Reviews by Miracle1901
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a foster child who is constantly being shipped from home to home. He attempts suicide daily. One night Charlie is sent to arrest him during a break in. What happens when Charlie finds out his real story? AH, OOC, Rated M for language/themes.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36910 Read Count: 10095
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Youre killin me smalls...youre killin me! yeah i totally quoted the sand lot...dont knock it that movie rocks! Loved the chapter even though I want to make Edward better and beat the shit out of Mike Newton. I hope that Bella was able to stop him before he cut to deep.



Author's Response:

LoL I love that movie too! L7 weenie!

Newton is definitely an ass in this story. Glad you like it!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want to cry...and you said my stuff was depressing. I really hope he finds some kind of happiness.



Author's Response:

LoL I don't usually do angst so it may not be as bad as yours but this Edward is pretty sad and broken. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Im loving this Bella! great chapter...I will read more tomorrow!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

such a great story! you did a wonderful job with the emotions. Glad Edward got his happy life he deserved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm honored you read it. This is the most angst I've ever written! It was hard for me.  I'm better w/ drama and romance.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok just so you know I have balled my eyes out through this whole thing so far. I want to protect Bella and kick Renee in her fat face! I need to read on now I just wanted to let you know you did the impossible by making me cry...like tears streaming down my face crying so well done.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Alirght, this story is amazing I have cried at lease once in almost every chapter. I want to protect Bella from anything that would or could ever hurt her. I hope that she soon realizes that she doesnt have to say yes to everything for the people now in her life to love her...they already do. Emmet chokes me up with his big brother protectivness and I love the way you have written a softer side to him in regaurds to his love for Rose. I cant wait to see where the ExB relationship goes from here. I hope that you will update soon if you have the chance before the baby comes. Again this one of the best stories I have read in a long time...well done!!!

Good luck with your baby I wish you well on your new addition!!!

Miracle

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aww, so sweet! cant wait for more. Congrats on the new baby!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter...Looking foward to more! Hope all is well with the newborn!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OMG...that was horrible that a parent could do that to their child. I'm looking foward to the Rose answers so i really hope that we get that chapter this week. I'm not a violent person but I really want to get my hands on Renee or any parent that abuses their kids in any way; its a sore spot for me so I take it personally when I read or see something like this happening. You are an amazing writer and the way you portray Bella is heartbreaking. Keep up the good work and I look foward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved it...at least now we know why rose was being so nasty. As always amazing chapter...i look foward to more.

 

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter...I love the progress that Bella is makeing! Looking foward to more.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter! Looking foward to more.

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

Crap now I have to wait for an update. Cute story cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

you're lucky, I update this one pretty regularly!  Glad you like it though~

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I so love that  you gave Carlisle tatts...drools!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG...I died a little when you described Carlisles sleeves! I am totally team Edward but I have a thing for Carlisle as well...I think my heart stopped!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Wounderful story, I laughed cried, and laughed some more!!! Great job!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Such a good chapter! I hope everything is alright with the baby preeclampcsia is really dangorus my sister in law and niece almost died because they didnt inform the doctor about the protine in her urine. SHe had a siezure and her heart stopped luckily they got her back and her and the baby are fine. I hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OOOHHH...Im really hoping you update this soon!!! Im impatient...LOL...great story cant wait for mroe!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter, it was nice to hear about some of Bella's past. I look foward to another update! I hope everything works out for her and Edward. I just want to pinch Emma's little cheeks. I seriously hope Kate goes the hell away.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Beautiful chapter, I look foward to reading what happens next. I really hope happier times are to come for Bella she deserves it. Emma has to be the cutest thing ever and the way she has connected with Bella makes me smile. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

GASPS...poor Emma, poor Edward. when we find Kate i think she is in for a beat down. please update soon!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG...I want to bitch slap Kate! Emma better come home to Edward. Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

FOr the love of god bring Emma home with no issues. Kate is seriously delusional if she thinks that she can get away from this. I hope you update soon and again BRING EMMA HOME!!!!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thank god she is back with them. I just hope she gets comfortable and can live a happy life she has been through enough shit!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I was getting kinda nervous that Emma wouldnt come around but I think she may just be alright. Great chapter looking foward to more!!!!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

such a good chapter! cant wait for more! And yes Bella is being extremly immature. She apparently doesnt know that pre-eclampsia is life threatening. I would really like to smack her in the back of the head. Update soon!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG...the angst is killing me! great chapter but I really think that these two need so HAPPY times! Cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Amazing chatper. You wrote PPD to the t! Its a miserable thing for a mother to go through. I cant wait for another update!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter! cant wait for more.

