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A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
"....is it any wonder that she tried the method her mother used to such good effect for so many years and threw a tantrum?" The word 'tantrum' implies acting unreasonably/childish. I didn't see that when reading how Bella reacted. Esme is right about Alice & Edward. Personally, I want to bash in Edward's head. It's obviously he doesn't use it!
Interesting thoughts Edward & Esme had about Alice & her visions over the years. Pretty much the same as I was thinking from chapter 1:)
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
"...she took a dagger that was on the shore for gutting fish and stabbed herself in the heart..." This part of the legend has always bugged me. All the 3rd wife had to do was slice open her arm to get the blood flowing.
"She really had been a brat" Hmm, not so sure. Alice was a major brat. Bella had righteous indignation:) Esme seemed to be the only one that 'got it'
Going to La Push turned out to be a great thing for Bella. She figured things out, got perspective & found a project:)
Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I'm so glad Bella didn't listen to the phone messages. I suspect no good would have come from that if she had.
Looks like both E & B are trying to understand each other a little better.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
"She slung her bag on her shoulder, unbalancing herself" lol lol that's perfect! She's trying to be firm & make a point, ending up looking funny::))
I'm actually feeling Edward's pain! Bella has a boatload of issues. It's great she doesn't let him dictate her every move but she doesn't give him even an inch::))
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I'd mention what an evil crazy bitch Renee is if it wasn't so obvious, so I won't:)
Great expanded version of Esme's story!
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
"Edward has bought her a new car… it's black." lol I'm not quite that bad but close::))
"Esme was determined that she was going to try every single flavour of ice-cream before she was changed!" Bella's going to be a little pudgy by the time she's changed::))
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
[....we can steal them and then dump them close to a police station so they can be returned to their owners." She said. Bella was shocked] lol lol Bella's going to get exhausted if stealing a car shocks her...especially after almost sucking 4 people dry::))
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Damn! Bella's hurt - stomach shot:( Looks like there might not be a little bundle of joy for E & B.
The description of Emily's wounds sound nasty. Double damn!
Edward will*not*be*happy
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Alice must have been grinding her teeth buying Bella clothes at Walmart::))
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
["Are you in pain?" "It isn't too bad." She insisted, Edward moaned....] oh, come one, Edward, at least she didn't say 'I'm fine'::))
Charlie has finally redeemed himself with me:) Hope he survives!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
"Jake just imprinted!" lol Brilliant! That will keep those 2 characters busy & docile::))
Yep, "strongest genes" my ass!
["When's the wedding?" Charlie asked, taking another swig of beer.] My favorite type of Charlie....in the know & fine with all the crazy.
Vampire Bella is going to be entertaining to read about. I suspect Bella's not heading toward the human to drink
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
"....and quickly stripped to his boxers. Between them they lifted Bella until he could slip in below and behind her." Yep, considering how testy Charlie got over Edward removing Bella's clothes, he's definitely going to question that::))
"Want to explain what I just saw?" lol this is going to be good!
God bless Charlie when he's 'in the know':) Exciting times ahead!
Hopefully after this, Edward, the rest of the Cullens & Charlie will get their heads out of the asses & communicate with Bella instead of driving her nuts.
I'm sure it won't be lost on Charlie that, if left to the tribe, Bella would be dead:(
Great chapter!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Ah, Bella's tantrum was an act!
