Oh noooes!!!! Evil little ficster writers! I am craving the next chapter like Bella I mean Elizabeth I mean Bella needs food. Great job ladies. 

I wonder what could possibly be the next part of their training. The first part was pretty bad. You guys are pure evil and I love it. 

Holy Mother of little baby Jesus this fic is one twisted something. And yet, I can't stop reading. It. Is. Just. So. Freaking. Good. 

I absolutely LOVE how insane this whole story is. The plot is ridiculous and I just want to yell and yell that these people are crazy but that would mean I wouldn't get more of the story and then I would be sad. Excellent job of creating this wicked, wicked world.

Blessed be. 

(hehehe)

So excited to see an update on this story! Good job. 

It's been a while but I'm still here and more than happy to continue reading this piece of twisted fic. How is it you ladies keep writing these wicked stories? I just love 'em. 

Is Bella getting her memory back? What does this mean for her and for the memory-removal process. Very, very interesting. 

I love the addition of the black dress of solitude and shame. You twisted ladies really know how to make a punishment. 

Great job ladies!

Great chapter. I wonder how Elizabeth will get out and/or come to realize her name is Bella. 

Good chapter. 

Oh man!! That evil, evil Phil. Such a great chapter chock full of twistedness. She was sooo close. Or not I guess. 

Dun dun duuuuun.... it seems you like to leave us in a state of confusion, wanting more. I love these little twists, they make the story so good. And the flier! That was a perfect addition. 

dun dun duuuuunnnnnnn. You guys are awesome with your cliffies. I figured if Aro ever returned Carlisle's phone calls it would be to say he had absolutely no idea who James was. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great job with this one. Poor Carlisle. Everything is such a mess and it is all James' fault. I love how you managed to draw out his torture even further but giving him a slight reprieve. Que evil laugh... mwhahahahahah

Shit. I almost peed my pants I was so afraid just there. In that moment, I got the chills and wanted to scream myself.

Good chapter! I'm biting my nails.

Frying pan to the face!! Or something equally awesome. James I think has completely lost his mind. Gone absolutely daffy with power and his sadistic tendencies. Oh what an evil, evil man. 

Great job ladies! I wonder who gets the credit of taking him down and who gets to free Bella and Victoria. Edward?

Oh this is wonderful! We are just sadistic readers that enjoy the torture of characters that deserve it (and some that don't). This was quite severe. Poor James. Actually, who cares what he thinks. He will learn to accept his new life, dry ass and all. 

Great job ladies. You're methods of retribution know no bounds. I think this is cause for an evil laugh. mwahahaha

That was a beautiful first time. I like how Edward no longer has an expectation of what Bella is required to do. And because of that, he gets everything he wanted and more. Great job!!

Loved this line mainly because it made me laugh a little out of context: "I had no idea the difference love would make. The way Bella lovingly caressed my balls." Really? "lovingly caressed my balls"? That's pretty funny in my head. 

There really should be eery music playing for the ends of these chapters. The kind that builds up to a fever pitch before the big dun duun DUUUUNNN. You and your cliffies. How I love them in TPW. I liked Bella's little freakout. I was wondering about that since there was no mention of a condom in the last chapter.

I'm glad Edward did what he did - he managed to keep her safe (albeit with scaring the shit out of her first) and out of Carlisle, Dimitri and Marcus' grasp. Great job with creating such a roundabout way of doing it. Although, I have a feeling Carlisle will want more than just the wrists as evidence - he may even want to make sure she has marks on the rest of her body.

Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! I can't stand being stuck in a cliffie spot like this. But this story is just so fantastic put together I can do nothing but wait here, hopefully I'll be patient. Good job!

Phew... glad the nightmare is over and Bella has spent the necessary time getting back to herself. You did a great job with this story, even with the horrible events that transpired. I think you should turn it into an original novel. I certainly would take another look at it if I knew you were behind the writing. It's a fucked up story but no one can say it is boring. Thanks for always taking the plunge and posting, even when people were awful towards it. You did a wonderful job of bringing it to life and making me cringe just reading it. But for whatever reason I had to keep reading to get to that HEA. And here we are. It took a while for them to get back to the point of seeing each other but I'm glad they are giving it a second go. 

I'd love to hear more from Renee and Esme. They certainly have plenty of story to tell and I'm sure you could conjure up perfectly horrid things for their past. Mwahaha (evil laugh, in case you couldn't tell). 

