Reviews by Sumfun
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Loved the chapter! Look forward to more!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Great chapter! I am so proud to have know the strories of such talented and ambitious ladies!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

I am in the mood the a good story! This is just what I ordered!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

Good chapter! I find your writing delicious!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

Great chapter! I love the sheep in wolf's clothing aspect of edward. You know, the whole tattooed bad boy on the outside and creamy softy on the inside! ha!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  You "creamy softy on the inside" comment reminded me of Dr. Horrible's Sing-A-Long Blog.  It's an awesome little series, if you've never seen it.  :D

Thanks for all the reviews!  I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!!!  :D :D :D

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

Ha! Edward is going to get diced by daddy!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

That was yummy!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

Shame on Charlie!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

I really enjoyed Edward getting a little cocky with the Blacks and Charlie! The whole bath scene . . . wow, I really need a cold shower!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

Man, what a dad! I usually like Charlie, but this Charlie is a selfish, stalker, crazy dad!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

Man, almighty! Bella put Charlie in his place! Wow!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.

Good chapter! You had me scared with The End!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

Good Chapter!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

You are wonderful and amazing and so, good at writing drool worthy lemons!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

Good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next? I am starting to feel sorry for Charlie. Should I ?

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

Okay. . . not feeling sorry for Charlie anymore! The lemon was great! The end of this chapter has me reeling!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

Wow! You have thrown me down a path of sadness and hope with this chapter! I like that you threw a little something in to liven the plot!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

Loved the chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee

Loved the chapter! Bella is nuts though! It is a different side of Bella . . . very original!



Author's Response:

Thanks again! You've done a wonderful job reviewing me! I love you for that! I hope you'll review my stories in the future!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken

Can't wait to keep reading! Thank you for sharing this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your support so far! <muah>

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home

I love Alice's insult! I am thinking that Edward is a doctor! Ha!



Author's Response:

Alice didn't mean to insult Edward... just calling it like she sees it!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with the story!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out

I am very happy with the story so far! I can't wait for the juicy stuff!



Author's Response:

It's been posted, so read up! Thanks again for all the reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Normal Girl

That is so sad!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks for your support with reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Flashbacks

That is so sweet!



Author's Response:

I like Edward's total and complete care for Bella in the books. I carried it over here.

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks

Great chapter! I am a little bugged out about Bella refering to the number of dates she has been on the Edward! It drives me nuts. Who does that? Anyways, I am going to keep reading!



Author's Response:

She's a little OCD. Number count!! <ha ha>

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella's Story

Wow! A lot of sadness . . . I hope more chapters will bring some relief!



Author's Response:

There has to be a history.... had to do it.

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed

Good Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you :^*

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer

Ha! Bella, Bella, Bella, to be so innocent!



Author's Response:

It was hard writing this innocent when I'm a complete perv myself!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay

Bella seems to be doing a better job with the anxiety! I hope she keeps it up!



Author's Response:

Anxiety comes and goes. We'll see!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble

Wow! That was just crazy! I think they are nuts. They were already naked? Why not? HA!



Author's Response:

Devious, are we, dearie? >:D

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Girl Talk

Ha ! I love me some girls night too!



Author's Response:

Yeah, gotta recharge!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella's Song

That was so sweet!



Author's Response:

I was stealing bits of the plot from the books there... thanks, though!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!

Good chapter! I am glad to hear that Bella is looking better!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!

Good chapter! I am glad to hear that Bella is looking better!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :^*

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide

Ha! Alice is a big horn dog! Cracks me up!



Author's Response:

Me too! I like Alice to be more intregal than just dressing Bella for a special occassion and just fading to the background. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother

That was a delicious chapter!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is

Another great chapter! I thought that she was starting to look healthier! Kind of disappointed that she isn't.

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Longest Night

Edward! What a 5 second man! Come on you ruined my fun! Ha!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal

Ha! That just cracks me up!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Our Holiday

Rosalie is a witch! Screw hormones!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Making Plans

I am getting reading for some angst! I know it's coming . . . soon.

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare

Hmm! Wonder what kind of proposal? Wink!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Surprises

I feel so sad . . . this chapter i just so stressing!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Nightmare

That is so terrifying! I didn't think it was at all graphic, but to have that happend to a child!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Sumfun Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great story! I can't wait for more!