Reviews by hnwhitlock2000
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Reunited

Kate really needs to get over herself!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she really thinks she is all that.  Thankfully, C&B show her that her presence is not required. ;)

Thanks for the review and for sticking with the story. <3

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

Hell yea he is!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Tee hee.  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Woohoo!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Happy Birthday!!! I'd give you our dear Dr. if I could (but, you'd have to send him to me on 12-24) Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Carlisle on a time share...I love it.  Our b-days are six months apart.  Six months to play...six months to recover.  It could work. ;)

Thanks for the review and if you would like to vote for AVitD for the Avant Garde Awards, here is the link.

https://spreadsheets.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?formkey=dElVTUw0Sk5HUUpLYjR2VXpEdTE1SHc6MQ&theme=0AX42CRMsmRFbUy0yMjdiMTQ4Yi0zZjUwLTQ5NTUtOGVmNC05ODNlZTUxYTViYzA&ifq

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

How sweet! A good fuck is always good!!!



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am and two is even better!!!  Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

Uh oh!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

I promise not to make you wait long.  Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Well done!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  I'm glad you liked it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Carlisle is so sweet! I wish I had one...



Author's Response:

Don't we all?  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hon!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

I want some of that too...



Author's Response:

No kidding, right?  LOL.  Thanks for hanging in there with me. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope she accepts their help and stays with them.

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So far so good!