"...so she wasn't expecting a hell of a lot of foreplay" lol lol she definitely didn't get any::))
While I agree with Alice that Bella's clothes weren't very nice, I'm with Bella. Alice needs a smack down.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
"...but his father wouldn't allow anyone from the reservation to actually visit while she was under the care of Dr. Cullen" The rez seems to be run like a cult. Billy's no more than a town mayor or town council. Can't imagine them trying that crap & lasting too long in office::))
It's been quite a while since Edward's had a good feeding. I'm sure Renee & her lawyer would 'hit the stop'!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Hmm, Nurse Jackie! Either the character that had a 2 second part in the Twilight movie or the TV show Peter F. acts in:)
["....and 17% of Agent Provocateur." Bella had no idea what that company was, but guessed it was also to do with technology] lol lol and just about as expensive as technology!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
"Don't let the pig eat the book," "Why Bella?" "Because, it's blue." lol lol
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Emmett is an extremely intelligent idiot::))
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
"He remembered a particularly embarrassing incident with Emmett and a pair of thin cotton shorts and Rose in a bikini" lol lol lovely visual::))
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
"...it was like a missile programmed to hit" lol lol lol great description::))
"..and he lowered his face into her neck, he bit." Hmm, the question floating in my head is this a bite that changes or a mating type bite that doesn't.
It's amazing how often Emmett imparts wisdom that ends up helping E & B:)
Very intense lemon. Hopefully I don't sound like an idiot by saying this (lol), it felt almost spiritual
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Oh, he did bite but not her::))
"You won't touch me!"...."So I'll go find someone who will." Not sure how his inner vampire will handle that comment. Wonder why she's acting like a spoiled child? Hmm
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
"....both he and Bella stripped to their underwear, before she finally opened her eyes. She looked at him, then at herself, and then again at him, and blushed violently." lol lol lol
"...before he stripped off his shorts and began to transform. Bella blushed and looked quickly at the carpet" lol lol I can't get enough of this Bella::))
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
"Seth was just the opposite, though he too had only phased for the first time that day it was obvious to Edward that he had full control of himself" Interesting. Only hours old. Gotta love that Seth:) Wonderful character
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
"She got into the truck and briefly considered calling Edward to let him know that she was heading home, but....She couldn't see the problem" Groan:(
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
"He cried as his teeth sank into the open wound...." So glad I didn't have to yell & bounce around while reading about Edward stalling his changing of her while she's bleeding to death! lol
"...there was no point in making her suffer through such injuries, even if she could have been saved, just to change her after" Bravo! I don't have a clue how many times I've had that thought while reading fanfics where Bella is seriously injured but instead of changing her, she made to go thru months of healing then changed afterwards::))
Ooh, chapter ends with a mystery!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
"....appeared on the balcony again, his hands firmly holding Charlie under his arms as if he was a toddler being picked up by an adult" lol lol
You've done a fine job with Renee's character! Altho, it doesn't take much for me to enjoy myself hating her:) Even at her best, she's not worth much.
The question I have going thru my mind is will Bella have control of her shield soon after 'waking' or will she constantly knock others into the next county::))
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Bella's an interesting newborn. While reading, I could feel the innocence & joy coming off her.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
"There was a large gathering of people in the parking lot of Newton's Outfitters, guns of all shapes and sizes very much visible in the crowd as if they were gathering for an old time posse" OMG that's a scary thought::)) Considering highway 101 goes right thru town, there should be lots of strangers to shoot.
Just in case, I'll be mentally preparing myself in case something happens to Charlie.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
The thought of Bella drinking from humans isn't pleasant but what bothers me more is righteous Carlisle saying 'I told you so'! lol
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
"REAL werewolves? What are we then? Figments of your imagination?" lol lol
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Paul imprinting on a vampire! Priceless
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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185509
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Relentless
E & B faking their death took me by surprise. Never saw that one coming:)
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
Seems quite the coincidence the FBI showed up at this time.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I think you could be right x x
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
"I wanted to know how she met him. Did he kidnap her too?" Bella seems to be wondering the same thing I did! lol
"I'll be watching you from that window."...."Creepy." lol lol Edward has his hands full with that one::))
"She slapped her hand across my cheek" Well, so much for Alice & Bella becoming best friends!
["A wine please?" And lots of it.] Bella seems to be acquiring a drinking problem::))
I'm surprised Bella hasn't had a bullet put in her head yet. She needs to 'play the game', be quiet (invisible), wait it out, say a prayer, tell her dad goodbye::)) lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I loved reading which parts you enjoyed! Next chapter is written and should be posted soon x x
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
"Oh, that's 'Ez the Gouger'."...."Apparently he likes to gouge out eyes." lol lol nice!
