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Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh! SPOV is back::))

Reading his POV is great!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

"I can see out, but no one can see in. It is erotic, but safe." LOL LOL LOL Who'da thought she was soooo wrong::))

Author's Response:

I know! Usually if ur in the dark you can see out and no one can see in... oh bella... giggle.. lucky for us she's a kinky girl.

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

"If punishable was what I wanted, she was a dream come true" lol lol If Tanya bored him with her 'perfect sub' routine then I have no doubt Bella will be a "dream come true"::))
I pretty much got over any 'creepy' feelings toward Sir from reading the 1 shot, but I'm curious to find out (in probably a year or 2 lol) what he will be like after their 1st meeting.

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG is he going to rent every apartment around her? lol

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Alice as a Domme with Jasper as her sub:::))) I'm having a hard time visualizing that! lol

Author's Response:

Really? It's about personality, not size. I always see Alice as a Domme.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

"I watched her eat her lunch on the small black and white screen" lol this guy is completely wired (& I don't mean high lol). It never occurred to me when reading the original one-shot how much back-story there was. I assumed he was a just a coworker, not a stalker that became a coworker to get closer:)

Author's Response:

Im not sure how I write is typical, but sometimes it starts as a dream, other times I hear the character talk to me. I see part of it and then I write. Then I ask what happened next, or how did that happen. There is sooo much back story that I even skipped. Bella isn't Edward's first human. He has a pattern. I just didn't want to go into all of that. Maybe I'll do an interview with him and post it when the drabble is done. :)

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

"Second, you will open the curtain to please me. Your body is for my pleasure.” lol lol not sure why I find that so funny::)) Maybe because so far he's been nothing but a phone call.

Just a slight tweek makes a possible horror story into humorous erotica:::)))

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

LOL LOL LOL

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

lol She is actually treating it like a date::)) Altho considering WHO her midnight caller is, shaving is probably a good idea since he can see all her hair!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

"My butterfly will only speak when Sir says the words ‘speak’. Do you understand?” “Yes Sir,” lol lol lol Almost like a 'game'::))

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Love your AN's:)

I had no idea how many times I read the word butterfly in fanfic's, newpapers & magazines until I started reading Midnight Caller (this & the 1-shot)! I laugh to myself everytime::))

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Seems like he's shortchanging himself by never being able to have sex with most of his subs.

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

"Alice had told me a week ago of her premonition of Edward with his mate" Oh goody! In a much earlier chapter something was said that made me worried that Bella wasn't any more special than the current interest.

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Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

Awwwww

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

“LITTLE GIRL! YOU WILL NOT CUM!” lol lol lol I see it almost the same as peeing. Once I start, it would take an act of congress to stop::))

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

[“Yes butterfly, you may cum, but you may not touch yourself.” Oh fuck. Was it possible?] lol lol lol

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

"...leaving another mess to clean up" I sure hope he does a good job of cleaning it up so the cleaning service doesn't get stuck with that! lol lol

“Keep Tanya away from her.” If I remember right, in the original not much was said about what Bella went thru while in the salon. I hope Tanya stayed away::)) The possibilities are scary! lol

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

"so if you wouldn't mind giving him a shout out" Hmm, considering I can no longer read the word 'butterfly' without laughing, I'll give your Sir a 'shout at'::)) Not until after I read the original Midnight Caller, during the 'DTDC' contest, did I realize how overused that word is - newspapers, books, fanfic, everywhere! lol lol

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

"...but how would I explain that I’d never met him, that I only knew him because I masturbated for him in front of my window?" omg I got over any 'discomfort' a longggg time ago but putting it that way sounds kind of bad:::)))

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

"Whore" I understand how Bella came up with her thoughts since I won't even accept a drink from a guy but....so many of the clothes/services/etc a sub gets that a Dom usually pays for are expenses a sub wouldn't have outside this relationship so it's not really the same:)

Author's Response:

Ok, so are we friends on FB? I can't remember who you are.

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nope, no FB:) I followed you over from fanfic.net

Author's Response:

that's a shame. I wanna see u in my Wreck Room!

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

“Masturbating? Really Edward? You are reduced to masturbating?” lol lol After the description of how 'stoic' Tanya acted as Edward's sub, her non-sub personality is going to be like nails on a blackboard::))

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Go to 'My Account', 'Edit Preferences', mark the box for email notification for updates on your 'favorites'.
Of course, for this to work any story/author you want to be notified on need to be added to Favorites:)

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

lol lol snort::)) People who never read AN's miss out on so much!

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Damn! I got something right for once:) lol

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Wasn't she walking out the door to go to work before Sir called? I'm going to have to work on my inner 'who gives a shit' side because thruout this whole scene I was worried Butterfly was going to be late for work:::)))

Author's Response:

Yes, she was going to be late. Now she is really late!

