Well, another great chapter.  Poor Aro.  Edward beat the crap out of him.  How is Aro  suppose to follow up on every guy that's checking Bella out.  When he got the call from MC, he was there in minutes to clean up.   I think Edward's being a little too hard on him.  So it sounds like this is being traced back to the Russians Edward was messing with in S. Carolina.  Marcus warned him about messing with them.  He's going to be pissed.  Good going!

I gotta say, this story is not only awesome but brilliant as well.   I love stories about the Mafia.  Maybe because I'm part Italian?  I don't know.  So, Bella killed the guy from Eclipse that was staring at her?   Is this someone who's got a hard on for Edward or someone who wants Bella out of the picture?  Maybe somebody who doesn't like the fact that her dad is in law enforcement?  I didn't quite understand.  Did this incident happen on the boardwalk or in their rooms?  If so, what the hell were they doing on the boardwalk at night?   And Edward crying?  Wow!  I wonder how many Capo's cry?  He's not so tough, huh.   I love that he's so crazy over Bella.  I see a storyline where Edward's going to leave Bella for her own safety.   Somewhat like New Moon.  I hope not.  Bella's a tough chick and can hold her own.  But, weren't there two thugs?  Did the second guy see Bella kill his partner, buddy, whatever?  This is really exciting.  And nerve wracking.  Gotta read more.  Great job!

I can't stop reading this story.  The wedding should be interesting but I'm really excited about what he has planned for Sunday.  I wonder what kind of job he'll offer her.  I wouldn't be surprised if he called her later to see if she's home or out with "one of the finest".   It did sound like he may be a bit jealous.  Great story!

Another fun filled chapter.  What is up with Carlisle?  Does he love Esme or not?  When he cornered Bella at the club, he wanted to do more than just talk.  As loaded as he was, I think he would have forced himself on Bella.  He's always had a thing for her.  If he wanted to screw around, he should have stayed single.   Maybe he's addicted to sex.  Whatever, he needs help.  And I can't believe the temper Edward has.  He could have killed him.  I'm sure he really doesn't want to kill his brother, but one of these days he may just do that. 

I wonder why Bella is so curious about Aro's junk?  Hmmm?

Sorry, but I think there's something strange about Bella and Jasper's relationship. Not so much Bella but Jasper acts like a jealous boyfriend sometimes.  I know brothers and sisters love each other but c'mon.  He centers his life around her.  And does Bella not see that Jasper may have his life on hold for her?  It seems like the girls he picks to date are doomed for any kind of relationship.  Sort of like Edward, getting what he needs and then dismissing them with the only difference being that Edward's brutal about it and Jasper's more kind.   Like letting Bella do it for him.  It's all the same, use them and then lose them.  I'm surprised Bella isn't more concerned about it.  It's like their joined at the hip and that's not a healthy relationship.  I guess I'll find out later what their deal is.

Edward's never going to be in Jasper's good graces until he does away with the whores.  He needs to prove to Jasper and himself that he can be worthy of Bella.  Maybe try abstinence for a while, Edward-it couldn't hurt.  I'm curious, would he still be whoring around if he and Bella were in a relationship because it seems to me that's who he is.  Everyone knows all the whores drop to their knees for him.  That's no accomplishment Edward, most whores will.  Has he ever dated a decent girl?  Bella's now heard and seen how Edward is so maybe he should start worrying that she'll run the other way.  Knowing how innocent she is, she may be frightenend by these acts because she doesn't understand them.  Then again, being friends w/Rose should be an education in itself so nothing should shock her.  But even Rose claims that Edward's a whore so can Bella ever ever trust him?  If he wants Bella bad enough, he's going to have to do the impossible.  He definitely needs a plan.  Great story.

I don't want to believe this but, could Edward moving in next door be a plan to get close to Bella and get evidence on her?  Even if the only thing connecting her to the murders would be that Paul was her ex-boyfriend, which is a very weak suspicion.  Maybe this is why Jasper doesn't like Edward.  I hope the house isn't bugged or that Edward didn't hear any of their conversation.  And I really hope that Edward is clueless about Bella.  I just knew Charlie was going to dig up the evidence.  Great chapter!

I absolutely love your story.  I never pictured Edward's parents as hippies but you did just that and the way you described them, too funny.  I had to laugh.  I've haven't read any other story depicting them as hippies.  That was a cute twist.  It's so funny, the Cullen's are hippies and Charlie's a police chief.  Wow, could they be any more opposite?  I wonder if Charlie ever arrested Esme or Carlisle smoking doobies back in the day?  Ha!

Great story.

I wish for all of us to be that happy.  This was a beautiful story.  I loved the ending but nearly cried, thinking of how little Lainie brought them together.  Sometimes when you're at your lowest is when your new beginning is on the near horizon.  That's why they say, "Never give up".  Thank you for sharing your talent with us.  Take care!

Wow!!!!!   What a lucky girl.

 I wasn't expecting that.  I hope it wasn't Jasper or Edward that did this.  Poor Alice!  Bad enough that her husband loved her best friend resulting in her losing her best friend but, the worst yet was losing her baby.  How sad and lonesome she must have felt.  Yet Bella, who killed several people including her mother, walks away free as a bird w/custody of her sister Aly and the love of her life, Edward.  She's one lucky girl that the Chief of Police, a Police Detective and a FBI agent all love her and will protect her.  Nevertheless, she's still mentally impaired and needs help because who knows what might set her off in the future.  Hmmm!  Be careful Edward.

I hope you continue this story.  It's too good not to.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.  Angel

Phil, Stephen and Edward/Anthony! Wow, how lucky can a girl get. Yet, the one she dreams of and desires is the one she doesn't even know.  Or, at least she doesn't think she knows.  So the s--t is going to hit the fan you say. Can't wait. With Phil and Stephen lurking around her, he's going to have to make a move soon or take a chance on losing her. Bring it on!