Reviews by Vtweetymccn
Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84373
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Confessions

Thank you for brightening up our day during our time of sadness. 

Mid Craigo would have been here we would have got a sermon about brothers or brotherhood as he would call it and then us women get him with there are women here too!!!! Lol

KEEP WRITING ✍️ & HAPPY EASTER!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

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Date: 06 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

So was the Swan family in a cult like compound???

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒❀️πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future

Haha Bella gets a roused being called “little girl”.

Ok so has anyone heard from Charlie????

We have missed you Clo but we also have voted for you too in the Twi Fic Awards!!!! We are so happy you have made it to round 2.

KEEP WRITING ✍️!!!!🚒❀️πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

Oooohhhh wonder what’s going to happen that they don’t end up together???  He will probably end up with Kate.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 ~ Lost and Found

Why do I have to be the dumb nurse??? I’m not a nurse I’m a skilled Lieutenant on the fire squad and EMT and swift water. Lol πŸ˜‚ Now the squad is going around calling me dumb nurse.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN 👻 πŸŽƒπŸ§›‍♂️ & KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Can they trust Detective Johnson???            KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

He has a long road ahead of him!!! Poor Edward

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Remember the body count and dental records even in a cult they have dental records!!! So glad your muse is back we have missed you!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Angela is badass!!! Sorry we haven't reviewed in awhile but we got no alerts that you had updated.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑 Happy Halloween πŸŽƒ 👻

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Ok we are all caught up sorry it's late but I never got alerts on Facebook!!!

So we are wondering when Aro will make his appearance.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑 & HAPPY THANKSGIVING πŸ¦ƒ 

Summary:

Banner

 

Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2824
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

So good!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Summary:

Edward Cullen and Charlie Swan have been best friends all their lives.  However, that may all change when Edward starts having feelings for Charlie’s daughter, who is sixteen years younger than Edward.  Sometimes, age is only a number.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2842 Read Count: 3127
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2018 Updated: 26 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I swear I think some of the crew just jeez in there pants!!! Lol

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Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39692
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Silence that song has a memory for all of us.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Let’s see if Bella can put the pieces together. How long will it take her to see the day Edwards wife passed away she got a new heart???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be a Bella/Edward story right??? 

We are all organ donors and so was Lt. Craigo!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sorry it’s late but we went on a call after we read it. 

Luck EMT I would’ve helped Carlise with Bella. Lol 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Get it Edward. Be a gentleman!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR & KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aw cock blocked by Esme!!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑 & HAPPY NEW YEAR πŸŽ†

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Are they going to find out that Bella has Maggie's heart???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Papa Carlisle is in trouble!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Go get him Bella!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Summary:

All Tied up in Love

You never know where you might find that person who is everything you need or desire.  E/B.  HEA

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3488 Read Count: 4907
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2018 Updated: 01 Jul 2018
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It’s great to see Edward as a submissive and Bella a Dominatrix!!!

So good!!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒🚑πŸ”₯

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29386
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

First Bella you don't choose cookie dough over mint chocolate chip or rockie road!!! 

Ok so who is the firebug??? Who were the candidates when Charlie became chief??? Whoever were the candidates were one is the firebug and one is died because of this fire that just happened!!! That's what we think. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

First Bella you don't choose cookie dough over mint chocolate chip or rockie road!!! 

Ok so who is the firebug??? Who were the candidates when Charlie became chief??? Whoever were the candidates were one is the firebug and one is died because of this fire that just happened!!! That's what we think. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10154
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fate has got a plan!!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah Cupid do what Fate said and start letting those arrows fly. With Cupid in the picture shouldn’t this be a Valentine’s Day kind of fic?? KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑 & MERRY CHRISTMAS πŸŽ„ 🎅

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65970
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 May 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two - A New Leader

We're wondering if Aro had his sister killed???? KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸš‘πŸ”₯ 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

What about Charlie?? We wonder did he ever find out about Renee and did he get with that woman that made Bella's dress??