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

"I saw Emmett’s nostrils flare and I knew he smelled it too" lol I forgot all about Emmett::))

Yeah, there's something about Edward saying "Mine" while he growls!

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

"Guess what Sir wants?" would this be around the time Sir wants to come to her apartment?

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Yep, I'm excited!

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Ooh, punishment:)

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

With Edward it's always HOT!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

"...but you will always be safe" No doubt (on some level) after Sir left Butterfly's apartment, she had a 'phew' moment::)) I'm looking forward to when they get together in the playroom! Can't wait to see what this 'expanded version' to the original will be like!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Chapter End Notes - LOL LOL LOL you go girl!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

"Ironically watching my butterfly in her apartment cleaning and reading was sexy" Ooh! I wonder if I'm sexy as I sit reading this?

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

"I walked over and sat in a comfortable looking chair" and que a memory of what happens to the chair:::)))

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

lol lol many short chapters is what drabble is all about:) Now if it ended up being only 1 short chapter per week....

This is getting soooo exciting::))

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

“Good girl, now what flower are you on butterfly?” lol thruout this chapter I was thinking so hard about whether I would remember words other than green, yellow, red that when I read this sentence I couldn't remember 'lily'! I'd flunk out before taking the test:)

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

"...and my ass was in the air" oh, oh...smack!

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

eleven orgasms! omg is that even possible? lol lol

"...do her duty of cleaning the playroom..." that would be right up there with scrubbing the bathtub right after a long relaxing soak:(

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

"...such a good little tongue" lol lol

From reading bdsm stories, I know sometimes the sub has to be in the waiting position a long time. Such a simple thing that could be difficult:) I imagine I would need help standing since my muscles would end up locked! lol

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Even blindfolded, Bella notices things:)

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

“Mother fucker!” Edward yelled. “She is not going to that club!” Oops::))

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

"Edward, while sexy in his own way, probably only ever had sex missionary style" LOL LOL Surprise!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

I'M BLIND! I'M BLIND! lol lol
It has always been next to impossible for me to see Carlisle & Esme as sexual beings! Maybe because they're portrayed as parents & we all know parents never have sex:::)))

“No problem, Daddy,” So Edward does have a sense of humor! lol

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Epiphany!

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

"...maybe I could wait until she was very old" If he pulled that crap on me, the 1st thing I'd do upon 'waking' was destroy the fucker! That's sick:) lol

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

"...to Emmett, it would be fucking torture" I figured it was Emmett he had in mind::))

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Emmett's so easy:::))) hysterical! It doesn't matter how many times he gets pranked, he keeps falling into the trap! lol lol

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

I watched 2 times. Both those times looked painful unless it collapses:::)))

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Sir's going to get all angsty now since Bella got hurt:)

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

"I’d also called her Bella, and I wasn’t yet sure if she’d noticed" Maybe she didn't but I'm sure the rest of us did::))
I have a feeling Sir is going to have to do a little more than this regarding damage control unless he wants to 'break' his butterfly's will:( difficult situation considering!

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Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 232: Chapter 232

"Jacob’s ladder" Ouch!

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

Guess Edward's been shown what an old lady Dom he is::))

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

Emmett's such an asshole::)) lol lol

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Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

A happy Sir makes for a happy butterfly:)

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Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Interesting!

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 252: Chapter 252

1 million reads! Wow, that's incredible:)

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Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 254: Chapter 254

I'm not sure I understand Edward's logic in the idea that if he takes the blindfold off Bella he'll have to change her. She's been looking at him almost every day for months (I'm guessing). Obviously just by seeing him doesn't means she'll know he's a vampire. Altho if the blindfold comes off in the playroom he won't be able to wiz around like before:)lol

Author's Response:

He feels that he will endanger her by revealing himself. It's really a protection for himself as well. In the past, he would be with women for about a year, find them a new Dom and go on. 

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Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

She finally noticed the sketches:)

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Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

“Jesus Christ Jake!” lol lol lol good one!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

"She trusted me and I did this to her, whatever it was that had happened to her, it was my fault." Now there's the Edward we all know & love:::))) At 1st I thought his teeth accidently broke her skin & got venom in her!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

lol lol omg Edward! They're all standing in a playroom. Every single one of them is into bdsm. But, he's embarrassed to talk in front of him 'mother' about it::))

“Edward?” “Emmett?” As usual, I'm so glad I live in a house & not an apartment considering how loud I laughed at this::))

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 265: Chapter 265

[“Perhaps I can get James in there to give you a good fucking.” His cock instantly shrank] lol lol snort::))

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

“MOTHER FUCKER! ROSE!” lol lol for a moment I thought she was yelling at Rosalie::))

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Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

Is it just me or is Sir a little giddy? lol

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

lol lol poor Edward! He'll have to constantly watch Rose & Alice when they're around Bella::))

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

Awwww My favorite part when Sir's identity is finally revealed:)

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 301: Chapter 301

LOL LOL Edward is in for a wild ride::))

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 306: Chapter 306

Since this fic is winding down, I can kinda see where this is going:) Wonder if Bella's heart is going to give them trouble! I know my heart is beating hard just reading it:::)))

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

This is a perfect ending to the story! Of course, I can say that since I know there will be a sequel::)) Incredible!

