Reviews by hooker81
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: hooker81 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

First I love the story!

Wow I really don't know how woman share a husband. There is no way I could ever do that. It would be so hard. They must either be really strong woman or have really low self esteem??

The one thing that bothered me and seemed disprespectful was when Edward fingered Alice with Bella in the room. At the time Bella was not in a relationship/wife/girlfriend with Edward and he did something private with her in the room. It seemed really skanky.



Author's Response:

I can't even imagine how strong you would have to be to share. I could never do it. But if it was Edward I might try...

I can promise you that Bella didn't see that part. Edward was standing behind Alice and she was quite... Sorry it came off skanky.....That wasn't my intention. He was just giving ALice the kind of aftercare she needed.

Reviewer: hooker81 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

I'm really glad Alice is putting her feelings out there. She is right though.

In Roses mind is Alice only there to have Edwards kids?? Will the kids stay in Alices room or will Rose take over that too? Will Rose think she is the one to make all the decisions for the children.

Not to step on toes but I honestly don't think roses childhood was so horrible that she can get away with treating everone like that?! I think Bellas is just as bad but she does not act so self centered.  For Rose to pull Edward away from Alice when she needed him for one was horrible of her. Even her phone call with her sisters how she said she was going to talk Bella out of being with Edward. After everything Edward has done for Rose and she is pulling this just shows how selfish she is!



Author's Response:

If kids enter the family I'm sure they would stay with their birth mother.... I think.... It hasn't happened yet so it's hard to say what would happen.... lol

Different people deal with things differently. Rose thinks that she deserves to be treated "better" then others to make up for what happened to her. But really she is just so insecure that she has to make others feel worse about themself so she can feel better about herself. It's a childish attitude that she is going to have to deal with. While Bella thinks that she almost "deserves" what happened to her because she must of done something wrong in a past life ans this is her punishment.

 

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29924
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: hooker81 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG this really has to be the funnest chapter of ANY story I've have read online. I was cracking up the whole time.. What got to me the most was this "They are dancing and flopping their bits and pieces all over the place while chanting. I won't lie I'm terrified"

 

Holy shit that was a riot :)

I really loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) LOL yea my Mom calls private parts bits and pieces so I should have probably credited her for that ;0) Glad you liked it.

 


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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.