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Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

loved it

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons

insane lol

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List

she'll learn

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

go Edward!

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

I think his monster is jealous

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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

oh wow, poor Alice....

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

  ********

  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

fd


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

very good beginning! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Raven Jadewolfe!

I'll be posting once or twice a day...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Choices

At least Emmett understands and can help her



Author's Response:

Emmett is a good brother!

Thanks for reading, Raven!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Face to Face

poor Bella, even as a vampire, Edward overwhelms her lol



Author's Response:

Ah, yes he does...

He smells tasty!

Thanks for reading, Raven!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Who is She?

maybe he's dreamed of her? 



Author's Response:

That's a good guess, Raven!

Time will tell...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters

I'm thinking obviously Lauren Mallory, but there's also Laurent to consider too



Author's Response:

Laurent!  I hadn't thought of him! 

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

you forgot delusional!!!!!!!!! awesome chapter



Author's Response:

DELUSIONAL!  Yep, that's right in there!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

Emmett's got Lauren pegged perfectly but I don't think Edward understands just how dangerous the situation is 



Author's Response:

Emmett...he's smarter than some give him credit for...

Yes, Edward doesn't *get* it...yet!

Thanks, so much, Raven Jadewolfe, for your reviews!

Kathie

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Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Lauren's aggression is going to kick into overdrive once she finds out about the boyguards



Author's Response:

Oh, yes...it will...she's SCARY...but so much fun to write.

Thanks for the review!

Kathie

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Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Discoveries

Hmmm makes me wonder if the nutball is going to try to break into Edward's house now....I hope Jasper eats her lol then again maybe not, might give him heartburn



Author's Response:

LOL...MY Jasper has a bit more control!  LOL...He IS a professor after all!  Wouldn't do to have him eat the students...

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Nomads

I really like the way you cemented Edward's determination to be a veggie vamp, and that the wolves look to Esme as a surrogate mother so quickly 



Author's Response:

Thanks, RJ...and you don't mind a million epilogues, right?  lol...

Kathie

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 On Guard

I think Esme should get involved to protect Jessica!!!



Author's Response:

Clever girl, Raven Jadewolfe! Esme gets a part a little later on...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to Alice!!!



Author's Response:

You know he's going to LOVE her...well, maybe!

Thanks for reading, Raven...another chapter this evening...

Kathie

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 His Girl Friday

sometimes the mom is doing the envelope stuffing I'm assuming



Author's Response:

Excellent guess, Raven!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taken

I think Bella needs to accept that she's falling for him, even if it's just to herself lol good job



Author's Response:

She really does, doesn't she?

Maybe in TODAY's chapter.... ;D

Thanks, Raven!

Kathie

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Epiphany

Mama/Daughter nutballs might have a bigger fight than they think know that Bella has realized that she loves Edward



Author's Response:

LOL...they really ARE...and so much fun to write!!!

Yep, now that Bella has admitted it...the protective lioness is on the prowl!

Kathie

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone

They'd better hurry!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

They will HURRY!

Kathie

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Interrogation

yeah, I definitely had flashbacks of Misery when you described him being chained to the piano



Author's Response:

Yep, me too!

Shiver....

Thanks for reading, RJ!

Kathie

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus

OMFG that was so scary awesome that I read it twice!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Twice?  Cool....

Thanks, RJ!

Kathie

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Rescue

I hope the bitch felt the flames too!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Okay, so you want to be a member of the "Lorena FELT it" team...!!!

There are MANY that want to be in that...me included!

Kathie

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Later

What is she going to tell Edward about all the things he saw??



Author's Response:

She has a PLAN!

Thanks, Raven!

Kathie

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question

That was the perfect question to ask lol



Author's Response:

Glad you liked his question!  He's a guy...LOL

Thanks for the steaming rating!

Kathie

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 It was Time

The house is beautiful!!!! And, personally, I think Edward already has a clue to what Bella and her family are 



Author's Response:

Isn't that house great?  I'd love to wander through it...with or without Edward!

So you think he might have a clue?  LOL

The next chapter (to be posted later today) is one of my favorites!!!

Hope you will like it too...

Thanks, again, RJ, for the lovely review and rating!

Kathie

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers

That was a great way to lead into the talk, with the painting!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that, RJ!  The painting was rather helpful!~

Kathie

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

that was great! I love how you had her finally have to break and run when she starting thinking about his blood. I can't wait to see what Alice says to him!



Author's Response:

She really wanted IT!

Thanks, RJ!~

Kathie

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Anticipation

Okay, all we need is Timone and Pumba singing and we'll be set!!! loved it!



Author's Response:

Hakuna Matada!

LOL...thanks for the laugh!

Kathie

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Company

I'm hoping to see a Tanya beat down soon! :-) better yet, put her with Jacob lol



Author's Response:

WITH Jacob?  Ewwwww....although Jake does come in a little later...mwahahaha!

I think you'll enjoy the Tanya beat down!  This evening...

Kathie

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Gifts

I hope Bella beats Tanya's ass if she keeps her crap up



Author's Response:

I think you'll enjoy what happens!

Thanks, RJ...

Kathie

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Options

That conversation's going to be fun lol



Author's Response:

Good morning RJ!

Yes, a fun conversation!

Thanks for reading and those lovely coffee cups...I'm off to get my second one of the morning...

Kathie

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Perks

isn't it great when your other half offers to help with "research"? lol



Author's Response:

LOL...and he actually WAS helpful...LOL

Thanks for reading, RJ...and those cups!

Kathie

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Drawbacks

Let Alice put his death together, she's great for the dramatics! 