"This was too much for me. I wasn't used to all this drama and craziness" not sure that's true considering the girls she works & party's with::))
Seems our little Alice is a mystery:) Maybe she was in the same position as Bella at one time.
Author's Response:
LOL don't mess with Ez the gouger!
Apart from getting dragged out on the odd night drinking, her life was pretty quiet. Work, Sleep, Study, that was it x
Thanks for the review
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Relentless
I was thinking about how big the house is. Edward will be working at home which means his men hanging out. Then there's the maids/cleaners - no way would I be cleaning all those bathrooms:) The house may be big but she will be bumping into people all the time. The 3 rooms mentioned - library, cinema room & indoor pool - that's where you'd find me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! You're right. I don't think Edward has thought that part through, esp the part about how Bella will react to seeing Avi/Emmett/Carlisle in her house. She now holds a bit of a grudge against them.
They most certianly will need to get staff. Perhaps a housekeeper for starters. I certainly wouldn't want to be doing all that cleaning either.
And I think you would find me in those 3 rooms too ;) x x
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: Relentless
"Wait, what? I was going to get married … My stomach knotted. I felt sick. I fanned my face. I was going to get married, to a mob boss." lol lol that would be crazy::)) What a life!
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Relentless
I didn't think Bella saying yes would be so easy::))
I'm holding my breath 'cause I just know something's about to crap all over their heads
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"-Bella, tell me you didn't sleep with him!" Geez, mom:)
I suspect Edward is having Bella followed. No doubt he's already had a background check done on her altho with his comment "Maybe I'll need to buy you something more expensive." it didn't pick up on her personality. He's probably used to women that like money spent on them.
Author's Response:
Your very observent, I like it :o) xx
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
"... and turned to head towards class when a figure on the lawn caught my attention. Hey wasn't that the man from the café?" yep, she's being following!
Author's Response:
Of course he was had her followed ;o) x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
Maybe a nice detox would help him a bit! Right now I'm feeling a little sorry for Bella:)
Author's Response:
I'm feeling plenty sorry for Bella, but she'll hold her own in time x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
"It's just a date, Bella. If you don't like him, then you don't have to see him again." Not much chance of that happening::))
Author's Response:
LOL If only she knew x x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
"I wanted to make sure that every eventuality was covered should Bella decided to run when she finds out the truth about me" lol A thought had been going thru my mind that he may be 'posturing' & wouldn't actually hurt or force Bella. Guess he would!
Looks like Bella may learn the secret sooner than Edward expected:)
Author's Response:
He wants to impress her and be all he can be for her, but he keeps getting in his own way x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
It's a good thing most employers don't punish employees for their screw-ups like the mob does, otherwise most of us would be dead just like Stefan:)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for all your reviews today, some of them made me laugh, esp this one. ALL of them brightened up my day <3 x x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
"I wanted to make a run for it" Not that my warning system wouldn't be going off too, but I have a feeling Bella runs away a lot.
My guess is it's too late to run:( He's not going to rest until he finds her.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Relentless
"I could feel his breath on my lips" with all his drinking & drugging, his breath must be nasty::))
Edward is such a lovely man! lol lol
Author's Response:
LOL! Maybe he took a few mints, thanks for the review x x
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
No doubt a lot of people got pissed when E spanked B. I actually nodded in agreement when he did it::)) Too bad it was too little, too late:( Her present situation is going to make her time with E look like a Cinderella fantasy!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes a lot of people weren't took happy about the spanking! I'm thinking you were the only one to like it. :o) BUT yes it was far to late. Perhaps if he had spanked her sooner they wouldn't be in this mess x x
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless
"What's going on here?"...."Edward's just been promoted." lol lol Oh, what a world they live in!
