Reviews by abbygirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises

great chapter. cant wait for the next part

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter happy that she is back with edward

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you it was hard to get it started but once I started it all just flowed.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

a great start



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

another good chapter



Author's Response:

I hope that you will think that they only get better.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

great chapter it was nice to get a look a rosalie's backstory



Author's Response:

You will see more about Rose in a couple of chapters.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was hard to write with everything going on in Real Life. I wish I could spend more time in fantasy land, but I can't.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: The Doctor's Home Life

great chapter love your story

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

great chapter. it's nice to see a little backstory to the beginning of edward rosalie's marriage.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

great chapter. you did a great job getting inside alice's head and showing her relationship with edward and rosalie



Author's Response:

Thanks. Bella is next, but I have a feeling this one os going to be a hard one to write.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

great chapter. I think that you should keep the chapters the length they are now and update a little later



Author's Response:

Thanks, I will be doing just that.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

great chapter so glad that E&B are going to try.



Author's Response:

Yeah for them. Hopefully they can work it out.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

great chapter. glad that they are putting all their cards on the table



Author's Response:

I just hope no one will try to play 52 card pick up during the next chapter.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

great chapter as always



Author's Response:

Thanks Abby I try.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

great chapter love the fact that they're all bonding



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

great chapter i love alice and all her crazy planning.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

great chapter. poor bella had to deal with hurricane alice and now edward's little sister i dont know how she will hold up.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

great chapter. siobhan such an advanced 14 yr old. cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

great chapter. loved the look into roaslie's head and the introduction to the rest of the cullen family.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark

Loved the chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next.

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter and cliffhanger love your story

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. cant wait to see what happens next

 

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. happy that everything is out in the open and they can move forward

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. hope that edward and bella work everything out soon

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. love getting inside edward's head.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter. so sad its over, but you did a great job writing it

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so cute. renee is such a good big sister

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great job. cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter love your story

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great chapter. cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great chapter. little emma is so cute

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great chapter love your story

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great chapter. little emma is so cute



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great chapter. can something really bad happen to Kate? pretty please

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter. cant wait for kate to get whats coming to her

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter. hope emma gets home soon

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter. happy that emma is back with her  parents where she belongs

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter. hope they get emma back soon

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chapter. loved their little wedding. poor emma she is so confused i hope that they work through it soon

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aw im so sad its over, but it was a great story and you did a great job writing it

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :) 

 

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

great chapter. cant wait to see what bella has to tell him



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

great chapter. edward is so wonderful to bella.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

great chapter. happy that bella has some normalcy in her life along with edward

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

great chapter love that edward and bella and working through her past together. theyre so sweet



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

great chapter. cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

great chapter love the little friendship alice and edward and starting

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

great chapter. cant wait to see what happens w/ charlie

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

great chapter. hope that bella will be okay

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

great chapter. cant wait for them to go on a real date

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

great chapter. i love the relationship that edward is forming with the cullens and his relationship with bella is great too

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

great chapeter as always. cant wait to see what happens in portland, hopefully nothing too bad.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

loved the chapter. poor jacob really needs help. this is the first story where i actually felt sorry for him. cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

loved the chapter. cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

loved the chapter. loved edward punching alec he really had it coming. cant wait to see what happens next.

Swing Me Home by fiberkitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

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Mourning the loss of her husband, a widowed Bella moves back to Forks. Fate keeps throwing recently divorced Edward into her path. Can they fight past the pain and form a life together or are their hearts shattered beyond repair? ExB,flashback BxJake


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60506 Read Count: 5841
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: EPOV: Birthday Wishes

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: BPOV: Tears of Joy and Pain

great chapter. wish i could spend my birthday with edward :)

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Moon's Gift

great chapter

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: EPOV: Honoring the Past and the Future

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Alice and Bella are on the trip of a lifetime, spending Halloween in one of the most haunted cities in the world brings scares, laughs and much more than either of them ever expected.

One shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: abbygirl Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story i love everything that you write