Reviews by bobbysgirl1
Shaky Ground by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Shaky Ground

Dr. Edward Masen lived a lonely, miserable existence as an emergency room attending at Harborview Medical Center. He ate, breathed and lived for his job. He refused to even think about women. To him, they were only distractions and he didn't trust anyone, except his mother. 

Dr. Isabella Swan just moved to Seattle, after completing her residency in Chicago. She was hired as a pediatrician at Harborview, becoming a pediatric emergency room fellow. She was not looking for a relationship, only focusing on her job. It was hate at first sight for both. Or was it? But, their attraction could not be denied. 

Unfortunately, a natural disaster rattles their lives ... the world was turned upside down when escalating earthquakes plagued the Seattle area. Will they able to survive the danger of being on 
Shaky Ground

 

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 Banner by Clo

 

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Banner by 67Original_1901 from Wattpad!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120201 Read Count: 123927
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2017 Updated: 01 Dec 2017
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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

No chance for a baby Masen???????๐Ÿผ At least thre safe.  ๐Ÿฅ

READ YOU SOON โค๏ธ

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

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Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

If Bella is sad that she'll miss Edward why not move in with him??? HELLOOOOOOO!!!!!! They!  Are!!! ADULTS!!! with careers.....not jobs. In what book does it say there's a time frame you have to pass in order to live together?????

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Date: 07 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

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Date: 10 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

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Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Funny how "Marriage" is a not yet but..... sex is coming up possibly next chapter. (lol)  

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Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Good for Jake! He deserves to be a part f a loving family.Please don't let Bella get hooked on pain Medes.

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This chapter seemed a little shorter than the others. ....but it left a warmth that will have to keep us til the next update.  On yes by all means....Much LOVE! LOVE!!! LOVE!!!!! All for you!!!

   READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ ๐ŸŒบ ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bring ! It!!! On!!!!! Next update can't come fast enough.

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Date: 22 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah!! When will that pesky "wall" come down????? Soon I hope!!! 

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Date: 22 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah!! When will that pesky "wall" come down????? Soon I hope!!! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella to the rescue!!!!

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella to the rescue!!!!

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Date: 03 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Your really enjoying this aren't you???? Leaving us in shock amongst other emotions......  You she-devil you.   (he he he)

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Is it possible Dr Kai has a crush on Edward??? 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After their whirlwind romance, can they make it down the altar or will one or both get cold feet?

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6546 Read Count: 1137
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2017
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I needed to send you some love over here as well. As you know I'm all in it's a great start to a journey I am totally on right along with you. 

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Date: 17 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Pregnancy, summer, kids !!! all worth chilling. 

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Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Not the way I had hoped this chapter was headed but.....I'm still here, still reading and looking forward to more.

  READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This should be an interesting dinner....hmmmm what I wouldn't do to be a fly on the wall. (he he he)

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is gonna be a fun and exciting story to follow. I loved the long chapter. Now I can't wait to see what comes next. 

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm biting my nails : O wow! now I'm totally excited and can't wait for the next update.

READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

HAPPY THANKSGIVING to you and your loved ones. As always it's a joy to read each and every chapter you share with us....THANK YOU!!!

READ YOU SOON.  : )

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Date: 09 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ALL CAUGHT UP AGAIN AND BOY THAT WAS SOME CHAPTER!!! THE NEXT CHAPTER CAN'T COME FAST ENOUGH! 

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Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was fun and kinda evil wouldn't you say????  but..... all is good if it turns out how they planned....right? Kids! (he he he)  evil little beings they are.

READ YOU SOON   : )

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Why is it so wrong to be exclusive????? 

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Mike wanting to remember who the girls remind him of ....could it be 1of there parents??????? 

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Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Mr B there knows something or other having to do with the girls....obviously. Poor Bella and Edward some crazy sh*t is coming.

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm pretty sure Maggie has something to do with what's going on....if not the actual instigator. 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Let's get together yeah! yeah! yeah!!!! ( he he he )

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Date: 03 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

By far your best chapter. It was funny, hot! and had me yearning for more!!! Waiting is gonna be HARD! (he he he)

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now off to hunt down the hubby cause he needs to tend to some ....never mind

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I know! I know!!! It's been just under 2 months since you completed this sweet little gem but I couldn't let it go. I couldn't read this last chapter because then it would be over. You did great and Yes!!! you did it justice. THANK YOU!!! 