I suspect Caius was involved with the 3rd party that took Caius' money (why not make war on them?). He was also delusional for arranging a marriage without letting the involved party know beforehand - doesn't sound like arranged marriages are normal in this family. He ran the family like his own personal candy store.
I can only imagine what it's like for Bella right now:(
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I completely agree with everything you said x x
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless
Well, that was intense! Can't wait to see Bella's reaction to all this. Will she see the significance of Edward finding her or blame him for everything, or maybe even blame herself.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I update as soon as I can and we will all find out ;o) x x
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless
Not sure if Bella is suffering from PTSD or is slowing going over to the dark side:)
She pretty much set herself up for a pillow over the face - besides going home, opening her window was stupid, stupid, stupid but very Bella::))
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. She was very stupid! I think she is slowly turning dark side x x
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless
Great lime but the whole time I was nervous someone was going to walk in on them::)) lol
Bella talking to the police will be interesting considering she's drunk! lol lol lol
Not sure what to think about Charlie coming. Not much has been said so far about him other than Angela called him about Bella missing - he didn't seem too concerned. I'm assuming he's coming now 'cause the cops called him about the dead body in Bella apartment.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Sorry for the slow update & slow reply. I was sick & confined to my bed for over a week. I am more or less back to normal now. The next chapter has been written and sent to my beta. She is busy right now, but hopefully we will have it back in a few days. Thanks for your patience.
LOL from Edward's POV no one would dare walk in on them, they should know better. ;)
The boys will have her sobered up before they let her near the police.
That is exactly why Charlie is coming!! He wasn't too concerned because he thought Angela was over reacting and Bella would call him back. He's a little concerned now ;) x
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Relentless
"Agent Black will help us disappear" Yep, I'm sure he will:( At least Charlie will disappear...permanently! Not sure if it's Charlie's small town cop mentality or if he's naturally stupid. I wouldn't be surprised if Jacob was taking them to the enemy:(
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless
"You're sleeping with a mobster, Bella." Charlie may not mean that literally but he & Renee seem to have sex on the brain when it comes to their adult daughter
"I need a drink." Yep, definitely an alcoholic in the making:( Hope they have a drug/alcohol counselor on the payroll
Bella really needs another spanking::)) Not that it would help get rid of current brattiness but it would make me feel better::))
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! LOL I am sure Edward would love nothing more than to give her a spanking to try and knock some sense into her x x
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless
"Emmett was staring at me as if I was some sort of nut job" She's definitely a nut job!
"In a last desperate attempt, I sank my teeth into Avi's arm" Ok, she's way past spanking::)) She needs to be locked up in one of those cells they have:( **or maybe Edward's way is better than mine. lol
"I didn't want to risk going to sleep and not being there for when she woke up" lol no way I'd close my eyes around her::))
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I have to admit you have me laughing out loud for real. x x
Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Relentless
"Why don't you give me your number..." Bella's a little slow on the uptake:( I don't socialize with the mafia but even I know this is a setup!
I take that back. She's not slow, she's emotionally stunted at the age of a whiny teenager. With everything she's gone thru, I'd think she'd loose some of the attitude & think more. Forget the simple spanking...bring out the cane:)
I suspect there might be a 'story' behind Bella's relationship with her father.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! RL has been crazy busy, but I am writing at the moment & I will hopefully get it to my beta soon. Thank you for your continued patience.
Yeah that girl is slow and naive!!
LOL the cane! x
Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Relentless
"Then you have to let her go." Charlie demanded. "Let her come with me. I'll take her away from here and keep her safe." Well, Charlie, hope you've prepaid for both your & Bella's grave sites.
Bella ordering Emmett & Carlisle out of the house made me laugh::))
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! RL has been crazy busy, but I am writing at the moment & I will hopefully get it to my beta soon. Thank you for your continued patience.
