Reviews by MidnightKat
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen's have just moved to Forks, there first day of school is boring as many. Until Bella Swan a strange girl who seems to avoid the people at Forks high, she is what as known as a freak. But how could she know of what the Cullen's are?

Smut in later chapters

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38083 Read Count: 42574
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying your story.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love the mystery that you are weaving with the story.  It keeps me wanting to read more to find out what happens next. 

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great Chapter. 

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You have me really puzzled.  I am dying to know where this is going.   :)  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Things are heating up between Bella and Edward.  Loved it.     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Can they bring Royce back and then kill him again  OR Will Royce still be able to have such a drastic effect on Bella if they changed her?

Good Chapter.     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like that you update so frequently but I really wish that your chapters were longer.  Just as I start to get back into the story the chapter is over.  I'd happily wait a few extra days for more story. 

Thanks for the wonderful storyline.     Kat

 

Changes and Surprises by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.

 

Thank you to Julie for making me a banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30287
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Hi.  I think you need to check out the chapters on this story - I read through chapter 3 or 4 but all of the other chapters are missing the story text.  It has the Author notes and the chapter notes but not the story text.  Please repost the chapters (just click on Manage stories - and then Edit the story/chapters)  You can then cut and paste the story text into each of the existing chapters. 

Thanks a bunch.  I am looking forward to reading more of this story.

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Never mind.  The Library seems to be having trouble with a lot of stories.  My stories are missing their story text now too.  Hopefully the story text will reappear soon.   

Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat for the warning.  I actually tried to post the next chapter last night and I couldn't even find my story!  I emailed the site but they never got back to me.  Oh well, the story is back and I hope that you are able to find the stoy and read it.  Please let me know what you think!  

 

Thanks for reading,

 

Lisa