Reviews by dreamzuvedward
Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: dreamzuvedward Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

Argh, yes I HATE Tanya, but that's what you were going for right? She is the epitome of a bad Dom, exploiting the trust that a Sub puts in the Dom to have their SAFETY in mind at all times! And for all her steeliness, she really is a coward for just not backing out of the relationship with Edward.

Phew, there, I feel better. Now on to delicious sexting betweenst Madam Bella and her pet, yum!

Reviewer: dreamzuvedward Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Ooh goody, just what I was hoping for! It fits perfectly that Madam Bella would be the one to give him aftercare. Now please tell me Carlisle kicks that f**cking sadist out of the club!

Reviewer: dreamzuvedward Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

Ah yes, that makes me feel better. Bella had the exact response to that horrific scene that I thought a sane person should. I guess as a reader I am reacting far more strongly than someone in the club would have, without the prior knowledge of Edward's hard limits and tendency to trust his Dom not to push him to safe word. It's difficult to read all of Edward's pain and panic, and it was gut wrenching. Very good writing though!

Reviewer: dreamzuvedward Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

Thank goodness, a Carlisle/Tanya showdown. Grr, I really hate that woman. Regardless of what has happened to her it has perverted her basic humanity. Can you tell she is a sore subject? Now Bella's massage of Edward was lovely, you can really sense her care for him through her actions. I know it won't always be this way, but this is what this chapter called for.  I have no doubt that Bella will rise to the occasion, if Edwards dreams are any example.

Reviewer: dreamzuvedward Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

Delicious lemon, and still sweet and soothing time between them. I'm enjoying it while it lasts! PS, i hate tanya...