Reviews by Kochabilka
Summary: Past Featured Story

You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81720
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm really enjoying this story - will it be continued? Thank you.

Undecided Fate by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Banner by Ellie Wolf

Fear and uncertainty will drive humans to do the strangest things; like wander down a highway alone, talk to strangers and throw caution to the wind. When you don’t know any better, when you have no idea that there are things to be wary of, fate intervenes, even if it has no idea what to do with you.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40877 Read Count: 27478
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Enjoyed very much. Thank you for writing it!

You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55657
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

More please! Thank you!

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33911
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

If I recall correctly, it wasn't Bella that started this mess but Leah herself when she thought herself too good for the rez, so I say find her and kill her to put her out of her misery.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm glad that's taken care of. It was a mercy killing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Post BD. A vision foretelling the Volturis return, a secret life revealed opens up a whole new world to the Cullen's.  A prophecy made decades before. Dumbledore convinces the Cullen's to join him in Hogwarts, but is this magical sanctuary a real safe haven or an even bigger fire for them to fall into?

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157747 Read Count: 28786
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

If Bella was a witch and over the age of 17, why didn't she "stupefy" and "obliviate" the Port Angeles rapists and "incendio" James? Just saying . . .



Author's Response:

Good questions, my thinking is this. At that time her relationship with Edward was very new and hot and cold, in my AU while she knew what he was he didn't know her secret. With her magical abilities I would think she had an inkling that he would follow her, so the need to 'obliviated' the no_Maj/juggle would be rapists would inadvertently reveal her secret to Edward. I'm sure she would've kicked add had he not turned up. As for James, at that time she had an on going argument about being changed and I feel that in keeping to her character would have potentially used James to force that issue, again had Edward and the Cullens not arrived she would've no doubt kicked ass here too. Immature ? Yes but a lot of her 17 year old actions where.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Glad that went well!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

Good chapter! Moving things along!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

Another horcrux destroyed! :-)

I hope the dragon stays free!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

Oh, well, THAT happened, I was hoping they'd be able to somehow avoid it on this go-round (as they avoided Dumbledore's death). But alas, not.

It's nice that Molly know she has more family now. :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Secrets always come out.

I'm so glad Charlie and company got there to rescue the kids! :-)

I do so very much hope Tonks and Remus stay alive so they can enjoy their little family! But poor Snape, I have a feeling he'll still be a tragic hero :-(

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

Thank you for the explanation! :-)

 

BTW, in case you were wondering, Alexis (Theadosia57) recommended this story. I probably wouldn't have thought about reading it were it not for her. I'm glad she recommended it! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Visions and prophecy

I'm so glad Sirius didn't die! I hope he stays alive! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12– Revelations.

Should'a let the squid have her ;-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13– summer sun and an update from Charlie.

I'm glad it was Paul! That's hilarous! :-) I'm glad they sorted out the dogs and freed the imprints and that Charlie's going to not let the Alice thing go! :-) And good for Leah! ;-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 – First strike.

I love that Charlie's animagus form is a dragon! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

I was wondering about the ring - I'm glad they're going to sort that mess out! I'm glad Seth and Leah are settling in well :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Sempra

I hope Dumbledore really has learned his lesson and takes a vamp or two with him when hunting horcruxes in the future!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Fantastic chapter! The Witch Twins are actually witches - and good ones!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

I'm so glad Esme and Nessie got away! I hope Aberforth helps the gang!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

I'm glad they disabled the Vanishing Cabinet - that'll throw a wrench in their plans! :-)

 

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Now they don't have to annoy the Grey Lady to find the diadem! But they have to get the locket from toad face!

Lots of Harry Potter this weekend on Freeform!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 19 May 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 – The end is nigh!

Well, Dumbledore, Tonks and Moony lived, but Snape died, still sad.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 19 May 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Perfect! Just perfect! Ness in Gryffindor, Jacob and his line stripped permanently from the wolf!

Great story! Thank you for letting us read it! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

I do hope they rescue those poor kittens that Umbridge, I'm sure, has kidnapped and trapped her plates!

Nice of Newt to give Edward his swooping evil!

I'm sure the vamps will enjoy Isle Esme! :-)

Great chapter! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 05 May 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

Glad the Volturi are taken care of now! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 – This means war.

And so it begins . . . .

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Well, that sucks! I though Sirius had dodged the bullet when he made it past the Department of Mysteries. And poor Fred :-(

Griffin in Men In Black 3 said "But where there is death, there will always be death." It seems to be the case here. I guess Dumbledore, Remus and Tonks  will die too :-(

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I'm not feeling sorry for Jacob at all! Let him rot, I say! ;-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

Well, that worked out well! :-)

Vengeance by cathy29jes Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Traduction : Alice s'est rapprochée de Jasper pour se venger après qu'il ait tué son véritable compagnon. Alors que Jasper avait également rencontré sa compagne, Alice a accompli sa vengeance. Maintenant c'est au tour de Bella de se venger. Et elle sera impitoyable. Les Cullen vont payer pour avoir tué Jasper. AU. OOC. Jasper et Bella. L'histoire est traduite avec la permission de l'auteur.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49737 Read Count: 483
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2018 Updated: 06 Jul 2018
Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, c'est un vraiment bon! Je suis heureux que vous le traduisiez dans le français pour les speakers français! :-)
le PS - j'ai utilisé un programme de traduction pour traduire ma révision, je ne peux pas parler le français bien