Reviews by miclew
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Most stories that update with your consistancy...I end up deleting.....However,,, your story is soooo awsome, I've kept it on story alert.

I am asking you, as a faithful reader, to please be more considerate of your readers and update more often and to finish this story in a timely manner...

I know, how real life 'sneaks' up on you and takes over....but, the old saying goes..."Piss Or Get Off The Pot".....

This faithful reader really loves your writing, and is looking foward to a finished story from you sooner, rather than later,

Michelle Lew

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

M:

Grrrr.  I dub you the queen of cliff hangers.

However, I do love your story.

Michelle L.

Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I am still laughing out loud!!

Michelle L.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm soooo loving this story.  It is

different than all the rest.  Refreshing :)

Sincerely,

Michelle L.

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

I'm happy you really like =)

Thank you!

~Janine

Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

IBTAV:

I immediately stop what I'm doing when I get a notice

of your update and read your next chapter.

Loving it!!

Michelle L.



Author's Response:

Awwww Thank you so much =)

I'm happy you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading/commenting, reviews make me smile! And write FASTER! lol

~Janine

Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Excellent!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) So happy you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading/commenting!

Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

please come back soon...

I love, love, love your story!!

Miclew



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Yeah, RL is busy. Ugh! Wish I could just read and write all day. lol

I'm actually just editing the crazy long chapter now. <--- when I mean crazy long, I'm talking over 25,000 words. lol I should be finished soon. Hopefully, in a few hrs.

Thanks again,

~Jells

A tiny scene from Ben's vamp party:

Bella's POV

I never tried alcohol before, but tonight was the night to try new things. And I always wanted to try a certain drink that caught my attention at my favorite restaurant. I locked my eyes with the vampire bartender. “I’ll have a Green Apple Martini please.”

 

He nodded, shifting his gaze to Edward who was staring at me in astonishment. Edward broke his gaze and cleared his throat, ordering his drink, “I’ll have a BloodShot with Tequila and type O positive blood.” Edward turned his attention back to me, smirking. “Alcohol, Bella?”

 

I shrugged. “What? There’s a first time for everything, right?”

 

He chuckled, leaning down and whispering in my ear, “I’ve never seen a drunken Bella before.”

 

“You might get lucky tonight,” I giggled, taking a sip from the light green liquid. I moaned, savoring the sweet and sour flavor. The alcohol stung a little as it went down my esophagus, but I welcomed the feel.

 

“I’m sure that could be fun,” Edward purred, licking my cheek. “And interesting.”

 

Edward grabbed his BloodShot, tilting his head back and downing the thick red liquid. He licked his lips and set the shot glass down on the bar with an audible clank, watching me swish around a little chunk of a green apple in my martini glass.

Summary: Past Featured Story

chain

Summary: Bella is a rising fashion photographer. She isn't as lucky in her love life as she is in her professional one. She's hired by Edward, an American model with great popularity in Europe, to take some pictures for his book. Will he be just what she needs, or just another thorn in her side?

Banner made by me. 

;o)

Note: This is an O/S that as of now I have no intention to continue.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 1964
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Domino Effect

Sabrina:

Great job!! This story has left me breathless ;-)

Michelle L.

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

B:

Didn't even see that coming with Carlisle being Bella's brother. 

I love it!!

Michelle L.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Bebe:

I was wondering how you could do a 1 shot in 100 words...

now, I know...lol

best wishes,

Miclew

:-0

Summary: Past Featured Story

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afts2

 

banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268908
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lisa:

It is a great writer that can give the reader a

kaleidoscopic range of emotions, and you did this in

the first chapter in less than 1700 words.

Looking forward to the rest of  your story,

Michelle L.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Michelle:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: miclew Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

I love it, love it, love it!!!

;-)

ML 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Glad you like

I'll have my chapter up soon.

Thanks again

~Jells