Yeah Charlie! There is no way you could keep the two of you safe. lol x
Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless
"It was the last place I thought I would find her, purely because that was where I told her to go" lol lol Not sure I'd have much patience when it came to Bella::))
"Don't you have something you should be doing?" I'm mentally planning Bella's punishment & she won't like it:( She's like a teenager with an inflated ego & bad attitude::))
Bella didn't ask about her dad once. I suspect there's a strange backstory to their relationship.
NOT GARRETT!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! The next chapter is with my beta.
I'm not sure I would have much patience for her either, but he owes her that much at least.
Back story? Time will tell ;)
I know poor Garrett x x
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless
"You need to do something about her." I'm with Rosalie on this one. Edward's trying to keep Bella safe from outside forces while allowing her to slowly kill herself:( I suspect she was messed up long before Edward showed up in her life.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The next chapter is with my beta.
The next chapter is a turning point x x
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Relentless
"I still think this is a bad idea."...."You're a mob boss. Your life is full of bad ideas. I think you'll get over this one." lol lol so true:)
Reading the list of everything Bella's gone thru since meeting Edward...whoa! I remember every one of them but spread over chapters kind of dilutes the emotions & memory especially when reading the scene of the next crisis:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The next chapter is with my beta.
LOL I think you are right. It is so hard to forget everything Bella has been through. I think a lot of readers forget x x
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Relentless
[He went into a drawer in the sideboard, pulling out a gun. He checked that it was loaded before handing it over to me. "Another precaution."] Until Jasper did this I honestly was wondering if he was secretly a bad guy.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Relentless
"This wasn't like last time. I wasn't going to breakdown. I had no idea what had changed, but it had, and that was all that mattered." Of Course, I have no idea how I would react but I hope if I was in a 'them or me' situation I'd be able to deal without a whole lot of emotional drama.
It's interesting that even tho I knew there was no way Avi & Liam could be alive, hearing they are dead affected me:(
Author's Response:
Hi, thanks for the review. :) The next chapter is written and has just been sent to my beta and pre-readers. Thank you for your continued patience x x
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Relentless
"...and beat her like a thug. I couldn't believe that I had ever spanked her" lol Oh, come on, she deserved it::))
Author's Response:
HEY!! Thank you for your review. Sorry for the slow update. March was a super busy month and I am still struggling with tiredness. Chapter 33 is now written and with my betas xx
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The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.
And StillDreaming85
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
"...he drove all the way to Chicago just so he could threaten the poor boy, and Ben ended things with Bella that very night." Whoa! Nasty:( I suspect Bella's dad will have a deadly stroke about Mr. Mason::))
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Wonder if Edward's taking Bella's virginity will protect her...from Rosalie?
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
What I've read so far makes me think Bella only recently got on Mr. Mason's radar. But, I started thinking about how her father acts regarding 'boys' taking an interest in her. I'm sure I'll find out eventually but I'm now wondering if Bella's father was knowingly keeping Bella protected/pure for her future meeting of Mr. Mason.
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm going to enjoy watch Edward deal with this predicament:)
Like Bella, I'm wondering where Alice was during this ceremony(?).
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I'm starting to suspect Bella is more than just an ordinary human woman that Edward randomly came across. Bella may not 'know' anything but I suspect their meeting was somehow planned by a currently unknown someone (his 'father'?).
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
"...and she proved that she could be trusted" Hmm, guess Edward isn't all knowing!
"The woman gasped and fell back. She scurried away from Bella as if she had seen a ghost" Bella has somehow been 'marked'.
Rosalie needs to be destroyed!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" I suspect Rosalie:( Obviously, Edward isn't all knowing. His arrogance seems to make it impossible for him to believe his 'followers' would ever work against him. As always in fanfics, Bella is the one to suffer for his stupidity.
I'm really curious what Edward has in mind for Bella's future even tho I suspect he currently has no idea beyond the immediate (sex)::))
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
"I bet you secretly love it when they bow to you," "You would be correct," lol lol It's interesting how Bella isn't really very intimidated by Edward, at not in a fearful way.
