WTH!! I can't understand y ppl show rosalie being a bitch n den edward has to go n apologoze... She was wrong n shouldn't get defensive even if edward was mouthing.. He was hurt partly due to her actions..  I think she should be more remorseful.. This is my opinion as a reader.

I hated it when Edward couldn't even break things up with Bella eben though wayeva she was demanding was wrong to some extent. The same Bella who applied to NYU because of such a loser. I mean c'mon u talk about forever n den wat u could not fight for the one u love in which u r half as wrong. I don't know i'll ever be able to trust a person who talk about love like he is some phd holder n den wat u don't give a shit. Who is to say he wont do samething again. Well its ur story n ur perception regarding this but i must say edward is an ASSHOLE

Hey dear author, 

I read the story n must say u did a really good job. What i most appreciate is that u didn't change the basic nature of characters. U depicted edward a person who was controlled by his past n even after confronted many times didn't change in a second. Loved the slow progress. There is one thing which i couldn't agree with u on the matter of edward and tanya. Rose adviced bella that it is unnecessary to get mad edward for the things he did coz  they broke up during that time. She is ryt but not in this circumstance. If they had a fight n it was finalized that r no lo ger together it could hv been justified. But in this case edward left no opportunity to prove bella he loved still he does things like that coz he witnessed jacob with her, it shows his marurity. Tell me if bella had broken up with him after this lie n then slept with or fooled around with jacob n still kept on lying again again no matter who gives the advice do u think edward would have forgiven her. I dont think so! N who is to say if they face the same circumstances n has stupid notions in his mind.. He wont commit the same mistake. I think the whole ordeal shouldnt hv been left unattended easily.. Bella hs the right to be pissed boty about lying n fooling around. Plz ignore typos. Hope to fet a reply from u soon.

Your reader :) 

It was really a good story. I liked how you showed all the characters. But there is one thing i always wonder. Bella got paid for her mistakes individually. She had to live in guilt, couldn't move in a relationship. But edward though he was miserable he good really good bargaining. He may had not moved forward emotionally. He did love tanya and had her company physically. I wish edward could suffer more... All in all it was good.