         READ YOU SOON   : )

Summary:

change

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a very secluded life. After her father's death, she decides to make a change. With a map, dart, and life insurance money to fuel the trip, she is off on an adventure. On this trip with her, we will see things through her eyes, and maybe find a new friend or two as well. AH. No heavy drama planned, but may change as the characters grow and talk to me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56350 Read Count: 48588
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Nov 2018
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so on board this journey with you. It's warm and leaves a yearning for more. The next update can't come soon enough.

   READ YOU SOON.   : )

Summary:

26 year old, multi-millionaire Edward Cullen has a problem. After telling his mother that he had been seriously dating someone for the past 6 months in a vain attempt to stop her meddling ways, Esme is insistant that he brings his girlfriend home to meet the family. 

One problem: He doesn't have a girlfriend. 

Desperate for a solution he tries to enlist the help of his long-term escort Rosalie only to discover that she has unexpectantly quite and no longer works for the agency, or Edward. 

What will happen when the only option left for Edward is to take the angencies new and unexperienced escort home to meet the parents?

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Credit to Xanath for the beautiful banner.  


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30089 Read Count: 8180
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2017 Updated: 22 Nov 2017
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unplanned - Edward POV

Bella being previously had is always no no but..... I'm intrigued so I'll give it a go.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving it a go hopefully you will stick with me! If you're worried about pregnancy or anything (as I know a number of readers have voiced the same concern) then do not worry, there will be no pregnancy or miscarriage or pregnancy scares or any other weird situations going on there. I hate pregnancy stories so definately do not write them. Thanks for reviewing, hope to see you again!

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57052
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I have been like a dog in heat waiting for the next update and I wasn't disappointed but  I can't help feeling cautious about Carlisle. I can see I'll be in heat til the end . Looking forward to the next update.  : )

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Date: 13 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

YOU ENJOY LEAVING US WITH OUR MOUTH WIDE OPEN...DON'T YOU? ( YOU MEANIE ) SO ARO TURNED HER INTO GI JANE HUH??? IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR A QUICK UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! 

READ YOU SOON 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star
Date: 23 May 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I WAS SO EXCITED AT THE BEGINNING BUT IT FIZZED TOWARD THE END. I FELT LIKE THERE WERE CHUNKS OF STORYLINE MISSING HERE AND THERE. I GUESS I WANTED MORE. OVER ALL I LIKE THE STORY I'M JUST A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED.... BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT NEW STORY. 



Author's Response:

I am sorry it was a little disappointing! I am glad to hear that you at least enjoyed it over all. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 09 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

WAITING WON'T BE EASY. ALICE SEEMS TO HAVE ISSUES WITH BELLA AND I GET THE FEELING SHE'S THE LINK. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Eager for more!!!

READ YOU SOON. : )



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It hurts that Bella is so depressed and insecure I hope she finds her way back soon. 

READ YOU SOON : (

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Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AWWWW!!!    : (    IT WAS A SHORT BUT! .... INFORMATIVE CHAPTER.  I WAS HOPING FOR A LITTLE MORE DETAILS ESPECIALLY ON ALICE BUT... I GUESS I HAVE TO BE PATIENT AND WAIT SOOOOO! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE!!! WITH A CHERRY ON TOP TRY TO UPDATE SOON....BUT SOONER WOULD BE BETTER.  (he he he)    : )

READ YOU SOON : )



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aro! Aro!! Aro!!! ... Alway's Aro he never learns (he he he)  at least this time my tongue isn"t on the floor but my "EYES" are bulging out!!!!!  Good Job.....

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star
Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I FELT LIKE THIS WASN'T OUR LOVING BADASS BELLA WHO TAKES NO SHIT FROM ANYONE!  A LITTLE DISAPPIONTED HERE BUT I'LL GET OVER IT JUST AS SOON AS YOU UPDATE. 

READ YOU SOON  : )



Author's Response:

Lol i know it seems unlike her but there is a reason for everything. Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

AWWW!!! HER HEART IS FINALLY!!! WARMING UP FOR HIM. 

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Date: 11 May 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ONE MORE HUH?  THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE THAT COULD HAVE BEEN COVERED  BUT YOU DO THE MAGIC.    : (

    READ  YOU  SOON

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Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

what is with Carlisle and his attitude?????  he acts like he knows a thing or two about Bella and possibly her father as well..... hmmmm

READ YOU SOON : )

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Date: 01 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That left a smile to last til next update.....but a lot to wonder about as well and as always wanting more. 

