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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done. The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her. Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
With all respect, I'm afraid your story is mightily similar to rmcms5's 'The Perfect Wife'. Admittedly I've only read the first few chapters of this, but so far the similarities are many.
I have read quite a few reviews from your story, and it seems like the progression is the same as TPW as well. As TPW was one of the first stories on here, I'm assuming rmcms5 had her story first.
I don't mean to sound rude, and although it don't usually review as I'm never sure what to say, I didn't think it was fair that so many of her ideas have been used in this story.
Please don't give up writing, but do either ask permission to use someone's ideas, and credit them in your authors notes, or change the story.
Best wishes,
Candoid32
A pediatric oncology department is the last place you expect to find: the child you want to adopt, a childhood television star borne famous singer turned love of your life, a selfless guy and his polar opposite or see someone you become attached to die. This is a road that Dr. Edward Cullen finds himself on, how will it all unfold?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73863 Read Count: 33741
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Really liked this chapter, very emotional. I had to go on YouTube to find that song, really brings the chapter together, great choice. I may have cried a little! Carry on the great work, ladies.