Reviews by VABelle
Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

cute cat idea.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

finally what we've all been waiting for....Jasper finally confessed his feelings, yea!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow!!!! crazy ending..didnt see that coming at all, although i have a feeling Alice wont die just be changed, lol.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

nice twist with still having Alice losing her memories...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

great story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

uh oh.. i have a feeling that Tony and Edward are the same person...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

so i wonder if Tanya is really gone for good...with a threat like that from Edward I would think so but it would make for an interesting story if not..hmmmm...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

with this chapter i think you get to see Bella changing and growing into her womanhood.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you saw that.  I don't think many people noticed the subtle changes.  :D  Thanks

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Go Cullen woman, Go!  let the games begin, yea!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

what a nice husband...now that war isn't a issue I wonder what happened to Tanya?

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

:)  adding to the mystery...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

thanks for the update...im curious to see what happens next..

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

awww...its almost the end....great chapter..

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

awwww...i really liked this chapter.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

most amazing happy yet sad ending ever!!!! im sitting here trying to type a review and wipe away tears at the same time....wow!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations

i love not knowing who she will end up with....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

too funny...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me

nice chapter....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

good sweet ending to a crazy story...thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

She was born special and had a destiny that could change the world.  She is the Keeper! He will be the Overseer!  Together they try to save the Cullen's and restore the balance.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64270 Read Count: 26857
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Arriving

i love the mysteriousness(is that a word,lol) of the story...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Impressions

im usually all for Edward/Bella, but for some reason i really want Bella to be a strong woman and stay with Gabriel...i feel like if she "runs" back to Edward that would be wrong...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Cullen Assignments

and so we find out some more important information...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Druids & Lycans

ok i think im finally understanding the story...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Catherine & Duties

awww...love the ending...i really like Bella/Gabriel

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Returning

please Edward grow up!!! leave Bella alone, let her continue to be happy with Gabriel...please!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Traveling

yea Gabriel! let the battle begin...but who will lose their lives, i have a feeling that somehow Edward will sacrifice himself to "prove" his love to Bella..

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Getting Gabriel

curious to see how Edward plans on "making sure" Bella always has Gabriel.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Saying Goodbye

i knew it! but that was a great ending, i could definitely see Edward doing that.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

GREAT ending! Thanks for such a wonderful unique story.

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow..all this is just the first chapter...wow

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

im glad that you chose to kill of James, Victoria and Laurent in just 1 chapter...i find it annoying when authors drag on the kill although it has little to do when adding to the plot of a story...thanks... two more weeks til Bella's due date, Yea!  Excited to find out what James was talking about when he mentioned the resistance.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i loved it! i like the creative way that Bella went into labor..this cliffy was a great one,now im too excited to see what happens next.  Curious what the plan for Bella is, was it planned that she would be turned after birth or were they planning on more kids?



Author's Response:

i like to make each of my stories differant and since i had never heard of a story that did that i went with it! thanks for reading it. the next chapter will be up tomorow but i can tell you this: the way the laws are written humans are to have children up to a minimum age of 18. bpw which stands for 'breed with a purpose' are no exceptions then only benifit to being a bwp is that you are turned when you turn 18, but one can be turned early if the life depends on it. so tomorrow you will find out if it was needed..i know i am evil! but one good thing is i rarely  do a cliff hanger with out having the next chapter ready. thanks again michele 

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yea Bella survived, and with twins! didnt see that coming! thank you for the quick update.



Author's Response:

was there any doubt that she would survive :) i am glad you liked my surprise! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter, i love how just when one problem is solved another incident happens...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

so i liked, but i feel a little suspicious of Maggie..hmmm..

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

cant wait to find out what happens next with the resistance and if Bella does have more children...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

GREAT chapter! but now that the threat of Charlie is gone, whats going to happen next in the story?



Author's Response:

without giving too much away there is still the stand off in Folks and charlie was a human, not a wolf so he was never in control of the wolves that accompanied him to alaska. HINT HINT ! next chapter in half done so i will hopefully have it up tommorrow.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

LOVED IT! a possesive Edward...Yummy!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews! I am so glad you like the story! More to come real soon!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

:) thanks for the update.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

really liked this chapter, Tanya in love, awww.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wow...nice set up for whats to come.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

ok so i saw the sequel summary and so of course i had to read this story first. First chapter? wow! i like this "care-free" all about herself Bella. And I noticed that all the chapters are names, hmmm, interesting..

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Zack

uh oh... and so the fun/trouble begins...lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: To Save a Rose

oh my! oh my! this story is more than just the usually angsty teenage story, and i love it!



Author's Response: awesome! I has aiming way passed teen angst!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Date

ok this is no doubt my favorite chapter so far!!!! the date was too cute, and just when i thought the chapter was over..BAM! You hit us with a crazy call from Rosalie...thanks!



Author's Response: glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: First Day Pt 1

i am officially in love with the story already!



Author's Response: awesome! I hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: First Day Pt 2

yea so i was a little like "WTF!" with Edward and Jacob being together, but then I do LOVE the idea of Jasper/Bella.  