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 July 18, 2017

HAPPY ST. PATRICK'S DAY ☘️

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three - Justice Finally Served

What will happen to James and his family??? KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑 HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Έ

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

So Bella is Edward favorite author!!! How is he going to protect her??? We are thinking about that. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

Sorry my blood pressure was up last night and I had a migraine. That ring is gorgeous  I love ❀️ it. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The boys here said it’s got action the love it!!! Expand please!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Man when Aro wipes out a family he really wipes them out. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

We can't wait to read about how Alice is going to take it. See if her and Bella get into a cat fight!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸš‘πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

How did he know about Bella???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑



Author's Response:

He has been following her and has read all her books. She is his favorite author. 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

How does Edward know about his grandfather???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Why does Alice not like Bella but Rose does?? That is weird. Sorry it's late but had to read during Super Bowl commercials. Lol πŸ˜‚ 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

Aw you know we hate cliffs!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

Yes!!! Yes!!! Yes!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Betcha Alice isn't going to like the news of them getting married!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

You made our Champlain blush. Lol 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™βœοΈπŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Love is in the Air

Yeah we think Edward knows what Ben was thinking about Angela!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Not so hidden

So now momma is going to get some loving too!!! Lol πŸ˜‚ 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑 & HAPPY EASTER 🐰 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Who is Renee Dwyer?

Could Renee be Aro step sister??

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑 & STAY SAFE

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

Does Charlie know anything about Renee and her family???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸš‘πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Time For a Wedding

What a family reunion it will be!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Summary:

Madam President

 

Summary:  Bella Marie Swan, the previous first daughter of the United States is elected as the first female President. After her inauguration, she moves in the White House and begins the job that she was elected to do. It had been a hard-fought election, with her opponent attacking her personally for being a woman and not being married. However, in the end, the people of the country spoke with their votes. The first day on the job she was introduced to her security team and was shocked to see the leader was her high school sweetheart, Edward Cullen.

 

Edward Cullen had worked hard and up through the ranks to become the leader of USSS for the POTUS. Excited to start his new position for the upcoming President, until she won. The only woman he had ever loved.

 

Across the globe, an old foe of the United States has decided it is time to cripple their enemy before launching an all-out offensive. Sometimes the biggest killer is those that can not be seen by the naked eye.

 

Will Edward be able to keep his feelings hidden or will in the face of death, he will tell her? 

 

Action/Romance and of course a HEA!!! HeartforTwilight  #BabiesattheBorder #MadamPresident 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15900 Read Count: 7021
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2020 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death

Really the Super Bowl that's just not right especially if the Saints are playing in it. Lol πŸ˜‚ 

HAPPY ST. PATRICK'S DAY ☘️ & KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑🦠

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Woohoo Bella is a Democrat!!! Sorry I am a loyal democrat even though some of the crew is republican and independent that doesn't get in the way of our job. Ok so what happened between Edward and Bella???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸš‘πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball

Snowshoe West Virginia baby!!! Yes!!! Been there done that. Ok since Edward was in the Marines why didn't Bella dance with him at the military ball???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68147
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

What is he going to do about Irina???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody

Did Edward not ask Royce what happened that night??? KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš‘πŸ”₯🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire

Your not the only one that needs a cold shower big mistake reading this chapter on fire meeting night. You also gave the guys a new word WAP they are trying to find ways of using it. Lol!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises

Yes we do like a captain mafia man!!! But he has some making up to do!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine ~ Normal Blood Pressure

Heck yeah I'm a nurse in this story!!! Thank you!!! Ok so we talk about what would be said throughout this walk they are taking. Bella will probably thank him for paying her Hospital bills but Edward will probably want her to move in with him.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure

No we didn't bet on Alice cause it's been Rose family that has been helping Bella more than Alice, so we thought that it would be Rose!! And I didn't get to deliver baby #9 & 10!!!! 😞 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Wait until they find out that they live in the same place!!! And we figure Esme will have a few choice words for her son and she will tell Mr. Hale and he will tell Bella. Now we can't wait for the next chapter keeping us in suspense. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Boom!!! She has an Irish temper, she just maybe Irish!!!! Wonder what Esme will think about what just happened???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

You can hide at the station we'll protect you!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

Ok so we maybe morbid but we're wondering what Charlie and Renee did to her while she was there???? HAPPY EASTER!!! πŸ‡πŸ£πŸ° 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Wonder if Edward has a feeling that Royce is up to something with Elezar that's why he put Mark with Bella instead of him???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

