TO YOU FOR WRITING WHAT EVERYONE WANTED TO HEAR.. FINALLY,  FINALLY  SOMEONE WROTE ABOUT ANA TELLING THAT BITCH OFF, AND WINNING THIS TIME.. WTG,  LOVED IT LOVED, LOVED IT.. YAYYYY YOU MADE MY NIGHT LOL 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Swan Songs Part Three- The End -Chapter 58

Perfect ending, thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us xo I have you listed as one of my favourite authors on here so please keep in writing and I will always follow yr work .. Thank you xo 

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Figuring Things Out - Chapter 10

Loving it so far.. Good job xo 

Summary:

Christian is cheating! Anastasia is cheating! Gail is cheating! Everyone is cheating! This is a cheating fic! Warning! Do not read this story it is really bad but if you like cheating then this story is for you! one shot, preferably with a .50 caliber

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 608 Read Count: 414
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2013 Updated: 21 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HATED IT... WORSE STORY EVER!!!!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Ray Steele is a former Winston Cup winner struggling to finance and keep his NASCAR team running.  He has just got Steely, a very promising new driver.  He needs funding and sponsorship.

Enter Christian Grey, who take an interest in racing a business venture, however its the new driver that really peaks his interest.

AU, HEA, 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Sports
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57854 Read Count: 18458
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed half-star
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hated it. !  I thought it was horrible, even their hair color is wrong,  you could of kept hera  brunette and Kate blonde,  just everything about this story was so WRONG.. you ruined a perfectly beautiful love story and turned it into a joke called yr story.. Sorry just my opinion... If yr going to keep in line of the story of AG & CG at least follow the original characters... 0 rating from me :-( 

Off to read some realistic stories on TWCS about AG &  CG

 HAVE A GREAT DAY 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you 'hated it' and yes you are entitled to your opinion however the idea of  AU stories is to go outside of the box, make the characters what you want them to be, invent story lines that fit your creativity. Changing a characters hair colour or age or job title is part of your imagination. Hope you find the story you are looking for and you have a great day!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going for a swim and then walking into the wrong shower sets up for an interesting start for our favourite couple. One-shot.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5644 Read Count: 1844
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 10 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstar
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not Christian or  Ana at all,  maybe you should of made this story about Mia and Ethan ex. They met there and fall for each other to then find out they are related to Kate, Christian Ana etc... Loved the story(hot and steamy)  but it just wasnt fittng for Ana and Christian sorry that's just my opinion 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your opinion!