READ YOU SOON โค๏ธ

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

you do it to me everytime..... what you say......you left me with my tongue on the floor and now I have to drag it to bed wondering what the hell is in that safe.  (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )

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Date: 04 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Baby Daddy by merri92 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a first grade teacher at Oakwood Elementary School. She had pined over her Reading Buddy room teacher Edward Cullen since she first started at the school. After a year of wishing Edward was single, he breaks up with his long time girlfriend Tanya Denali which opens the door for Bella and Edward to become friends with benefits as Edward figures out what he wants. What happens when Bella finds out she is pregnant when the news breaks out that Edward and Tanya are not only back together but engaged to be married? Will Bella tell Edward the truth or keep her future child from it's father?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3092 Read Count: 3040
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2018 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
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Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

oh those sneaky  " shots "  always cause some kind of trouble! (he he he) update ASAP! 

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So..... that's all it took I'm hooked and ready for more. I'm hoping there won't be much drawn out angst but as of now Ilook forward to reading.

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Date: 29 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I know!!!!  no presure but seiously I for one can't wait for the next update. 

READ YOU SOON : )

Summary: Past Featured Story

AMDFT

Crown Prince Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is the heir to the throne in the small independent country, Gevalia. His life is all about duty, honor and pride for his country. However, he’s lonely, focused on his career. When his younger brother makes some poor choices, Edward is forced to fly to the United States to smooth out diplomatic relations and spend six months looking for a bride, with some pretty stiff stipulations by his mother, the Queen of Gevalia.

Isabella Swan is the oldest daughter and now owner of the Swan Family Bakery, Inc. 1897. She went to college to be a teacher but was forced to forego her dreams when her father was diagnosed with Parkinson’s disease. On a chance evening, a handsome stranger slips during a summer rain storm into her bakery and awakens something inside.

Who is he?

Where did he come from?

Why is she drawn to him?

All that is known is that Prince Charming is a real person and Bella is about to live A Modern-Day Fairy Tale. But will it end in a happily ever after?

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you, girlie!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194069 Read Count: 129902
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2018 Updated: 02 Jul 2019
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'M ALL SMILES WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. 

READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

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Date: 23 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 25 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

SO IT SEEMS.......ALICE STRIKES AGAIN!!!!!!

READ YOU SOON   : )

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Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

YOU ENDED TO SOON : (

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Date: 17 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE. I HOPE YOUR FEELING BETTER : )

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Date: 28 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WELL DONE!

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Date: 07 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 21 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 08 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Enlightening to say the least. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LUCKY LITTLE GIRL WILL SOON HAVE A FAMILY.

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Date: 02 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

IT'S ALWAYS DISAPPOINTING TO ME WHEN BELLA'S BEEN HAD BEFORE EDWARD. SHE LOSES HER SWEET INNOCENS. NOW HE'S JUST THE NEXT ONE       : (

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Date: 20 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Author's Note

OH! SWEETIE,   BY ALL MEANS TAKE ALL THE TIME YOU NEED....I FOR ONE WILL WAIT.... IMPATIENTLY BUT WAIT I WILL.   (lol)   I KNOW WHEN THE TIME IS RIGHT YOU WILL SHARE YOUR MAGIC WITH US. NO WORRIES.... NOW WE HAVE SOMETHING TO LOOK FORWARD TOO.  AFTER THE CHAOS... TAKE A LITTLE TIME ALL FOR YOURSELF BEFORE YOU UPDATE...YOU EARNED IT.

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Date: 31 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 19 May 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

AS USUAL A TRUE JOY TO READ. BUT!!!!....SOMEONE NEEDS TO PUT ALICE IN HER PLACE  AND SOON!!!!! OR SHE'LL BE CAUSING PROBLEMS FOR BELLA AND HIS HIGHNESS AND THAT WE DON'T WANT NOW DO WE????? 

READ YOU SOON

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Date: 05 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

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Date: 11 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

IT SUCKS THAT JASPER IS INVOLVED WITH DRUGS. 

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED??? 

READ YOU SOON   : /

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED??? 

READ YOU SOON   : /

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED??? 

READ YOU SOON   : /

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED??? 

READ YOU SOON   : /

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED??? 

READ YOU SOON   : /

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Date: 24 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

: /  Disappointing chapter. Alice is playing them and somehow she'll be forgiven.

