Reviews by coryoplayer
Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91317
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

B.B.

I was over the moon to see a new chapter this morning from you!!!

You got me on this one. I wasn't expecting Seth to quit.

Looking forward to what you and your muse are going to do now!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

BB

Truthfully. When I opened my e-mail this morning, the best I was hoping for was an update as to how you were doing with the books.

Imagine my surprise. It was a full fledged chapter for me to read!!!!! YAHOO!!!!

Glad to read you've got the books done. I look forward to the day you say they are both dompletely done and then I'll do some searching in order to read them.

Now onto Endless Awakenings. I'm over the moon to read that Bella seems to be doing so much better. Still a ways to go. Which is fully understandable. But it's great to read that she's moving forward!!!! Now how long until the answer if Bella is pregnant or not??????

Ready for more when you are BB!!!!! And thanks again for the great surprise in my inbox this morning!!!!

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

B.B.

Family time. You gotta love it!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

B.B.

Firstly, how is your daughter? Everything has been worked out in her hospital stay I hope!!! Real life always comes first!!!!

You know you're readers will wait!!!

As for the chapter. That James gave me the creeps in this chapter. Not liking that creepy feeling at all!!!!

Update when you can. But just incase you don't before I leave for Cozumel on the 15th. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!! Hope Santa brings you something you want for Christmas!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

She's better. She was diagnosed with type 1 diabetes so we are working on managing her care and learning to change our lifestlyes a bit. She's doing good though, giving herself her own shots. She amazes me more and more everyday. Anyway, I hope to get back to my somewhat normal schedule but if I miss you, I hope you have a very Merry Christmas, Cory:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

B.B.

You've got quite the journey coming up to give us readers. So remember to take your vitamins please!!! :)

I hope Carlisle takes Bella's advice and believes in his loves/lovers as well!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Hehe, I am taking them! Thank you, sweetie, for all your support

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

B.B.

That was a teaser because you ended it off with a car following them!!!!!!!!!

I don't like it!!!!!!!! What will that James do?????

Great chapter!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Would I tease you??? Ok, I would but I never said it was James...

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

B.B.

That was a tough one to read. I really do hope that they will in time believe that they are loved by each of there loved ones!!!!

Fabulous 4 updates I just finished B.B.!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

B.B.

I'm in tears here. (Sniffle, sniffle.)

Don't torture them much longer please!!!!

Great chapter as always!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

B.B.

Intense is the right word girl!!!! Great chapter!!!!

I wonder how long you and your muse are going to make us wait to confirm that it was James in the office that morning????? Any clues BB??? (hee, hee)

Post more when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

B.B.

Tense start to that chapter!!! So glad that it was only a dream!!!

Don't leave us hanging too long as to whom is doing this to Bella please!!!!

Updte when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I'm going to try to put up more, soon!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

B.B.

I sure hope this is the beginning of both of them getting the help they truly need!!!!!

Great story telling!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

B.B.

We've got to catch this stalker STAT!!!! I'm scared for Bella's emotional state.

Great chapter!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

B.B.

Uggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! (thud) I'm on the floor with Bella.

It's gotta get better from here on right??? (Cory smiles as she says this)

Great stuffs. You've got me scared shitless now!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

B.B.

That was a tension filled chapter!!!! Well done!!!!

If this ain't Jacob doing all this, then I haven't a flipping clue who's doing it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Will check out the other story you've mentioned asap!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

B.B.

Ok Bella was a wee bit over dramatic. But IMO she's intitled to it!!!

I know you have the problem already sloved in your fabulous idea filled brain and I soooooooooooooooooo look forward to the rest of the journey!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

BB

Oh dear god!!!!!! The only postivie I see from that ending is that maybe in the next chapter we'll learn whom this nutso is and why he/she is doing all of this to Bella!!!!

Even though it was a cliff hanger ending, that was a great chapter BB!!!! That being said, I'll just start pacing until the next chapter comes up.

I'm sorry to read your muse is being stubborn with you but, maybe this chapter will free her to write again!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

B.B.

Those are two sick puppies!!!! So looking forward to their demise!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

THank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

B.B.

Back from holidays and catchiing up. And the first chapter back I get a stinking cliff hanger. UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Thanks god there's more chapters for me to catch up on!!! Off to the next one!!!

Great stuff B.B.!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

B.B.

Thanks god they are all back together!!!

Now for the healing to begin again.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

B.B.

This is going to be a rough ride for Bella & Carlisle I'm a thinking.

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

B.B.

A break is well deserved IMO. It's been a tough few last chapters. I'm just glad that you're going to finish this amazing journey!!!

I'm so ready for Bella to realize that she needs help!!! I think she knows it already and maybe Garett showed her that it's the right thing to do!!!!

Can't wait for the next chaper!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

B.B.

The two of them better accept Jane's help!!!! Or it's over for them. I can't believe that you & your muse are even thinking of the two of them not letting Jane help them. Woah!!!! Can't wait to see what you've come up with!!!!!!!

Great chapter as always!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

B.B.

WOAH!!!! Please tell me this was the breakthrough chapter for Bella & Carlisle!!!!

What the two of them went through was terrible, yes. But if they never agree to forget the past, they can never move forward.

Great chatper BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

B.B.

Glad to have you back!!! Take all the time you need. I find it's always worth the wait!!!!

I think Bella is on the verge of asking for that help that all of them are telling her she needs!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

B.B.

WOW!!!! Such a telling chaper there girl!!!!

But I'm going to believe that this is exactly what Carlise & Bella both need to get their amazing lives back!!!!

Great chapter BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

BB

You can't let Carlisle kill himself. He's waaaaaaaaay too strong of a man to do that!!!! I feel a break through for both of them coming!!!!

