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Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter. Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago. Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground? What will happen when these two cross paths?
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: COLLISION
I love the story, I can't wait to read more? Does Peter know who Bella is to the Cullen's or does that come latter. I wounder how Jasper would take to knowing Bella was with Maria? I wounder how Peter would introduce the God of War and God of Destruction..great name by the way. It is really hard to find stories were Bella has or will be with Maria, and I really love those kind of stories.
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much...stay tuned for more!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: RUNNING
Hmm...I wounder if she means Phoenix or Forks? I tink its the latter but I guess I'll have to wait. The whole 'God' thing, Love it. I also like that she doesnt plane to burn Marie. I assume thats why she only has her head, like trophy maybe? Can't wait for me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting on the fact she doesn't plan on burning Maria's head. You're the first to comment on that and I love that part. It makes Bella seem overly cruel and sort of demented; I think 200 years of war will do that to a girl, you know? Thanks! again!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: HOME
I loved it. I assume the whole Rosalie attacking instead of Jasper was on purpous? Knowing Rosalie she probably didnt feel to bad, probabbly wouldnt have even if Edward hadnt stopped her. Don't get me wrong I love Rosalie but she needs to get over herself. There are plenty of Humans who can not have children of their own and some can't even adopt because seriously that is expensive and you have to be married. I can't wait to next Sunday, such a long wait but so worth it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Yes, it was on purpose...reader request actually! I hear you! I never got that part with Rosalie either. There are plenty of women out there that don't even want children...whatever. Thanks again!
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: LUCY
My god..Lucifer...Lucy...brillant. Its also kind of ironic that that would be the name given to her, because Maria once had two sisters, Nettie and Lucy and I am pretty sure Jasper was the one to dystroy the two sisters. Jasper's could have a field day knowing sweet little Bella now goes by the name Lucy...suits her in a twisted way.
Edward really fucked up. I hope she kicks his ass, maybe hides one of his limbs somewhere...possibly his 'tool' if you know what I mean. Sorry I am rambling. I can't wait for the next chapter, I almost had a breakdown waiting for this one, paitence is not one of my virtures but it was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. You are so right; I forgot about her sisters, huh? Good things to come. Good things come to those who wait. :) Thanks again!
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: CIRCLING
Lovely! Hmm i wounder who it could be? Maybe the rest of the cullens or the wolves or maybe some newborns come after maria's head or after bella. So many posiblities. I can hardly wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! You will probably see the next chapter in a day or so...
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: THE END
Poor Bella...i feel so bad for her. I always love stories where Bella has a baby, even if something tragic happens in the end. i have quiet a few most are not posted but you get the point. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! You should post them.
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Wow! Wonderful, I can't wait for more. I wonder, could it be maria's head he is hearing. i mean technacly she isnt dead only burried. if it isnt i'd love to know how they would react to knowing about Maria's head.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Maybe, maybe not...stayed tuned... I can promise there will be more of Maria. ;)