Maybe this is a weird statement, but I kind a feel that in the effort to make everything politically correct that perhaps the concept of this lifestyle (DD) is forgotten. Don't get me wrong I really love this story and you are writing it wonderfully. 

I'm just confused on a few things. From Rose/ Alice's explanation it seems like Edward has very little to say in the relationship. He really only enforces rules they have picked out and only with consequences that they have chose. In some ways I think that sounds great but in others not so much. Does he have the right to implement a rule by himself? And do they give him a list of consequences he can choose from or do they select their own consequence from the list that they deem appropriate?

The reason I ask is because I know that as people we struggle seeing our own shortcomings and when we do it is not likely that we would choose to implement a rule to contend with our shortcomings.

And as I read this I thought of what rule Bella would be likely to break. I think for Bella she seems like a self-neglecter or someone who would put herself at risk. Which makes me think that she is not going to be able to formulate her own rules about what she should or shouldn't do, or at least not without help.

  All in all I want to thank you for such a wonderful story; it is truly a joy to read.  I cannot wait to read, how Bella begins to incorporate these things into her life. It will be interesting to see if Edward will slowly implement the changes or if something will just trigger it like Bella breaking a rule.

Thanks again

Wait just one second where is the chappie.... : ) I'm sure you're getting it up soon.

I really am enjoying it. Thanks for making Monday a little bit better.