Wow, loved this one hunny! I read it on Twiwrite but saw it here too. And since I'm over here more lol, thought i would review here ;) Anyway I really liked ths one. Im a Jake fan, well I'm not Team anything most days, lol. But I love Edward a bit more :) However I have no prob with Jake or wolf pack. But im finding out in this twi fandom that ppl are really Team Edward and not very open minded with stories, lol. I have many reviewers for my story who tell me they hate Jake and they hate that my Bella is with him but because they love my story so much they'll still read it lmao. I just think thats funny, lol. Anyway getting off track here. But I really enjoyed this take. It made me sad too I was heartbroken for bella. I cant believe Edward acted that way freakin jerk but Im not surprised I mean he does have these controlling, possessive tendencies, lol. Still love him though. But again you are a amazing writer. I just really love your work, ttys, *hugs, Leslie

Hi Lisa :) Sorry I took a bit to get here :( But let me tell you I was estatic to see a new chappie! My gosh hun thank you so very much because I know you have been working so incredibly hard on your thesis and yet you still managed to write out a chapter! It was well worth the wait :) Heartbreaking? Yes very much so but that was to be expected given what these two have been through. My God have Bella & Edward been through the ringer. What amazes me with this story is that besides the vamp/wolves aspect of it, the rest is very realistic. The way you write these characters emotions is raw and geninue. I really appreciate how you capture it all and how, as I said, make it realistic. Because in real life, it would take a long, long time for someone in Bella's situation to make it through a very tragic, horrific situation. Despite all that they went through and even though there was moments where they drifted apart, they still had their deep love and devotion for the other.

Thats what helped them unite back to each other, thats what will keep helping them through the long road ahead of them. But at least theres a bright side finally peeking out at the end of the long dark tunnel. Wow I was just so heartbroken for Bella because Edward kept her at arms length that really had to hurt. But then on the other side of things, which by the way Edwards pov as fantastic! You gave us a wonderful view into Edwards mind, emotions and where he was coming from. He is so blessed to not only have Bella in his life but the Cullens because there a loyal family through and through. The scenes with Edward explaining to them what Jacob had forced Edward to see, so beyond gut wrenching. The tender moments with Ed & Esme, then Ed & Carlisle, truly moved me. I especially loved the end of the chapter when we finally see some happiness for those two and some hope. Hun, i agree I personally dont think Charlie and Renee should know about the vamps and all. I think you made the right choice for you. Just remember dear its your story. Yes, all though we as authors want to please our readers as much as we can. But in the end, its about what we had envisioned, because well we wrote the story for ourselves, but we also love to share it with others, you get what I mean? Anyhow dear, again such a beautiful, sad, chapter. I have to say once more you have a way with words you truly, truly do! Well Lisa take care and look really forward to the next chapter, *hugs, Leslie

Oh my gosh Lisa darling I missed you!! *hugs* I was beyond thrilled like had this huge smile on my face when I saw an update from you ;) Oh hun this chapter was perfect! I love a good filler chapter, well actually to me it wasnt really such a filler in a way. Everything in that chappie was important. I mean we all got a good look into what Bella is still going through. Her healing process her daily struggles. Its still going to take so much time. And unfortunately that trip she took to the store proved just that :( God I got teary eyed during that entire scene. My heart just broke for her. *shakes head* She has been through so damn much and like i said its still a long road ahead. But thankfully she has Edward, The Cullens, Charlie and Renee to help her through it. Speaking of Edward oh my gosh I cant say enough how much I adore your Edward! We have talked about this before. He is just so sweet, gentle, thoughtful, caring, I could keep going. I really really love his character. Awesome job hunny and I love your Bella too. Really they pretty much follow the books in a sense but you also did your own spin too. I mean character wise.

Anyhow and poor Charlie he is just at his wits end. He isnt sure what to do, say and I know its hurting him to see his daughter go through so much. I definetly agree with Edward, Charlie and Bella need to have a heart to heart and from there they can move on and Bella can let Charlie help her more with the healing process. I think the get together with Renee will be interesting and it wont be as bad as Bella thinks lol. I really loved the scene at the end with them watching a movie and the cuddling. Oh wow Bella seems to be ready for them to have a little more intimacy which is a big step. Baby steps but thats good. Hopefully Edward will be comfortable enough to recipocate. I think they need to talk about that as well so they are at the same level with that. Again that will all take time. But it was so great to read them haivng such tender moments :) And as far as you and school, hunny finish what you need to do. We will patiently wait. I am very proud of you! You are doing awesome, keep up the good work. Hang in there it will all pay off. Though I admit I am so looking fwd to the next update. Thanks so much and I cant say enough how much I love this story
and adore your writing its beautiful, *hugs, Leslie

Wow! Damn what a chapter, lol. Holy crap, Bella really attacked the hell out of Peter. Poor guy, lol. But I understand why. Poor girl has been through hell! Damn I am pissed myself, I cant believe they all tortured her that way, all of the horrible things they had done to her ;( I totally get why Peter is livid. I am sure he will do everything he can to find out all the answers. He is good for Bella I know it and he will help her thought this. Its going to take so much time though ;( Great chapter girl! Love this story so far, looking fwd to more :) xoxox

Hey girl! Agian you always deliver, awesome chappie ;) I so agree with you about Bd 2. I was disappointed as well Peter said nothing. I mean damn Melissa Rosenberg, really? You couldnt even write two lines for the poor guy? So messed up :( Anyhow God my heart is just breaking for Bella. She has been through such horrors, disgusting, I cant, cant wrap my head around it. I feel for Peter too because knowing his mate went through such hell and he wasnt there at the time to help save her, has to be so hard ;( But I know he will make sure those involved will pay! I cant wait to read when that happens. I have a feeling once Bella recovers as best as she can, she will unleash her wrath as well. I really like Char I think her and Bella will become good friends. I liked how they explained more baout mating. Oh I am with you girl about Garrett, lmao. I loved him in BD 2! Lee Pace was so hot! ttys hun xo