Author's Response:

That's a good idea!

Kathie

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Roommates

love the inscriptions



Author's Response:

Hi RJ...I had such a good time researching those!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Capture the Flag

they don't waste any time, do they? lol loved it!



Author's Response:

Well...no! An unending supply of $$$...and Alice's know-how...Wedding in a Day!  LOL

Kathie

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We're Going to the Chapel

Bella hasn't thought about his appetite as a newborn either! I wonder who's going to bet on the number of beds they break!!!



Author's Response:

Dang, should have thought about betting on THAT!~

LOL

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 We Do

I'm surprised Emmett wasn't more raunchy lol



Author's Response:

I think that the GIRLS were trying to keep him in line...LOL

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Changes

I loved it! I'm also hoping that in this one that he can control his mind reading!



Author's Response:

Thanks, RJ...makes me happy to hear that the CHANGE was good for you...

I really thought the POWER OVER ME song fit to a T...

He's actually going to have some *help* with that mind reading thing... ;D

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 New Life

I love Edward's reasoning that he gave the wolves 



Author's Response:

Glad you thought it made sense, RJ!

Hopefully the Elders will feel the same...

Thanks for those lovely coffee cups!

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Preparations

loved the Emmett and Edward tossing! And Seth is always such a sweetheart



Author's Response:

Hey, RJ...glad you liked the TOSSING...it was different anyway...LOL

Kathie

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue 1.0 Edward

short, yes, but important because of the treaty



Author's Response:

Yep, that treaty needed to be tweaked...just a bit!

Thanks, RJ!  Alice will be up later...

Kathie

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue 2.0 Alice

loved that Alice finally found some peace over her human family 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that, RJ...I wanted her to have had SOME love in her human life...

Thanks for the steaming cups...I really need one right now!

Kathie

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue 3.0 Rosalie

great name for the studio!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that!  LJ Summers gave me that one...and I let her EMBRY say it...she has a story that has Embry imprinting on Bella...yeah, I know...I thought I'd HATE it...but I ADORE him...and it works...just because she is such an awesome writer...

Kathie

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas

OMFG Christmas is so Emmett! I'm surprised he didn't go all secret Santa on everyone, but it was still so adorable!



Author's Response:

LOL...glad you enjoyed Emmett...he is such a KID...

I really needed all those coffee cups today!  Thank you!

Kathie

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle

loved Carlisle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad, RJ!  He is quite yummy...but the blood wasn't!!!

Made me cringe too...

Kathie

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

I wonder if I sent a letter to Esme that I could persuade her to adopt me too lol



Author's Response:

Can you ask her for me too?

Esme never gets enough screen time...

Thanks for reading, RJ...

Kathie

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue 7.0 Jasper

Jasper....dripping wet...*swoon*



Author's Response:

THAT's what I thought!  LOL

I really like him in my DRAGON STONES too...he has a bit more "humor" there...

Kathie

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue 8...Vee...Part 1 of 2

lmao my little sister's name is Tessa!



Author's Response:

LOL...and is she NICE?  I wanted a name that meant "hunter" or something like that...and "Harvester" really worked for me...

Hopefully your sister is SWEET!

Thanks for reading, RJ...and those coffee cups!

Kathie

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue 8...Jacob...Part 2 of 2

unless Bella can't help herself when she sees her hubby in a suit lol



Author's Response:

LOL...that could happen!  Bella kidnapping him...

Thanks, again, Raven Jadewolfe, for all of your lovely support!  I've enjoyed your reviews very much.

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue 9.0 Edward

just amazingly awesome, as usual! I'm going to miss this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Raven!

I'm going to miss it too...

Now that I've got the next chapter of DRAGON STONES posted, I'm working on Bella's Epilogue...

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Sight

loved it, especially Bella's snarky attitude

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Open Book

stupid boy lol



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! Boys are stupid, arent they??? Thanks for reading and reviewing ;)

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Phenomenon

Eddie boy is a hybrid

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

poor Bella

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Revelations Part 2

wow!



Author's Response:

Thank you Raven for all your reviews. I am glad you are liking this crazy story as much as I like writing it =)

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter

nice switch up with their personalities

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

what a messed up situation



Author's Response:

Again, thank you for your reviews!!! Everything is going to get a little...weird? LOL, thanks again =)

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

wow, James is one mean bastard, him and Esme deserve to be together

Author's Response:

Yes...yes he is! He didnt deserve Bella's love....he still doesnt....though something tells me he thinks he does...lol. As always thank you for your review!

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2

uh oh

Author's Response:

LMAO! You can say that again ;) Thanks for the review =)

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

awesome chapter and Happy Birthday!

Author's Response:

Thanks Raven for taking the time to review. Also, thanks for the bday wishes. So glad you're still enjoying my story =)

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

all I have to say is...WOW!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you Raven! For EVERY review and all your love and support of this story. It really has meant so much. Thank you :)

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

he's lost his mind

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

he's really messing with her head

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

someone has to be controlling Jasper

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

okay psycho lady lol

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I know Jazz will be manipulating Bella's emotions

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

omg poor Jasper!

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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hhmmmmmm, the plot thickens

Author's Response:

Very much so.  It is Victoria's plan.  :)

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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hmmmm...makes me wonder how they're going to reach Bella and Jasper

Author's Response:

Good question, especially since B & J are already on a plane to Iceland and they can't seem to get a clue. 

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

uh oh

Author's Response:

I agree. 

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

o wow! She jumped into this mess with some gene splicing techy stuff! cool!

Author's Response:

Pretty much.  Glad you liked it!