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

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Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Orientation Week

GAH...you killin me with the cliffies! cant wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Miracle~

Don't shoot yet.....I promise you will know what is in the box SOON!  I normally send you the preview but I will post it this time here.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Kasi~

Chapter 37 snippet

 

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“Bella, do you remember the box that came for you a week ago?” I asked.

“Oh, shoot.  Yeah, I forgot all about it.  Go get it sweetie and we can open it,” she said.

“Bella, I noticed the box the other night and I got an uneasy feeling about it.  I called Emmett and Jake, they agreed with me.  We actually had the bomb squad come and they took the box to check it to be sure it was not some sort of explosive.”

“Edward, was it a bomb?” Bella asked, clearly frightened.

“No it was not a bomb, my love.  It was from Alec.”

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: November

Great job BB! cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

next chapter will post soon!

:)
TAT~

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: What a Wedding

So I found this story at 530 this morning and have read every chapter. I wanted to review every chapter but I decided it was to good and wanted to read it all the way through. I wish I had had Bellas strength when I went through my ordeal. Sadly it took me years to get over it and still sometimes I find myself jumping at the slightest sound when I am alone. I am lucky in the way I found my Edward, and he is an amazing man who I trust entirely. Thank you for writing such a great story, I will add and review from here on out. Cant wait for the next one becaue Im hooked.



Author's Response:

Miracle~

I sent you the preview of the next chapter to you via the contact button on your profile!  As for the story love I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart.  This story is fiction, but parts of it are very much based on somethign that happened to me.  I knew my attacker and I was actually married to him and had filed for a divorce.  I also ended up being pregnant, I had a 12 almost 13 yr old daughter.  When I was 5 months pregnant with her I met my edward, but he after almost 13 yrs together turned into my nightmare.  Some guys do suffer from mid-life crisis.  This story is near and dear to me and I am greatful for you reading it and reviewing it.  I love to see the reviews adn I often wonder if the story is really good or not because I have such a low amount of reviews.  I have been told that the reviews I have gotten by far mean more then quantity because I have gotten only 3 semi negitive reviews.  I have over 300 reviews on FF and over 120 here so not to shabby I guess.  Thank you again for reading, and I hope to hear from you soon!  Don't forget to check your email and read the preview of chapter 32.

Kasi~

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Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore

Great chapter! I think Renee might have a bit more insight then people give her credit for. Looking foward to more!



Author's Response:

YES! I wanted to give Renee a likeable but yet odd characteristic and thus far from the reviews I have gotten here and at ff I have managed to do that....yay!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means more then you know to me.  Thank you for the story love!

I am sending you the pre-view of the next chapter by clickingthe contact me button on your profile so it will come to you via email from TWCS website.

Enjoy, and thank you again!

Kasi~

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Safety Procedures

great job...cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story.  I am glad that you are liking it.  Your preview of chapter 36 is sent to you via the contact button on your profile, so check your email for it.

Thanks again!

Kasi~

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: About That Box

Good job! I really hope that Alec gets whats coming to him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the story love, Alec is a force to be reckoned with for sure!  thanks for reading and reviewing and I will send your preview of chapter 38 to you via contact button on your profile!

Kasi~

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Birthday Text

Great job! Twins wow didnt see that one coming. cant wait to see what happenes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the story love and for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me.  The twins was a overwhelming vote for one boy and one girl twins and that is what everyone gets so yay!!! there are 2 of them.  :)

Kasi~

ps sent you the preview of next chapter via mail

 

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions

UM...you better be updating this ASAP! Who was shot? What the hell is going on? OMG...i will bne on the edge of my seat waiting.



Author's Response:

I promise that I will update soon!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I am grateful for your continued support.

Kasi~

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