Reviews by VaniV
Summary:

Bella is the local bad girl.  Edward is the new kid.  What happens when they meet while she is serving out her latest punishment at church?  Rated NC-17 for lemon and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5466 Read Count: 1509
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sinner and the Saint One Shot

I loved it.. especially the last sentence.... that's just too fitting



Author's Response:

Yeah, I couldn't resist that last sentence.  I'm glad you liked it.  I couldn't believe it when I wrote it and then I was worried I would offend people.  Thanks for understaning it for what it was, pure smut and entertainment.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG that's just mean.... And Edward really is stupid....

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Loved it, I can't believe it's over....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I came on here on the suggestion from abbymickey24 from FF, who recommended your story, and I must say, just from the first chapter, I think I definitely made the right choice... In not even 500 words you got me hooked...

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*shivers* This guy is totally getting to me...

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

His "blood" ? Interesting element that you added... not to mention really hot... I am absolutely loving it.

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am absolutely enjoying your story, but find that (I think just like Bella in fact) I am sometimes having trouble seeing what is acceptable and what not. For example, at the beginning she was taught to behave a certain way and that she would be punished otherwise, and yet Jasper doesn't punish her at all and seems in fact happy when she is acting out a bit, or going against his wishes (when she insisted that she hugs Emmet)... so if I was in Bella's place, I'd be totally confused as to how to act. Also that the girls are sharing everything sounds great, but I would have thought that Jasper wouldn't want that... possessive as he is... or maybe it's different as she talks with females...

Loving it :)

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, here I am having reached the end of what's been written... I am really enjoying it, but I am still confused and Jasper's behaviour is giving me whiplash too. I hope that after the change thing's won't be so confusing anymore... I can't wait for more :)

Summary:

Isabella Swan is forced to seek out protection from the very family that abandoned her a century ago.  How will the love of her life react in finding her alive and well after one hundred years of believing she was dead.

**Written as a One-Shot/ My Entry for Darkward Vamp Contest**

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10894 Read Count: 1770
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god... he's gone mad, really... I liked this story though, because it once again shows the controlling Edward who always thinks he knows better...

Summary:

Edward is an English soldier that tortures Scottish people to get military information out of during the 1300's. Bella is a captured Scottish woman with information. What will Edward do to get Bella to speak?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10833 Read Count: 2117
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very interesting.... I wish you would post the epilogue soon



Author's Response:

In the process of writing it.

Fantasies by Cecilia1204 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

He had paid handsomely for her - and he was determined to get his money's worth.

Second place in The Peenaters Jasper/Alice Songfic Smut Contest on FF

STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT -  AH/AU


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4162 Read Count: 581
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was very hot.... I was expecting this type of ending and am glad I was right... *steals sly glances at her own husband*

Payback by pixdog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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Edward teases Bella and she comes up with a plan to get payback. Two shot.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3136 Read Count: 810
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Revenge

Wow that was hot... I don't generally read E/B, but loved this one... It's fun to see Edward loosen up a bit... and dirty talk is always sexy...



Author's Response:

Thanks it does tend to get the juices flowing huh

HONEY by Cullenfest Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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This is a one-shot chapter extracted from my Loving Edward story as it post-dates the formal timeline of Loving Edward. 

Told from Bella's POV.

Nessie is almost six months old.  Bella & Edward take her hunting with Jacob.  Bella & Edward reward themselves afterwards with a little light sexual relief - they are after all still newlyweds...

Note:  Rated NC-17 for explicit sexual scene
Note:  This out-take chapter has migrated across from the FanFiction site.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2300 Read Count: 470
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Honey (Stand Alone Chapter)

That was very hot... loved it... and loved Jazz too... sometimes being an empath has its perks (or downsides *gg*)



Author's Response:

thank you very much for your kind review and for taking the time to leave feedback.  hope you enjoy the story.

First by esglee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

As Edward prepares for Jasper’s arrival on the day after their high school graduation, he reminisces about their relationship and all of the ‘firsts’ they’ve shared. Rated NC-17 for mature content, including slash. AH, E/J.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10238 Read Count: 633
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow... Congrats for winning the contest, I absolutely loved this story. It almost made me cry. I loved the intensity of it and the lemon was nice as well...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review!  I really enjoyed writing these boys and was shocked when I was told I won 'Best Slash' in the contest.  Writing the boys' intimate moments was nerve wracking to say the least, so I'm glad you liked them as well as the build up to the boys' first time.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. It's appreciated!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is tortured by Mike Newton's thoughts about Valentine's Day. He decides to mess with him a little by inviting him and Jessica on a date with himself and Bella. Hilarity ensues. Set after Breaking Dawn. Human Mike and Jessica and Vamp Edward and Bella.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3493 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

rofl

Insecurities by JamesRamsey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

insecurities

Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be safe

 

My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there.  5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Award


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 185033
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 May 2011
Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That's just great... I love your story and I love this Jasper... somehow, from the ending of the last chapter, I think Alice and Jasper are not together anymore... I love the dedication with which he takes care of Bella...

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it love it love it.... Edward's behaviour absolutely reminded me of Gollum in LotR.... it was really more or a "my preciousss" sentiment rather than love...

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Slight inaccuracy at the beginning of this chapter I think: Jasper has changed lots of people... but I guess it could be argued no one meant anything to him.

I am absolutely enjoying it though :)

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

God of War actually comes up in many FF... but I agree it's particularly fitting

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*sniff* Oh dear that's just sad... Sorry for my earlier comments regarding "inaccuracies".... I like the way your story is turning out, all the better for the small changes you make :) But where is poor Jasper ?

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved it, really... I am glad he finally came to his senses... overlooking the most basic thing is a typical guy trait... And the Major was just yummy... sexy and intense... I hope both of them will enjoy their newfound love without any interruptions from others now....

Reviewer: VaniV Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it again... but I'm sad now, because I reached the end of the published part... I certainly hope you will post more soon.