Reviews by lifemoveson
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625363
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lifemoveson Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

this chapter made me cry. its so sad how sick carlise is. emmet is going to be a amazing father to his son. ive read the whole story so i no there haveing a boy. i cant wait to read more and im sure that emmet will never take rose's love away from THERE child. great work, this story realy is amazing

Reviewer: lifemoveson Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

how many more chapters!!!!

Reviewer: lifemoveson Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

hey mic,

i just wanted to tell you im in love with this story. i lost my father young so seeing carlise so evil is kinda hard for me. i was kinda hoping he wake up and love esme and they be happy and that be the happy ending but  i can tell that is not going to happen. i do have some question though.

1. what is carlise had a daughter, would esme send her off and how would her brothers react.

2. and what is tehre wrong, what if rose's baby is a girl

once again, i love this story. it was made me cry and my heart had really gone out to the charters. keep up the amzing work and i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.

1 - If Carlisle & Esme had a daughter she would have been psychologically abused from birth by Carlisle to fit into his 'mold' of woman.  She never would have stood a chance.

2 - As for Rose's baby, they are having a boy.  It took Rose's pregnancy for Emmett to come out of his abusive behavior. He's still a male chauvenist to a point as you can't change 100%, but he's mellowed out and continues to try for Rose.

Reviewer: lifemoveson Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

mic,

this story is probly the most amzing fan fiction i have ever read. it might even be beter then some of the books i have read. my heart really did hurt for these charters and it is still hard to go back and reread things beacuse they are so painfull. that is what makes this an incerable story. you were able to take chaters that were already writen and change them but still keep them the same. would i have loved for carlise to wake up and love esme like renee yes, i would have. but thats not him. he did not see anyhting wrong in anything that he was doing. though out all this pain and angust you made a point and you did one hell of a job doing it. you showed a mothers love is more powerful then anything. that no matter waht the evils, women or people for that matter can over come everthing. i love this story. every minutie of it. it made me cry SOOO much and my heart ache for somthing that was not even real. being a writer myself, before i even read this sotry i had an idea in my mind about somthing like this (no im not going to copying this that is mean) but diffent at the same time. i can only hope that my stroy can compare to yours. you relly should publish this, its better then some books i read. i love this and im sad it is coming to an end but happy for every one invole. thank you mic for creating this. its pure magic. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words.  I'm glad you like the story.  I have plans to publish TPW later this year.  It's why I'm pushing to finish the story this month. 

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307438
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: lifemoveson Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 77

I'm having a hard time pitcureing Jasper's hands, I dont understand why he can't use them. Do you have a picture of what you had in mind when you were writing?