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Date: 05 May 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ONLY TIME WILL TELL.

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Date: 12 May 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOOKY HERE MISSY YOU HAVE TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT ALICE CHAPTER AFTER CHAPTER AND SHE'S GETTING WORSE. POOR BELLA MAYBE CHARLIE WILL TALK HER INTO GOING WITH EDWARD. 

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

CAN'T WAIT!!! BUT... WAIT I MUST

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Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SO WERE OFF TO AN INTERESTING ROYAL START.  SO MUMMY WANTS HIS BRIDE TO BE A VIRGIN BUT THROWS DIRT IN HER EYES KNOWING LADY KATHRYN IS LESS THAN PURE. AHUH!!!

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Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

HOW OLD IS ALICE? IF SHE'S OLD EOUGH THEN SHE NEEDS TO GO.

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Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 20 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

it's a start. i suppose. 

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE FOR YOU.... BUT ALICE DOESN'T DESERVE ANY.  SHORT BUT INFURIATING CHAPTER. 

READ   YOU   SOON   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star
Date: 29 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52

NOT ALL MOMS DESERVE TO BE FORGIVEN JUST BECAUSE THEY ASK FOR FORGIVENESS. TO ME IT SAYS HIS MOTHERS FEELINGS MEANT MORE THAN BELLA'S PAIN.... BUT THAT'S JUST ME!

Summary:

LDEID

Isabella Swan is the only daughter of Charlie Swan, the leader of the Swan Mafia Family. While out with her father, they are attacked by a rival family, The Wolf Pack and her father was critically injured. The family doctor was unavailable, and Bella is scrambling for a replacement. She called the person she’d least expect to help her.

Dr. Edward Cullen is working as an emergency room physician when he got a phone call from the girl he’d secretly loved all throughout college, but she kept him in the friend-zone, save for one drunken night. After that, she disappeared, and he hadn’t heard from her. Until this fateful night … And he found her much changed, hardened, scarred and angry.

Charlie Swan’s life hangs in the balance, and the only person who can save him is Bella’s former friend and one-time lover. Will Edward be able to save Charlie and stay away from the girl, who is now a woman and far more beautiful, despite the scarred and hardened exterior?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44585 Read Count: 11874
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2018 Updated: 12 Jul 2018
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 18 May 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

CAN'T WAIT!

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i know you hinted that it wouldn't be a long chapter story but .... it would be a great 100 plus chapter story.

read you soon

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

READ YOU SOON : )

Summary:

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FBI agent Edward Masen goes undercover to take down the Cullen mafia. Meeting Bella Swan, the former boss’s daughter now forced to earn her keep by stripping in the club owned by the new Family, was never in his plans. He feels the need to save her, but he can’t even save himself. He’s about to find out that nothing is as it seems.



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81880 Read Count: 27988
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2018 Updated: 30 Sep 2018
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

: )  WOO HOO!!! I AM SO EXCITED YOU'VE DECIDED TO CONTINUE. 

                     READ YOU SOON 



Author's Response:

You made me laugh!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!!!!! I'M GREEDY I JUST WANT MORE!!!!!!!!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I do think they're all over the place in length.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 3: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.

THE WAITING IS KILLING ME SMALLS!!!! 

READ YOU SOON



Author's Response:

I'm trying! I don't normally post twice a week. LMAO

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52321
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I APPRECIATE A LONGER MORE INFORMATIVE CHAPTER.  THERE'S ALOT OF HURT AND PAI THAT THESE TWO SHARE.  I NOW FEEL SAD BUT LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. 

             READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WOW!!!! SO CHARLIE  WILL BE THE KEY TO CLEARING HIS NAME AND BELLA WILL BE THE ONE TO FILL HIS HEART..... THAT'S WHAT I'LL  HOPE FOR AND LOOK FORWARD TOO. 

           READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

DUM DA DUM!!!!!! 

READ YOU SOON   : o

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SAD BEGINNING BUT I HAVE FAITH IN YOUR MAD WRITING SKILLS.  SO.... I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE WITH ONE EYE OPEN. (lol) 

     READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

 Poor fool he's gonna have to make things right or the guilt is gonna keep eating at him. 

      READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

: )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Asshole!!!!! He's such a guy. So Bella is 19 and legal has been hurt...hmmm! something in common... kinda. 

READ YOU SOON