Reviews by Magos186
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi. Told you I was going to check out some of your stuff. I really really try to avoid wips because I have so many on alert between fanfiction, twilighted, and now here too, but the summary was just too intriguing and I couldn't pass up reading this. I absolutely love it so far. This story is amazing. And Noel is adorable! I like that you made Victoria a nice character and that you're not letting Rosalie get away with her bitchyness. I'm sure we'll eventually find out what her problem is though.
I saw on your blog (while looking for the bedroom pics) that you lost a lot of new chapters for your stories. I hear you. I have one story I have been blocked on for a while but one night the ending came to me. I wrote it out and it was absolutely amazing and then my computer crashed and I lost it. Heartbreaking when that happens. So take your time with the sequel to Tempting Bella. You left the characters in a good place (although I would have liked an explanation on how the twins came about). As for this story, it is truly amazing and I will be patiently waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I love indepth ones, they really let you know that the reader cares about what they just read. And I'm so glad you like TB too, and don't worry I will reveal the secret of the twins, if I don't get a sequel done I will at least do a few more outtakes.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ooooooo I do wanna know what happens. Excellent chapter. I feel really bad for Emmett though. I just wanna cuddle the poor guy. I know Rose said her secret would wreck them both but it can't be worse than him getting drunk and her being an uberbitch. She just needs to fess up.
HOORAY for phil being dead. I suppose its too much to ask for renee to be shanked...that'd be awesome.
Also, I love your Bella/Edward moments. Absolutely adorable. This story totally rocks and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter. I loved it. I thought it was so adorable how Bella got all Mama Bear towards drunk Emmett. And when he said he loved her, when Charlie kissed her, her reactions were so sweet. I'm glad she's finally accepting her father and brother as family that loves her. I feel bad for her regarding Alice though. That girl needs some mellowing out. I have a question though. You said Alice was in the A-K homeroom, which makes sense cause she's a Cullen, but why wasn't Edward in Alice's homeroom? And why wasn't Bella in a homeroom with Emmett? Bella and Emmett are both Swans so wouldn't it make sense for them to have homeroom together? Or are the homerooms seperated into genders?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Homerooms seperated by grade level, at least thats how it was in my school. Em and Edward are seniors, Bella and Alice Sophmores :0)

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Excellent chapter. when you had them ask bella for an example, i totally thought it was going to be her explaining the stab wound carlisle found way back earlier. With the one you revealed, I'm surprised Emmett didn't go over and crush the evil bitch's head in his massive hands. I've always hated Renee and the reneesme thing always pissed me off. I love when people vilify her cause she fits that role perfectly. I am sad though that there is no torturing of her involved in her sentence. Hopefully she'll get tortured in jail.

I enjoyed this chapter immensly, even though Alice and her color-coordination thing is slightly irritating. I love how the guys confronted Edward though and that the only way Em agreed was if he could watch them talk to the dads. HAHA. that's going to be priceless. I can't wait.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

aww. absolutely adorable ending. I love Bella and Edward SO much here. Kinda wanted to smack alice though. I mean just cause she's all annoyed the Emmett is trying to be happy with someone else doesn't mean she has to be a bitch. Ugh! As for Rose though, totally have my own theories as to what happened so I'm curious to see it they turn out right.

CONGRATULATIONS on your baby! I wish you lots of happiness (and luck. I remember how tired my sister was those first few months.) I do love this story, but you didn't have an evil cliff hanger so I can say this without pain...focus more on yourself and your baby. Posting chapters should definitely take the back seat. I for one, will be ready to read more no matter how long it takes you to get back to this story.

Summary:

Edward cheated. Bella left – but what happens when she has no more money to live on and a baby to look forward to? She becomes Roxy Jones – legal and official prostiture at the Moonlite Bunny Ranch.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48374 Read Count: 12415
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Devil Wouldn't Recognize You

I'm not sure yet, but I'm definitely curious to know what happens, so you win in that you got me hooked. BTW, just a suggestion, but I don't speak spanish and I'm curious to know what Bella and Enrique were saying to eachother. You might want to consider putting the translation in your end notes.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Incomplete

I had one theory and one theory only when Bella said Jessica gave her the picture. That theory was that the picture was photoshopped. NICE! I KNEW it wasn't real! Have you mentioned Edward's job before though cause I'm a little confused. You mentioned Carlisle's job, but did you say Edward's? Why would the paparazzi care if he's just a business man?

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Mine Again

interesting. Interesting ending. cool that they moved though. this was a pretty decent story.

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tempt

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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35965
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

This story was AWESOME! I so TOTALLY loved it! It was just--like--ugh I have no words to describe how awesomely awesome this story was! It was funny and not as angsty as I expected (thank you for not overdoing on the angst). This was just plain amazing and I am totally checking you out tomorrow to see what else you've written. Or ya know, later today cause it's like 3am.

EXCELLENT Job! Loved it loved it LOVED it!

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

Also, I wasn't going to read this story (I've been staying away from the AH stories lately) but I do love me some Jensen and your banner...you can totally thank your half-naked Jensen for getting me to read this story. Damn that man is yummy! So yes, I blame your banner for getting me to read this, but I am so SO happy that I did because it was absolutely amazing! Loved every single bit of it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

whacw

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

I've been up literally all night (it's 5:30 am) reading this story. It was absolutely amazing and also completely heartbreaking at parts, but this has got to be one of the, if not THE best Bella/Carlisle fic I've ever read (and I've read a bunch as I love the pairing).  Wonderful plot, spectacular writing (even if I did want to whack Alice upside the head with a heavy object at several different parts)...This was just an amazingly beautiful story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: As Time Goes By

This story was really cool and awesome. I was very sad for Beth when she first phased, but I liked what you did. I've read another story where Bella married a wolf...don't remember if it was Jake or another one...anyways, they had twins but were still very close to the Cullens and cause the Cullens were always spending time with them, the twins phased when they were toddlers, but they didn't grow like you had Beth. They were still kids when they phased back to human from puppy form. So it was sad that Beth is essentially only like 2 when she meets her imprint and that she lost her childhood, but I liked that you aged her the way you did.

This was a crazy unique, crazy good story. And I love that he built her a hobbit house. So adorable! (but hey the one they did for the movie looked amazing! I'd live there)



Author's Response:

Wow...I'm glad you liked it that much.  I had a lot of fun writing this story so I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Summary:

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Thanks to Twihard Fics for the banner.

Edward Cullen is a man of routine. When a homeless girl knocks that routine off track, Edward discovers there is more to life.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14418 Read Count: 1992
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Peanut Butter Sandwich Man

this was slightly odd but really cool at the same time. I enjoyed it a lot. You did a good job. Total surprise what he was doing with the sandwhiches at the end. I never would have guessed that but it was adorable.



Author's Response:

Thank you, many have described me the same way, slightly off but really cool. LOL.

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This was a lovely little story and I'm glad I read it. I really enjoyed it.