Reviews by Larifari
Summary:

"I was born under unusual circumstances". Set in the cloudy town of Forks in 1986, this is the story of Isabella Swan a sixty year old woman in the body of a twenty year old and how her life began when the Cullens moved back into town.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Parody/Crackfic, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49075 Read Count: 4035
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2010 Updated: 27 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Found the story yesterday and have to say interesting. This whole aging backwards is a nice twist to the original Twilight plot, there Bella was described as extreme mature for her age, whereas you have a real old woman in a young body.

Hope Edward will finally man up and accept what he and Bella both want.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm working on the next chapter xD.

You should watch The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, in case you haven't. It's what the inspiration for this story was, and it's such a lovely film :)

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter! Hope Jake will come around, soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading and reviewing :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, the next one should be up in the coming week hopefully :)

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice chapter!

And your banner looks beautiful.



Author's Response:

thanks so much :D I'm just about to post the next one lol

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Dun, dun, dun.... Tanya's back!

Thank you, I was so happy that there was finally a new chapter to read. And now I'm yearning for the next, again... ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH

I'll post asap.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn, if you could bottle the red venom and sell it you would be a billionaire in no time.  ;)

Nice chapter, looking forward to the next.

 



Author's Response:

LOL. Yeah, I wish I could bottle that stuff.

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next chapter already.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

 ~Jells

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!

I absolutely enjoyed reading it. Am I weird because I think the chapter ending was hot? But if Edward weren't a vampire it would have been a bit gross, don't you think? And poor Bella, even her teacher wanted to jump her.

And I adored the interaction between Emmett an the little girl Annabel, it would be nice to see her again in a future chapter. And how Carlisle let the nasty nurse have it for her poor medical and social skills. Papa Vamp at his best. :)

The blood donation center scene raised some questions for me in regard to the vampire society. I mean there are vamps out there like the Cullens, the Swans and Ben who like/respect humans, but for some reason, there seems to be only the other kind working at the centers. And vampires are full of this whole dominant, alpha male, survival of the fittest crab, is it possible that all the weaker ones like to surround themselves with humans because they(the humans) are even weaker than they are? That would at least explain their reaction to the Cullen men.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it.

Nah, you're not weird for thinking the end scene was hot. I agree, it would have been totally gross if Edward were a human lapping away at Bella. lmao

Annabel will be back. =)

As for bad vamps working at blood donation centers, yes, most vamp are mean, cruel anti- human. But there are some nice ones out there like you mentioned. However, I've only covered one donation center so far. But there are nice vamps at some of blood banks, just haven't mentioned them yet.

The Cullen men are quite intimidating. They're taller, fiercer, and they radiate this confidence. They can be quite menacing when they walk in. And most know the legend of the Ultimate Vamp. It's survival of the fittest. The strongest are feared and most respected, but of course you have jerk vamps like Mike Netwon who didn't give a crap for the most part. Other vamps can sense who is strong or who is weaker. But some like a good ol' challenge like James. lol

Thanks again,

Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Nice.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

Hot chapter! I really want to know what Bella dreamed at the end that shocked Edward so.

And I hope they (the Cullens) will teach the creepy guys from her weekend a lesson.

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

Good chapter!

I'm happy that they took care of all these creepy guys from Bella's weekend. They deserved it.

And Charlie was killed by vampires?!? Should Bella not realize that Edward belongs to the same species or does she only subconsciously remember the attack?

And what the heck are Esme, Carmen and Tanya trying to accomplish at the end of the chapter?

The Fence by Elvirina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Kenna is incarcerated and trying to survive the harsh streets roamed by rapist and vampires. It is a hard life and when she loses her friend Jayson, she suddenly finds herself in the midst of danger. She is trapped in a vampire layer. Living amongst the vampires she discovers the truth about the monsters and having feelings she deemed impossible.
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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19156 Read Count: 395
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that's a really intense first chapter.

I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Thanks Larifari, I appreciate your comment. I promise you, it wasn't comfortable to write either. Nice to have a rating. LOL Have a great day

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Jayson. At least the savages who killed him are dead too.

And we finally know the name of the polite vampire.^^

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: LOL yeah, you got to meet the 'polite fucking vampire'. I promise you will see much more of him. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. See you for next chapter

Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really enjoyed reading your story. Although I'm a bit sad that it is so short. I think the world you created has great potential for more.

That vampires were created by science is an interesting twist, I think I have seen something like that before in a movie, too bad that I don't remember the title.

I simply loved that Kenna named her baby after her dead friend and how you described Maya's reactions to the baby was quite touching in a sad way. The poor woman. At least she has Alex now.

Good luck for your next stories!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. Yeah I heard before that it is sad it is so short. But it was one of the critirias for writing for the challenge, max 20.000 words and mine was 19.500 or something. I wish you remembered the title of the movie, as I would like to see that twist on this genre of bloodsuckers. I was a little worried people would think my take on Maya was delusional, especially the moment where she gets confused and tries to feed the baby. but in my world, that is something a traumatized woman might get confused and actually do in my world. But it was rather awkward and uncomfortable to write. Thanks for reading, I have posted the story on my blog, along with a some of my other writing. I hope you will check it out. www.thumannlegend.blogspot.com. Nelly

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Larifari Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Great story!

I really enjoyed reading it.