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Bio:
A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. Bella finds her own piece of heaven with the man who saved her, but has she truly escaped the clutches of the man who preyed on her?
All Human, Bella & Edward. Rated NC17 for language/lemons/some violence. Expansion of a one shot I posted on Fanfiction.net but then expanded due to reviewer request.
Reviews on Fanfiction - 138 so far!
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168665 Read Count: 27965
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Not many authors take take time to personally ask for constructive critiscism so i decided to do it! Lol i dont know what exactly to say, i prefer to lurk on fanfic sites lol but i love your story!!! so much in fact that i foun it on fanfiction which had more updates! all i can say is keep doing what your doing! I love that edward is such a badass but sweet as well! i love a jealous edward so i hope i see more of that!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. As it's my first story I felt it was important to get outside input which is why I ask for people to comment. So far everyone has been very supportive of the story, and for that I am very grateful. I agree, badass Edward with some sweetness thrown in is a lovely combo! You will definitely be seeing more of him.
Lou xx