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Forbidden Desire by RosaBella75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will. 

Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual gratification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her. 

That is until she meets Edward.  Suddenly her Father's insistence on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life.  How will Bella and Edward survive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?

This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.

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*WARNING*  This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters.  DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42320 Read Count: 12030
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Rowan Moon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Traitorous Nirvana

BRAVA!

What a glorious chapter dosed heavily with the lemons we love to read from you Di.   The poetry was such a lovely touch in the scenes with Carlisle and Esme.  I love the line - "A burden becomes light when it is carried willingly."  So beautiful - I am using this quotation!

Twiliteaddict's scene with Carlisle and Esme was picture perfect, and a genius way to plant the seed within Bella that monogamous love is possible and so much more satisfying.

Amazing job ladies!!!

xo

Mistress Moon

 



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much, Love!!!

I did have a lot of fun once the inspiration of him waking wrapped around her that way struck (we have camping with my hubs to thank for it)! *mwha*

I'll be sure to let TA know you loved the poetry and her line so very much.  She'll be tickled!

I had orriginally asked TA to do it as an outtake, but then it fit in so brillliantly, I knew it had to go in the main story.  I'm glad you found it as lovely a way to help Bella through her confusion.

Thanks ever so much, bb!!!