Reviews by My Friend Alice
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

I just stumbled upon your story and after the first chapter have added it to my favs list. I hope there is an Edward side because at the moment he seems like a ass.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion

Hmmm I don't trust Uncle Aro or Felix. They seem a little eager.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

I had to move over hear and read it for the second time tonight. I'm so glad you are the update Queen...I would just die if I had to wait two weeks for the wedding night!

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

What a great way to wake up this morning...any early update of my now FAVORITE story!!! I loved the wedding night!!!

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Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

Fantastic chapter! Edward is so observant when it comes to Bella. Has Rose been mentioned yet or will we meet her when they return to England? I can't wait until Thursday! Oh and THANK YOU for the sneak peeks on your blog...it helped me make it until today for the update.



Author's Response:

I'M GLAD THE sneak peeks are helping you bide the time.  To answer your question, there has been a mention in passing of Rose.  When Jasper was discussing with Jasper a few chapters ago before the wedding how he should be pleased to have Bella, he made a tongue in cheek reference to Edward's cousin Rosalie "Dutchess of Vanity"  LOL.  I couldn't resist.  That was my big hint that she's a vain beeotch.  Anyway, when that all starts up should be interesting.  Hope that helps :)

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

How hard this must have been to a young princess bride in that time. The sadness from leaving everything and everyone you have ever known to unfamilar lands and family. At least in Bella's case she loves or will learn to love all these people. You have the best story and I am loving every word.

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Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Look out the Cullen women are formulating a plan to kick a$$! I was so afraig that Emmett was going to be arrested for murder there for a second. Thanks for not putting Em in stocks.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Will they be safe in Nottingham? Please don't let anything happen to them. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Well what can I say about this chapter...hold one I need to go get a cool glass of water and cool down a little first! What a honeymoon/fantasy come true!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Tanya will be trouble for Bella, will she not? I'm really enjoying this story. I hope your babies are well soon!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Thanks for the Easter present of posting early! Will Bella become pregnant before Edward's departure? Will Alice's baby be born before Jasper's return? I running off to your blog now to see if there are hints of these questions.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

It sounds as though you had a horrible day. I hope it gets better and your ankle heals quickly. By the way you now have me hooked on The Tutors as well.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

Have fun at the zoo!

Does Edward return in the next chapter? The wait for a new chapter will be easier to take if we get Edward back.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

This was a great surprise to see waiting for me tonight! I do so miss Prince Edward and hope his safe return lingers on the horizon.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

Uh Oh...how badly men misunderstand us women. I had a really crappy day in my boring accountant life...thanks for helping my night get much better. I have been watching for this update all week!!!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

They are going to have a baby!!!

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

The wicked witch is gone! Em found his Rose and Princess Bella and Prince Edward have their little royal growing in his mommie's tummy. All in the world is right...for now.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Tanya may not have a head soon.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

What a wonderful Christmas present.

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

The mystery continues...If Tanya did not order the murder, who did? Hmm who do you have planned for this evil? Cannot wait to find out.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

I loved the birth of the Prince and Princess...what great names. I'm a little sad to know this story is nearing the end.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I opened this up on my iPhone while at work to read on break. BIG mistake...I started crying and then couldn't stop reading it! Let 's just say that the people I work with must have thought that I had a really small bladder today with all the "bathroom" breaks that I had to take just so that I could read a couple of paragraphs at a time. I'm sad to see this story end but you could not have written a better ending than what you did. I LOVED THIS ENTIRE STORY!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing your talented words! ;)

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Another winner for A Cullen Wannabe!

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

How sweet is Edward now? Instead of being hurt, Bella should be pissed at Jake. What would he have said if she chose him instead of racing when he gave her the ultimatum? Kick his ass Izzy don't shed tears for the ass.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

Great chapter

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

I am loving this story!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Awhhh!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

I fall a little more in love with this racing pair each chapter!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

Awhhh...will she take it? If she does then when she and Edward get married she can move Charlie into the smaller home. Oh wait am I getting too far ahead of myself?

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

I loved the first date. How romantic!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

I love it when women put men in their place when he is trying to be all cavemanesk! Go Bella! At least this man realized he was being a dick...he was really only worried about her which makes him a forgiven man.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

So what is it then? And what did HQ want without Bella being there?

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

The whole merchandise thing was cool but WHY is she not getting any of that money? You would think that her manager would have made the deal...of course this is fiction. Sorry my accountant was coming out of me and all I could see was the money she was not earning from the sales. ;)

I'm glad to see that Tanya didn't ruin their relationship now hopefully her self-worth will not either.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

I loved how you had Edward stand up for Bella to Em. That is exactly what she deserved after the ASS Jake & pack were to her. So sad that there are guys like that who talk about the girls/women they are supposed to really love and care for.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

Great chapter!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

For once I like Tanya. She is spunky & funny!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

Yep...that would help to motivate and get the house unpacked quicly.

It will be a LONG three days, huh?

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

Who is behind Ben's sabatage? James, The Volturi, or any other racing team/fans who are against a female driver??? What do you have in store for us next week?

On a side note: I live less than 40 miles from the Texas Motor Speedway and have never been to a race. The facts that you are throwing into this story have peeked my interest into NASCAR. I may have to go to the next big race to check it out for myself

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

Great chapter.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

That was a surprise and a very sweet one.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

That was a fantastic finish. Thank you so much for not letting Bella become a "stay at home" mom when her passion was racing. As women we are torn by wanting to be both...stay at home mom's and have a career. Realistically the career wins out more times than not. Which makes your story even more believeable and encouraging. LOVED IT!

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717341
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I got so scared when this disappeared from FFNET. Thanks to friends on FB I found you again!

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Poor Bella. I hope she can open up to Jasper as well. He must feel so guilty even though he could not have prevented her pain.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Lexi this is my favorite of 2013!!! Keep'm coming!

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39692
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sad!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving your story!

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119059
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Such a wonderful starting chapter! I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thank you