Author's Response: lol I can't help it. Being bisexual myself, I have a tendency to forget that not everyone is so accepting. But I'm glad you've liked so far

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Lunch Time Revelations

so i love it when authors find a way to throw in original twilight lines, it makes me smile so i loved the "suffer in silence types" line.. i think you said it best "awkward teenage romances. Gotta love them."



Author's Response: lol glad you liked

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Out of the Mouths of Babes

i really like Jasper! cant wait to see what happens next and where your story will go.



Author's Response: I'm so glad that I've not scared you off! lol

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Trying

2 chapters in one day, YEA! i liked Jaspers answer, it was honest and not a "perfect' answer which shows that maybe your trying to make your characters more real.  Im nervous for Bella to see what happens when they go back to school, but I have a feeling that the BBQ will help to strengthen everyone friendships, so she will be prepared/protected.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Confessions and Cold Shoulders

wow, so at least we know the full story of what happened to Bella. But why is Jasper acting like that...bad Jasper bad.



Author's Response: because poor jasper is overwhelmed...I think he'll come around sooner than we think though

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Yardwork

i felt like with this chapter we are starting to get a better idea of who they are and type of friendships/relationships every has with each other. And yea to Jasper for at least trying to make up.



Author's Response: yeah, the boy knows he messed up

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss

i like how protective they were of Bella yet Bella is still a strong character.



Author's Response: She is strong, but sometimes she needs someone to look out for her, just like we all do

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Price of Insanity

ok, that was heavy but well written at the same time...wow, im kinda speechless.



Author's Response: I will have to take speechless as a good sign :-)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fix Me, Fix You

i really, really like Jasper. The scene between Jasper and Bella on the phone was very creative.



Author's Response: I thought so too. thanks hun

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: When did this happen?

great i think a nice fluffy chapter was just what i needed after the heaviness of the last one..



Author's Response: don't I know it lol

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Return to Nightmare Alley

we got to see a little more about what happened to Bella, i like that you chose to give us glimpses instead of all at one time. With the arrival of Allen and Mischa im assuming we will learn more of Jaspers story, and see how they help him and Rosalie...thanks for the update...well wishes for your husband.



Author's Response: thank you hun...and you might be right when it comes to learning more about Jasper

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Full House

Jasper and Rosalie moving in, hmmmmm...i have a feeling good things and maybe some not so good things are coming....i liked the chapter, but i seemed to notice the writing style seemed a little different?



Author's Response: that different writing style can be blamed on fatigue and stress sweetie lol, sorry

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Declarations

awww...too cute..



Author's Response: they are lol

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Up in Smoke

awww, why is everyone being so mean to Emmett, lol...i liked this chapter although i found myself needing to go back to find out what happened to Tyler.



Author's Response: yeah, I've had a few people who forgot what he did

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Creeps

wow...im not sure if you love us or hate us....first a James/Victoria meeting then a marriage proposal..oh my!



Author's Response: don't say that, you know that I love you guys, why would I wrack my brain to keep coming up with this stuff? :-)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: It's a WTF Kind of Day

ok...so you definitely love us cause you were nice enough to give us 2 chapters in one day so thank you...but now a cliffy, and not just a any cliffy but one involving James calling, which only leads to more questions...have i mentioned how much i love your story?



Author's Response: I couldn't leave you completely satiated now could I? lol

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Overload

great amazing chapter.....the whole mystery thing was cool, im pretty bad at mystery stories so i missed the inconstances of the previous chapter statements and glad you put them together..thanks for wonderful update :)



Author's Response: I'm actually horrible at mysteries myself lol

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

ok...definitely didn't see this change in the plot coming...but i like it, looking forward to seeing how things go.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Blood Doesn't Always Make the Bond

prayers for your family...take your time and know that you are an expectional writer and so when or if you decide to continue writing your readers will be here to welcome you back.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Busted

welcome back...WONDERFUL CHAPTER! I definitely wasn't expecting that but Im glad it happened. Have I mentioned that I love your characters?

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Ending the Nightmare

i liked that she kind of got her revenge for what he did to her although Emmett and friends beating the crap out of him wouldve been nice too..lol.



Author's Response: I felt that her getting some sort of revenge on James by shooting him was a small justice in comparison to what he did to her

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Finale

that was a little bit at the end with Bree was definitely a weird ending...thank you for a unique wonderful story.



Author's Response: lol thank you, I like breaking the mold

Summary:


Everyone is human. Bella lived in Phoenix with her mom and Phil, she was a rebel - in trouble with the police, never going to class, getting wasted and dong drugs. After one final 'incident' Bellas' mom decided to send her to stay with her father in the tiny town of Forks. Bellas' boyfriend (Jasper) and his twin sister, who is also Bellas' best friend (Rose) decide to move with her and take over Forks. Bellas' aim is to cause as much trouble in the little town as she can. But when she runs into The Cullens, things become complicated. Will Bella and Jaspers' relationship survive when Bella comes face to face with gorgeous bad-boy Edward? And will he and his family help her in her quest for excitement in Forks, or change her life forever?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51788 Read Count: 2443
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 17 Aug 2010
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving Town Alive - BPOV

i like the idea of a troublemaker Bella, my only hope is that once she meets the Cullens she doesn't change into a good girl.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Troublemaker - BPOV

curious/excited to see what happenes with the AU coupling..will it be B/J or B/E? hmmmm...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Black and White Town - EPOV

crazy first day of school! hey, doesnt she have a bf, lol...what about Jasper?