He's not your Edward, Irina and the will stay married!!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Wondering if Eleazar will get Charlie involved too!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Royce is the mole. Betcha

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Can't wait to see what Edward does to get Bella!!! Make him work for it!!! Also can wait to see what Rose and Alice have to say to Edward!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

Got to watch out for those preacher kids!!! πŸ˜‚ Especially girls!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Oh Tony you got some explaining to do!!! Lol πŸ˜‚ KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

He didn't tell his mother about Bella while they were waiting for Carlisle to get out of surgery!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Awww meeting future mother-in-law!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119100
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Sorry being late but we had to get ready for 9/11 parades yesterday and then today we had those parades. Anyway some of us think maybe Edward isn't the only client to Billy maybe "him" is too????

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

So that leaves Mike 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Betcha it's either Tia or Leah that will get Mike into the compound or maybe both????

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Love the big shoutout about West Virginia. So you mention Michael and Jasper so that takes them out. So who could it be??? 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Ok so we have some bets going on 

14 say it's Mike

18 say it's Aro

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Some of us are wondering why didn't Rose get onto Toa for wearing white and looking like a whore. WOW!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Good thing it's raining!!! Lol πŸ˜‚ 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Man I thought I was going to save some people and drown Leah and Tia. It has been busy here the past few weeks and all the rain we got from Hurricane Ida I will finish Fire For Your Soul I promise. I has been crazy here the whole crew hasn't been here. We haven't been whole!!! You know what I mean??? And this weekend is Fire of Lights and Labor Day parade so busy again. KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Sorry it's late but Bridge Day is October 16th and the Governor just announced it yesterday although this year they are not having any base jumpers which means we're not having the sling-shot jumpers but we are still having jumpers jumping off the New River Gorge so I'm doing training for the next 2 weeks with new Covid guidelines. Pain in the butt!!

Ok so is Emmett going to freak out when he goes to the open house??? Hmmmmmm!!!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Yeah but aren't condos supposed to have security???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Trying to picture Emmett as a dom and Ros as a sub.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

I've never had sex in the dressing room either!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Oh is he going to tell her that he blacked balled the jerk that did that to her??? Hope all is well!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš‘πŸ”₯🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

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Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Well we have never ready a story where Edward deliver his own children but hey it's 2022 I will eventually get to deliver 8,9 & 10. I mean some of the crew hasn't even deliver 1, so I got that. Ok so now it time for Bikerward and Bikerella!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš‘πŸ”₯🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Oh this will be a first Rose and Emmett learning about BDSM from Edward and Bella!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

A million dollars for each stab that is crazy she is lucky to be alive. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Both commando!!!! 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

Wonder if Emmett and Rose will ever have anal sex??? Lol πŸ˜‚ 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

HAPPY HALLOWEEN πŸŽƒ 

They should have invited Tia and Leah too, just so they could get the bad talk and so Rose could see how her friends are jealous of Bella. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Ok so some of us are not lawyers but since "him" broke the BDSM contract and left Bella for died the NDA contract would be void?? I mean he went back on his word so Bella went back on her word???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Some of us bet that Bella and Edward wouldn't be going to Yacht day since Bella has scars on her body!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Ok so I am speaking as a lieutenant and the assistant chief brought it up at the same time but Riley broke HIPPA because even though Bella told Rileyshe told him in the ambulance or even in the club he still can't tell anyone only the police until he get subpoena and is on the stand or at the police station. That's my hardest thing to do when I work the ambulance because I know a lot of people and there families. Also Brian said you didn't give us a warning to get the hoses. Lol πŸ˜‚ 

HAPPY THANKSGIVING πŸ¦ƒ & KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš‘πŸš’πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six

Well we were not even close to being right. Oh well at least Toys for Tots will receive a lot of toys from us. Ok so some of us are confused when did Emmett bring Peter to Bella condo?? KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš‘πŸš’πŸ”₯πŸ¦ƒ

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

He will probably lose the rest of his mind. Sorry it's late but Christmas parade last night and today equals busy day. Lol πŸ˜‚ Ok so does Jasper know what he's step brother did or will he find out like everyone else did and does Alice know? KEEP WRITING ✍️ πŸ’™β€οΈπŸš‘πŸš’πŸ”₯ 🎅