Such a great day at the beach!!!

Thanks for a great chapter!!!! I'm ready for the next one when you are!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Endless Awakenings

BB

Simply beautiful chapter!!!! (sniffle, sniffle, sniffle)

I think a breakthrough has finally been made for the poor tortured Bella. Thanks god!!!!!!

Best of luck over the next few months with your other projects. I can't wait to read your comments on them when you're back to finish off this amazing story!!!

Just keep a pad of paper available at all times incase you get some ideas for this story. Jot them down so you don't forget.

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

B.B.

I've got tears in my eyes after this one. I believe a real breakthrough has been made by both Bella & Carlisle.

I hope the next few weeks go smoothly for you!!! Even though you sound like you'll be busy. I hope the muse lets you write down some ideas for this amazing story!!!

And I, for one, am glad that they all talked a lot!!!! :)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

BB

Firstly. Congrats on the book signing!! I hope to hear all about it with the next chapter posting.

Kudos to Bella for going back to work. She needs to get her life back into a "normnal" routine. I'm sure she will feel much better because of it!!!!

Loved the office return initiantion!!! (drool, drool)

See you whenever BB!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

BB

Sounds like the real world is busy for you. But in a good way!!! (two thumbs up)

As for updates to this amazing story. As long as you promise to finish. I'm totally fine with waiting. I need to read you and your muses version of the story.

Glad to read that Bella & Carlisle seem to be improving.

It was great to hear from you and thanks for the oh so hot chapter.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

BB

What a great treat on this cold Wednesday morning where I live. I wasn't expecting a new chapter for a while yet. And I'm a day behind on checking my E-mail notices. (hee, hee)

And what a fantabulous chapter it was. Bella and Carlisle seem to really want to have their lives back. How great is that!!!!!!

As for the sex of the child. I'm happy either way Because I agree with Jasper. Just as long as the child is healthy the sex doesn't matter.

Ready for more when you are BB!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

BB

WOW!!! You got me twice in this chapter BB.

First James is gay. But it's great that he's happy. Being not happy didin't get him anywhere good.

And Bella fired someone. I'm not sure if she fired Edward or Carlisle. I'm thinking Edward though.

My head hurts after that chapter BB. But daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn that was a great chapter!!!!

I have one request. Please tell me you have the next chapter mapped out. I don't know if I have it in me to wait too long for the next chapter BB. Oye vey!!!

Cory



Author's Response: Not only is the next chapter mapped out, but I've got half of it written. Hopefully, I'll get the rest of it done soon and have it up :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

BB

I understand why Bella fired Edward. But, IMO, she did it the wrong way.

And I was sure that everything was going to be fine. Until you & your muse made Bella fall down the stairs. Dear lord don't let her be hurt too much.

That was a tense chapter to read BB. Didn't breathe too much through it. (nope)

Thanks for the extra chapter this Sunday!!!! I have to admit though BB. I'm nervous when the next chapter will be up. I'm not good with cliff hangers when it involves someone possibly being hurt.

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

BB

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

For having the next chapter up so dang soon. I didn't know how I was going to last for more than a day or two with out knowing how Bella was. (Cory lets out a big breath)

As for the Edward being fired conversation. Better this time around. Too bad Bella didn't think of just talking it out the frist time instead of just firing Edward. It would have been less stress on everyone. Including me!! (ha,ha)

BB I can honestly say that I'm over the moon that your muse is back for this story!!! I look forward to the rest of their journey!!! Even though it's sad to know that this part of their journey is coming to an end soon.

But maybe we readers will get lucky and you will continue on, yet again, with this family and their stories!!!

Bring on more when you can BB!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

BB

Bella's hip sounds like it's a wonderful shade of blue. EEK!! But at least it's not broken. And I'm glad to read that Bella didn't argue about using the the wheelchair.

So another beautiful girl is on the way hey!!! (2 thumbs up)

I'm also glad that Edward & Bella seem to be in a better place.

And from your end comments. It sounds like all of us are going to find out whom the daddy actually is.

I was thinking that I should check back as to what the bet was. Because I forget. Maybe I wait until the story is done because you might play out that bet yet. (hee, hee)

Ready for more when you are BB!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

BB

Good on the group for surprising Bella. She has to learn that a surprise is fun once in a while.  A Bella shower was a great idea BB!!!

And you're absolutely right BB. A one shot from Alice's POV would be a hell of an outtake!!!

Off to read the next chapter!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

BB

The baby's coming!!!! Yeehaw!!!!

Breathe Bella. Dr. Morgan will take good care of you and your precious daughter!!

Off to read the next chapter!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

BB

Yeah!!! Savannah Grace is here!!!!

That was a tension filled delivery to read BB. I need a nap now. But I do believe Savannah's arrival is just what Bella & Carlisle need to put the past in the past.

Off to read one more chapter.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

BB

This chapter needed a tissue warning for this crybaby.

The family would have loved Savannah no matter whom was the biological father. Of course that's just who they all are. But I'm over the moon that Edward is her daddy. Yipee!!!

You, BB, have been spoiling us readers with multiple chapters over the past few days. And it's really hard to read that there is only one more chapter left to peruse. Such great story telling and of course I hate when they end. But maybe I'll be plesantly surprised with an update some day that tells me you're carrying forward with this family and their story!!!

Bring on the last chapter BB. (sob, sob)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

BB

So happy that I brought a tissue to this last chapter.

How great to close off this story with a wedding for Catherine, Esme, William & Carlisle!!!

And you could really feel the love the four of them have for each other in this closing chapter.

I look forward to the next journey you bring BB!!!!!

Thanks for letting me tag along for all three amazing journies!!!!

Cory