Summary: Past Featured Story

tbw

Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102267
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
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Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

"Billy hasn't been mumbling about 'birds', He's been rambling about 'the Volturi'!" lol this story is filled with some great laughs::))

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Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Your Charlotte is such a sweet & gentle young lady::)) lol The thought of what she's doing to Paul makes my stomach roll! lol

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Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"I was such a cocky little shit back then. I went up to Jasper during lunch on his first day and punched him in his arm, telling him to give me his lunch. He punched me back and told me to fuck-off" lol lol best story ever::))

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Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"MOTHER!"—Alice and me
"LA LA LA LA LA LA LA !"-Rose
"I NEED BRAIN BLEACH!"-Emmett
"I THINK I'M GONNA BE SICK!"-Jasper
"Um"-Bella
I think I like Bella's comment best:::)))

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Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Allie, Rose, could you run to the 24 hour Walmart...." I'm very impressed rich boy Cullen knows about Walmart & what they are for::))

"Besides, I found you and I plan on keeping you" lol that sounds like Alice:)

"I wouldn't touch you with my enemies dick" omg lol lol that must be a Cullen saying 'cause it seems I remember either Alice or Rose saying something real close to the same thing!

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

"Your sister was gutsy to plan an outdoor wedding in Seattle.” lol I'll say!

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

"If you really think its necessary, I promise not to argue." Yeah, our little Bella may be canon in many ways but this shows just how OOC she really is::)) lol

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Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

“I swear to God, Edward. The next bimbo that comes up to you, I’M putting a bullet between her eyes.” lol perfect ending to a great chapter!

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Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

"...Bella had Lauren on the floor and was repeatedly punching her in the face..." lol lol Bella's getting her confidence:)
I suspect Bella will be lethal by the end of the story.

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Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

"Edward was laughing so hard....he snorted coffee out of his nose" lol lol if I'd been drinking coffee while reading the story about Emmett cooking I would have snorted coffee too::))

"He just passed away, about an hour ago, in his sleep.” Well, this is a new experience! Don't think I've ever been sad that Aro dies until now:(

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

"That was the best date ever, thank you." so glad you liked it, Bella. In the real world it would nothing more than fast food & TV from that moment on::))lol
"I leap up at the same time she's stopped by the silk wrapped around her ankles. Thankfully, Aro pulls me back down and I look at him in shock" lol lol lol yep, heart attack time::))

Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

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Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

There is no way I can go to bed now:( I'm so frickin' mad I'd be grinding my teeth & hitting the pillow for hours! All the stories out there that show Renee as an evil bitch & not a one of them puts a bullet in her head. I need a gun. I'll just do it myself! lol lol Damn
I have my hopes & dreams regarding Bella's response to Renee but at this point don't have a clue. I will say that if Bella packs up & leaves with the bitch, my jaw will hit the floor!

Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

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Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

lol what they did to Jessica & Lauren is hysterical:)

"I've always wanted to know what would happen when you peed upside down," lol As entertaining as James is, I'd hate to be on his bad side!

So Phil's bringing a date to the wedding. If this wasn't just a random mention, I'm thinking it's someone we know. The only name that bounced in my head was Victoria altho she seemed to have the hots for James.

"Anyone have any idea who may have been punching the hell out of Paul?" Edward didn't react like he recognized him but I could see Emmett doing that & loving every moment:)

Very satisfying chapter!

Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

"Would it make you feel better if he was in a bed next to your bed?" A wonderful nurse!

"I understand, Little Girl, I really do. But, I have told you about using your code words and colors" I like how E accepts B's feelings as her own. Instead of criticizing her for feeling a certain way he uses positive reinforcement & tools (code words & colors) to help her see things differently.

The story about Vicky chasing down James is hysterical::))

After last chapter, this is a relaxing one::)) That usually means hell on earth is coming soon:(

Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

"Hey, I could've been naked!" lol I need to bleach out my brain after that thought::))
I keep thinking about Jacob & Charlie, expecting them to jump out of the shadows. This chapter was almost a vacation compared to what it could have been.
Phil is a mystery. There's got to be an interesting backstory to that, especially all the money.
There's no way Renee could be anything other than mentally ill:(

Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

"Now before I go, I need to speak to Edward for a bit, okay honey?" I immediately knew something bad was going to be said. I really can't imagine anyone wanting to have sex with Renee....even for money:( Yuk Eww

Alec is hysterical::))

I'm so glad Phil finally came out his fog about Renee. Also glad Bella has him on her side. He seems to care for her a lot.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

"So, Phil, are you ready to get back into the dating game?" "No way; I want to get divorced first...." lol smart boy!

