Reviews by MidnightKat
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Great chapter.  I love sweet Edward and Jasper.  I wonder when James will show up because we all know that he is searching for Bella and will also want to track down Victoria (by using her chip). ......Kat  

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I loved it as always.  Great job ladies.....Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

One down...one (or maybe two) to go...lol                Kat

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

That was so beautiful.......Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Are you going to make Bella be pregnant?   Or worse yet, Carlisle takes her and then we have to wonder who the father is?  I can't wait to see the fallout from the guests.  So many ways for you to go here.  This should be a fun ride. 

Loved the chapter...I'm anxiously waiting for the next one........Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Nice chapter.  I hope Carlisle didn't have cameras in the basement and that Edward can keep Carlisle away from Bella.             Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I'm guessing Carlisle?  Can't wait to find out who it is?   Great Chapter.  Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.  I can't wait to see how you progress things.

Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So sweet!  Back off Mike...Edward's movin in!   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

uh oh.  This isn't going to be easy on Edward...**giggling**      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bedtime... but I want to keep reading.  Oh well, there's always tomorrow.    Kat



Author's Response:

Bedtime for me as well. No more writing tonight. Its starting to look like giberish.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward's jealousy is going to bite him in the butt.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I never thought much about it in the Twilight books when Edward would sneak into Bella's room while she slept.   This time it seemed a little creepy.  The 'Soon, my love, very soon' made me think of Dracula or something. 

But then again...it's Edward.  He could sneak into my bedroom anytime...not sure that my husband would appreciate it though (lol).

I'm loving this new story of yours.    Kat

 

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait to see how Bella reacts when she realizes that her blankets smell like Edward.  Great little detail to add to the story.              Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What a great chapter.  I loved fiery little Bella taking on Edward and then Emmett.  Her interactions with the Cullens are going to be so much fun to read.  If only she knew...

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow!  You are a busy lady.  Where do you find the time to write all these different stories?  I have trouble keeping up with the updates on just one story.  I'm impressed.                    Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OK.  I'm caught up but now I'm hungry for more.  I'll be waiting for your next update.

Great job.    **hugs**  Kat



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter. Should be ready by next week.

Summary:

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Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21250
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Way We Are

Oh I wonder how Edward's going to react to Bella since she is living with Emmett. 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Make It Work

He was doing so well then he had to mess it up.

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dirty Dancing

Poor Bella.  Jealous and she can't do anything about it.  That is just torture.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: When I Saw You

Oh...what a a sticky situation.  Move over Emmett...Edward's in town.  lol  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Oh you evil thing.  You are setting Edward up to be with Rose just to torture Bella more.  Mean, Mean, mean....lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading honey! Just go with it.....I promise it's worth it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Twisted

So does Emmett have a thing for Rose and that is why he gets so ticked when she asks about another guy?

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 11: That's What It's Made For

That was hot but I can't believe they cheated on Em.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpredictable

No you can't put Edward and Tanya back together!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

I really enjoyed the story.  Thank you so much!  Great job....Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!!!!! I am very happy you liked it!!!

Last Wish by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?

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This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5743
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Miracle

I was familiar with some of your stories on FF so when I saw that you had started posting a story here...I just had to read it.  I can't wait to see how this story evolves.  .........   Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: One Breath

So sweet and sad.  I don't like thinking of her settling for Edward just because she lost Mike (he deserves more).  I'm sure that will make us see that she isn't settling and that she truly finds everything that she never knew was missing from her life, with Edward.    Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: End of the Beginning

Thanks for the update.  Nice chapter.  I can't wait to see how you have Edward and Bella finally cross that line and become a couple.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Moving On

I love that this story isn't about the kids.  I usually avoid stories that have children in them, but this one I really like.  I love that the kids are factors to be considered but that the story is more about coping and the adult relationships. 

Are your original fiction fnovels on the TWCS library?  I need to add them to my 'want to read' list. 

As always...great job.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Very Merry

So sweet...progress.  I can't wait for New Years now.  Good job.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Old and New

Incredible chapter.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Roller-coaster

Happy Birthday.  I loved the chapter.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Making Up

Beautifully written.  I love the Venetian Hotel - what a perfect place for them to get married.  I am so glad that they got married somewhere classy rather than one of the cheesy chapels.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Forward

Poor Edward.  Still being kept a secret and now he has to be so worried over Bella.    Great chapter.      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Rescue

I have really loved this story.  I don't have a suggestion for the epilogue, but I have faith that whatever you choose to do with it - it will be fabulous.

Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

I loved the story.  Thank you so much for sharing it with us.    Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.  I few minor glitches in the chapter, but no biggie.  Can't wait to see how you have things heat up between E and B.   Kat



Author's Response:

OMG, I am chuffed your reading my story *bites nails*

The whole thing is not Beta'd- so I apologize for any minor errors, don't think there are too many because I always checked before posting.

Anyway I hope you enjoy!! :)

Chelle x

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow.   She was found out.  I didn't expect that.        Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

: )    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward is being sensible - or as sensible as he can be seeing that he is involved with a student.  Bella needs to grow up.  I am a little worried about so many people knowing.  I can just see one of them getting pissed off and ratting her out.   Great chapter.         Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am really enjoying your story.  You are doing a great job writing it.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow.  It's getting intense.  I love it.    kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a mess.  I'm sure you'll figure a way out for everyone.  Great chapter.  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice way to work things out.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ooops.  Daddy arrived too soon.   lol    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whats the deal with Rose?   I guess I'll get my answer in the next chapter.  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Beautiful.   kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

This was a great story.  You did a wonderful job writing it.  Thanks for the entertainment.     Kat   ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews and I am thrilled to bits that you liked my story.

 

Chelle x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Pretty Hot Lemon. I was worried for a moment that he was going to force her.  Even though he wasn't taking no for an answer, it was obvious that she wanted it too.         

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was great!!  I loved the shock.   kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't like Dominate, Possessive Edward.....I love him!  lol           Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I loved it.  I want more.    kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Caveward isn't going to be able to keep his feelings for Bella from Emmett much longer.  I wonder how he will react?  Edward is a little over the top...Bella was right to put him in his place...but I think she is going to pay for it now.      Nice Chapter...  Kat

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153111
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

I like the longer chapters.  

I want Edward and Bella together, but I wish she didn't have to share him with Alice and Rosalie.  I know that this story is about polygamy so I will just hush and go along for the wonderful ride that you are taking us on.

Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I personally do not fully understand polygamy, but people happily live that way so I'm going with it.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

I enjoyed the update.  I know that I am selfish, but I just don't think that I could share Edward if I were Bella.  Of course, I know that is what the story is all about, but I just keep hoping that Alice and Rose find someone else.

Thanks for the update.    kat



Author's Response:

Kat,

I know what you mean I wouldn't want to share. And I'm sorry to say that there will be no one else for Alice or Rosalie.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

You are doing such a wonderful job of torturing me...lol.   You really are doing a great job of writing this story.  I squirm every time I read a new chapter because I just keep thinking - Nope, I couldn't share.  You have to be making it realistic to get me so involved in your story line. 

 

Thanks a bunch.   Kat



Author's Response:

Admit it you love it and wouldn't have it any other way. Thanks for the confidence I need to keep my twisted mind writing....

Denise

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Nope...still couldn't share...lol.   I would want that hunky man all for myself.  Loved the chapter sweetie.     Kat



Author's Response:

I know right. If it were me I would chain him to my bed and never let him up.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

I'm surprised that you didn't address how they handle jealousy.  I would think that it would issue - resenting the time that he spent intimately with the other.  Logically they can accept it - but emotionally it has to be hard to handle or hear.

Loved the chapter, as always.

Kat



Author's Response:

Bella is not fully in a relationship with Edward yet, it has just started. Jealousy will he handled when / if it accurs.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting...Can't wait to see what life for Bella will be like with the God of War. 

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow! 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gulp  ^_^

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Carlisle is going to be trouble.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I loved it...I can't wait to read more.     Kat

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 20345
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets and Lies

Poor Bella.  Can't wait to see what happens to James when Emmett figures out what is going on....Kat



Author's Response:

James is lucky that Emmett can't get his hands on him.  It wouldn't be pretty.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What the Hell Happened to Bella?

Nice job.  The two of them have really been through a lot. ....  Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kat.  They have, haven't they?  I feel bad about putting them through so much.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place

You've gotta love Carlisle, Esme, Alice and Edward.