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bad Girl - BPOV

wow!!!! if that was you version of a lemon over the phone i can only imagine your real lemons..wow!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Lust's Passion - BPOV

Edwards place seems interesting,hope to see more of it....excited to see how everything goes when Rosalie and Jasper come...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Wankward Returns EPOV

oh my! great chapter!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

So much has happened and its been some time....I forgot w

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so excited to read this story...although i have alot of catching up to do im really liking the story so far...i have a feeling that this story is going to have more depth to it than just the D/s lifestyle, and im happy about that.



Author's Response:

Thank you,, and I hope you enjoy my little story of love and lust ....lml

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok..glad to get a small bit of background on Edward and Bella...and we got to see exactly what she deals with at the center...



Author's Response:

You will see more of the center as the story goes on... it is a vert big part of Bella's life ...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

glad that for once Leah is a nice person in a story...although its a little weird that Bella and Edward keep running into each other.



Author's Response:

Leah and Bella are sisters they love eachother but like all sisters they will not always see eye-to-eye ...it is weird that all of a sudden they keep running into each other....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i still can't believe that Bella has chosen to tell Edward so much of her horrible background already.



Author's Response:

Hmmm.... she feels a connection to him and for some reason safe around him....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i think the grocery store date is a cute idea...everybody eats and what kind of food you buy says alot about you...liking the story but the fact that its very early in their relationship and yet Bella has said alot about her past to almost everyone kind of bothers me.



Author's Response:

I will admit that because time contraints this would have taken longer ... but she knows Alice from before and again she feels safe with Edward....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

nice breakdown of the rules and whats expected. ..it shows that you really have researched and planned alot of details



Author's Response:

He wanted to make it very clear what she was getting herself into ....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

about time Leah and Edward had a real conversation...so loving this story.



Author's Response:

They needed to talk

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

nice to see how Bella's friends/friends enteract with each other...and now we know why Leah's was acting the way she was.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

oh my, first i have to say that bedroom scene was amazing, talk about imagination( i might have to try that, lol)....and then Edward meets James! uh oh!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

:) really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

really really loving this story....love the how real the relationships between the characters are and love the storyline.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading i have a small teaser for you....

After Bethany got everyone’s order Sue leaned over to talk to the table “You all look tired, what time did you go to bed last night?”

“What time did we go to bed or what time did we go to sleep?” Leah asked smugly raising her eyes in my direction.

“You couldn’t sleep?” Sue was concerned but Kim couldn’t resist “No there was a lot of yelling going on”

“Lots of yelling and banging” Emery added.

Before the conversation with Maggie Kim and Leah were teasing me in the restroom about how loud Edward and I were. So that meant that everyone else must have heard us too, which should have been evident by the laughter at the table. My face heated up as I tried to control my embarrassment while Edward just winked at me. Charlie on the other hand had no idea what was so funny came to his own conclusion. “I guess the kids on the beach must have been putting up quite a raucous if you heard it all the way back at the house”  

Thank god Charlie is so oblivious

“Oh yeah it was a raucous alright, as a matter of fact there was two of them”

“Two?” Emery questioned looking at Kim “We must have missed the second one”

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

gotta admit although i loved seeing them interact with her family/friends, I have missed them in session or at the club.



Author's Response:

Yes,,, and they miss the playroom too....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

great as always...love that i can see them growing both as individuals and their relationship.



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm glad you like the chapter and I"m also glad that the realtionship the E&B have is growing and that you can see them getting closer...thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...louise

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

love love this story...and i have a feeling, Bella will be punished for that mistake...giving up her Master's time without his permission, uh oh.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh my! cant believe you ended the chapter like that! anxious....



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'll update soon. thanks. =)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

please please continue...this was a great first chapter. I'm currently reading "War of the Worlds" so i am amazed that you have so many stories in progress yet your able to update regularly. I'm definitely adding this story to my favorites and you to my favorite author list.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yes writing is my addiction. I have a story for every one of my moods. It makes it easier to update regualrly when you like what you're writing. Thank you for reading more than one of my stories! Thank you for adding me to your lists!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

really liking the story so far, its smut but very well-written. Liking it sooo much.



Author's Response:

Thank you! What can I say my freind likes for me to write her smut and I happily oblige her. Thank you for giving it a chance. I hope you enjoy the adventure I have planned.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! glad we got a little of the background on Bella, cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is at the beta so as soon as it is ready I will post.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

so although there was a lemon in this chapter, I got to see another part of their growing relationship...liked it.