"I feel the air leave my body as it clicks that I didn't send Bella to a cleaning supply party with my sisters and mother...." lol lol he's a dork!

My list of people I want dead is getting awfully long!

Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Paul is completely insane! He's way past evil. Jake seems to be just plain evil.

I'm really liking oddball James right now::))

"So your punishment is to marry me." lol lol lol

When I read about the shot not having the right ingredients to be effective, I laughed. It's actually not very funny for the women involved:::)))

Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

"Oh, please, tell me you're not sleeping together...." That thought has gone thru my mind a few times::))

"I arrive a little early at Jenks' office and I'm surprised to see James standing there" such an unbelievably new feeling to actually be happy to see James in a scene::)) I'm still laughing over when Bella 1st walking into the club & James tried to go all Dom on her! lol lol

There's going to be a shitload of people gunning for E & B if those same people don't get jailed.

This is a full chapter. So much happened it makes my head swim. As almost always, I love Seth & am so happy Bella has at least 1 family member (besides Phil) that she can trust, hug & laugh with:)

Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

"...I know she's tiring, so with the sixth and last one..." lol lol Phone sex & me never mixed well so I'd have been happy with 1::))

If the way Edward is with Seth is any indication, he will be an incredible father.

Guess the last guy beating the shit out of Paul wasn't Emmett::)) Phil may not be any good at baseball but he seems to have a skill in 'no rules' boxing!

Renee's a great advertisement for getting extensive background checks:)

["Is there anyone here who knows for any reason why these two shall not be married, speak now or forever hold your peace." Just about everyone looks at the door] LOL LOL LOL

Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

"....and Leah's fist hits the female police officer that was standing behind Rose" lol lol Bravo! Even if Leah did this by mistake, it would keep her out of their hair for a while

Payback is coming along nicely::))

Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

"Leah was stupid enough to have everything she did before and after Harry's murder written down" Definitely stupid but no less than I'd expect from her:)

"The First National Bank of Yourmama" lol I would love to be at the bank when she tried to cash it::))

James & Vicky dealing with Bella in labor is hysterical!

Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Incredible story!

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

"I enjoy the few punches I get in before he is dragged away.....while inside I'm happy I finally got the chance to hit the fucker" Amazing that after all this time Charlie's the same asshole.

"Ironically, she has developed an allergy to peanuts" lol lol good one!

Great epilogue! Pretty much covered all loose ends:)
Wonderful story. Lots of painful parts but I found myself smiling thruout the story:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: csp4 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

"I loved how my dad, the Chief of Police, and Carlisle, the father of the mob family I'm marrying into, act like long lost brothers" lol lol Yep!

"...but you couldn't have married into a better family." Does Charlie even know who they are? lol

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is a great chapter! I don't think there's a sane character in the bunch - either Cullen or Swan:) As long as Edward doesn't make Bella seriously cower, he can be his usual pissant self cause obviously she can woop his ass::)) I had a smile & laughed thruout

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

"I'm pregnant," "With a baby?" "No, a with a dog," lol lol good one::))

Great story! I think reading the reviews was almost as entertaining as reading the story:) Definitely a button pushing story. Love it! Thanks for sharing

Make A Wish by deslyn1262 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Make-A-Wish

Genre: Angst, family, romance & supernatural

Pairing: Bella & Edward

Summary: One shot - Picture prompt contest - twivdficrecs-wordpress-com (replace the dashes with dots) - there's a banner for this one-shot on their site which was created by Gossiplips. Visit the site for recs, interviews with authors and information on upcoming writing challenges.

Picture prompt was a girl/woman holding her finger to her lips - same image used to post.

Bella is sick. She was sent to Dr. Cullen's clinic, where Carlisle specialized in treating rear blood disorders. She meets all the Cullens but forms a special bond with Edward. There's only one thing she wants for her 21st birthday. Will her wish come true? The Cullens are vampire hybrids, they eat and drink if they choose and do not sparkle in the sun. The Volturi does not rule the vampire world, but for their own protection, vampires and especially the Cullens have to keep their activities a secret.

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight. All characters belong to Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement intended.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5325 Read Count: 1042
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2013 Updated: 08 Sep 2013
Reviewer: csp4 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Alice's texting with all the ping's is great!
"She almost snorted her hot chocolate out of her nose" lol I hate when that happens::))
Wouldn't bother me at all if Edward had a good meal:)

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

The visit with Jake was a great idea:) It looks like this 'project' will have the added benefit of helping Bella heal. Hope the tribe doesn't figure out the Cullen's are involved. A thought provoking chapter.