Author's Response:

Yes you do, and I would love to bottle them up and keep them with me for those moments when you need someone to be nice and comfort you.  :)  I'll have a shitty day, please, with a side order of Carlisle.  ;)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Branded

Edward is such a doll!  He is just what Bella needs to help her through this.



Author's Response:

We could all use a little Edward in our lives, couldn't we!?  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Whispers

Sweet sweet Edward.  I'm glad Bella is becoming a little more comfortable.  Good chapter.   Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kat.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Gorecki

Beautiful...Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Silence Isn't Always Golden

Math wouldn't keep me from thinking about what Edward was doing...lol



Author's Response:

No, I think anyone would be hard-pressed to think of anything other than what he was doing.  ;)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Adam

Great chapter.  Things seem to be going smoothly but since the story isn't over that means that there are probably dark clouds on the horizon.  I think that I like things the way they are now...lol                Kat



Author's Response:

LOL!  You like the peace and not the angst, eh?

Glad you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Everything's Coming Up Rosie

Wow!            Kat

I do have a question, but I don't want to be indelicate.  You do not have to answer this if it bothers you at all.  Your descriptions of the paintings and the progress that Bella is making rings so true with me.  Are you a therapist  or a nurse?  Either way, you are doing an incredible job with this story. Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

You're not being indelicate at all.  I am not a therapist or a nurse--I work in a government office as an office manager.  :)  I'm just a regular person who may have a little more insight into some of the subject matter of this story than I should.  I wrote this story to work through my own demons, and in the process, I've been told that I've helped some people along the way.

Thank you for reading it and reviewing.  It really does mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Outtakes!

I loved your story.  You did a great job...Kat



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you loved it.  It was a real labour of love and it means a lot that people loved it and related to the characters.  

I hope you'll enjoy Road Maps as well.  :)

Summary:

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Not everyone's life is easy, sometimes it's hard, Bella Swan knows this better than most. She's a broken girl. Her mother has died and her father beats her. Can the new kids save her? Will she let them? read what happens...THIS IS AN 18+ STORY DUE TO SOME OF IT'S CONTENTS.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142425 Read Count: 19249
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2023
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Hell

Sad start for Bella.  I hope that the Cullens can make it better for her soon.

Kat



Author's Response:

keep reading and find out

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner

 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

fs

This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

Uh oh.  The guys are busted.  I wonder if the girls will follow them to the 'house'?          Great story so far...Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. New Competiton

The new three spell trouble.  I love it.      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Demetri was hot but he took her virginity.  I thought for sure that she would save that for Edward.  Edward is going to be livid.             Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

Why are the vampires so focused on breeders?  What is going on that makes breeding so important?           Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)

Can't wait for more....Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step

Wait and see.    kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )

Great chapter!  I am really loving this.  I can't wait to see what happens during the rest of their 'meeting'      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Wow.  I wasn't expecting that twist.  Great job.    Kat

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonderful start to the story.  I wasn't sure about the storyline when I first started reading this but I think that I will enjoy this adventure very much.  Thanks    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved their first hunt together.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm terrible with coming up with names.  I had to use books to name my two kids. lol    I loved the chapter. 

Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

I think that I am going to like this.  I'm glad that you made Esme and Carlisle siblings - that way I don't have to feel bad about them being with other people.    Kat



Author's Response:

I didn't know if Esme and Carlisle would go over too well being written as siblings. But I'm so glad people are opened minded about it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

Delicious!    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Ummm...Wow!     You are such a tease!  lol       Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss

Holy Shit!  Great lemon...Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted

I am really enjoying your story!  Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations

Carlisle in the shower...Hot!        kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation

The plot thickens!       Kat  ^_^

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Wedding

I wonder how long Edward is staying in Forks.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

Oh no!!  What a mess!      

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

I love Bella and Carlisle together.  I do have to admit that I am feeling sorry for Edward though.  I am so used to Bella and Edward being together that I worry about him being broken hearted.  I love the chapter though.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

How did Edward figure it out?  I can't wait for the next chapter.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

Wonderful Story.  I really enjoyed it.  Thank you.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Thank you for such a wonderful story.  I'll be on the lookout for more from you in the future.      Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20503
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BACKSTORY

You have me curious as to where you are going to take this story.  I'll read on to find out.  Great start.    Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Well, I hope you like it.