Thanks for the fuckedness. I thoroughly enjoyed it and maybe that makes me just as fucked up as the rest of your readers. Hey, at least I have company in Hell. :)

Can't wait for the epi. This was a great final chapter. 

hahahaha... great chapter. Wonder how long this'll last..

Glad to see Edward finally came clean and told his mom everything (except for the drugs...). I guess this made me not want to kill Edward. We needed to hear his reasoning cause I think a bunch of your readers were pretty pissed about how quiet he's been. Good job!

It was a good reprieve between smut. You know, we need some plot sometimes. 

Yum-oh! I love the little bit of pre-sexing girl on girl loving we get here. But nobody got an O. How sad. I hope they make up for it in the bedroom. 

This will be an excellent story. It's got a great start so keep it up. I wonder what Isabella will be like when she arrives. Good job. 

I think it's funny some of the things Charlie says in his head (" It's kind of freaking me out a little."). hahaha. Esme's POV is just so motherly and sweet. You can't help but wanna hug her. I liked the super fast mini diagnosis by Carlisle. And Alice... what a powerful ball of something she is. I think the Rose thing is getting blown a bit out of proportion given the fact that everyone knows her nature is brash. But seriously Rose, just suck it up and apologize. Good job with this one. The writing seems to have gotten smoother and a bit more relaxed. 

Such a great job with this chapter - it seems like it be so tough to write in any POV about what's going on with Bella past or present. I like the part with Bubba; it seems like such a great way to bring Bella out of her shell. She seems so happy and carefree. 

Wonderfully sweet chapter. So glad they got Bella a puppy! I think the Jacob thing was a little excessive. I understand he was probably told about Bella and how not to upset her by bringing up Renee but still... people forget. He was just trying to get to know her and hope to get in her pants (he's like 14! that's all guys think about). 

I am not looking forward to finding out what is about to happen to Bella. Ok, I am but only because this story is very, very interesting. It hurts to hear about Bella's awful life experiences.

Wow!! Great job with this chapter. So much stuff happened in this one and it ended with such a cliffie. 

So Emmett got drunk, eh? I guess Rose rejected him and he felt the need to drown his sorrows. Looks like Bella's doing much better and so that's good. Great job!

Good chapter. That was proly Bella's best birthday ever. She deserved it. And maybe she'll get a first kiss from that wonderful boy on her arm 

Commence happy dance! The only way to make it better would be if Renee suffered a terrible illness and died a slow, painful, humiliating death.

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward has finally come to his senses. How could he not see he was a huuuge hypocrite when it came to him and Jasper? Come on! LOL. I can't wait to see what the Dads say to the boys dating the daughters. My guess is they will give them a hard time but will be fine with it. Maybe an 'I told you so' for Edward.

Congrats with the new baby!!

Great chapter. First dates are always so nerve-wracking, especially when you have no idea you are on one... lol

Happy to see an update on this very disturbing fic. I wonder what it will take Edward to learn how incredibly wrong he is. How has he not made the connection between Jane and Bella? What a dirtbag!

Good job. 

Good job with this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens in the next few. I hope they don't push Bella too hard too fast. 

I trust you but I reeeeaaallly hope you know what you are doing. Bella is a mess and they just plan on kidnapping her and forcing her to talk to absolute strangers? I dunno, that seems a little more farfetched than even I can handle... 

I do like ChPOV, I mean, who wouldn't? Good job. 

I wonder how long it will take for them to get her to talk. It was really good that they brought her painting stuff otherwise she would be really lost. 

Maybe she will start believing she is worth it. Nice to see she is at least responding in letter form. Good job. 

I didn't think it was necessary to write both POVs. Charlie's was sufficient to describe what was going on. 

Good job. 

Oh, poor Edward. Good job with this chapter though.

Did you hear she killed someone? hahahaha. Oh dear. Those rumors... 

Lauren is just an awful human being. 

Good chapter. I like the response from her teachers. 

Good chapter. The writing seems to be getting better with each one. 

Fantastic. A good first day at therapy. I like how he jumps around and it throws Bella off a bit. I think it somehow makes it easier for her to answer. 

Good chapter!

Such a sweet date. I bet he was hoping to call it that and she obviously didn't even realize what it was. Very nice. 

Awww... I wonder what his reaction will be. My guess is a return ILY and possibly a little kissy kissy action. 

Hmm... a happy Lauren, that can't be good...