Reviews by salli21
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: salli21 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

I love this story, but I think Bella should have more time to think, I mean, she just find out about the life style...please, dont take this the wrong way, I really love YOUR story, and because of that I'm not trying to tell you what or whant not write, is just an advise ;)!



Author's Response:

Of course I won't take it the wrong way. I promie that everything is happening for a reason. Yes Bella is getting way to much information all at once, but I think he needs all the information at once so that she can really 'see' what it would be like. I'm sure that Bella will get some time eventually...