Edward either knows what Rosalie is up to & is just letting her hang herself or he has a flaw in his power.
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
"What if her efforts failed and the master found out of her betrayal?" Rose is a nasty character. Hopefully there's some good torture planned for her 'cause she pisses me off::))
"There would be no good outcome to come of this, he knew that. Unless she would become...but he could never, would never do that to her." Guess no matter what species he is, he's an idiot:) Not that I want Bella to become a demon which is in a whole other ballpark than a vampire::))
Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?
Sequel to Dark Velvet
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Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Since I'm not usually one for believing in coincidences of that magnitude, my mind is going to store away the info about the girl named Isabella that Edward questioned. What are the chances::)) If it was all a setup, she deserves an academy award!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I was sitting here wondering how in the world there could ever be a HEA considering the situation. Then I realized I haven't read anything promising a HEA::))
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
"I'm going to be someone's father. Damn...that's messed up." lol I gotta agree with that:)
So far Edward's acting like always (lol) & Bella's acting like I'd expect under the circumstances. The way Esme acted was a big surprise for me. The ultimate sin any MIL could do:( Bet Bella feels like an unloved incubator right now.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
lol Edward's life is total chaos all the time:)
I'd totally forgotten about little Eddie. Big Eddie better play nice or Bella will go for his jugular!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
"I don't deserve your forgiveness." I'll agree with Esme on that one!
"You left and these morons went nuts, and you left me with them," lol lol I was holding my breath, thinking Nonna was going to be a nightmare for Bella. Maybe not:)
"Is there a psychology degree shoved up your ass." lol lol lol
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm guessing the anonymous POV is little Eddie. I'm also guessing they forgot to check out the license plate like Bella asked. Someone is filling that boy's head with lies.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
["Have a fucking seat Ed, you're blocking my view," Ronnie said, pulling up two chairs. The fucker sat down. He pulled out a bag of popcorn, he had beer and two smoky bacon bagels.] lol Ronnie is a great character:)
Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
It's like I have 2 people in my head yelling out their opinion::)) One keeps saying 'Bella should forgive Edward' then the other one yells 'but he murdered her family'! I'm at a loss:( I do suspect she will eventually forgive him & they will have a HEA but I doubt it will be easy or overnight.
I must hold grudges 'cause I'm still angry at Esme for slapping Bella. Must have pushed one of my buttons:) The moment I noticed an update for this story I thought 'Esme slapped Bella. The bitch'::))
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
"....he had a smile on his face as well. Was there something wrong with the staff in this hospital?" lol lol
E & B really are made for each other:) They are both nuts!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
"Does he seem a little weird to you." lol that's pretty funny coming from Weirdward::)) If Eddie's weird, that makes him a chip off the old block!
Amazing that Edward didn't know about Dimitri. Feeds my speculations over who Eddie is working with:)
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
"Watch your fucking language around my baby," lol lol hysterical on several levels::))
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
"...and realize that Bella is more than a traitor's daughter that I married..." Oh, great. All poor Bella needs is Nonna going all mafia grandma on her:(
"Our house now looks like the front line. There is always a heavy presence on the street. Some of the neighbors have complained, why, I don't know" lol lol lol It's amusing that Edward lives in a neighborhood not a compound::))
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
"You...You look like Pipi Long Stockings," lol lol good one! I suspect Jane went to school in the short bus.
"She asked Bella with all the men coming and going if she knew who her baby's father was." lol lol I think I've had her as a neighbor::))
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
[I pulled the trigger, watching his head fall back and the blood splatter on the back of the once white couch. "Can we go already? I have a date tonight," Ronnie said] lol lol
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
omg! 2 cliffies in a row::))
I hope Eddie is ok
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
["Procedure my ass, law boy," Victoria said patting him on the back. "Welcome to the dark side," she winked] lol lol I haven't been able to figure out Sam but there's something about him I like:) He doesn't seem dirty but how he is with the Cullen's is odd.
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Both POV's are great. Very dramatic.
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Absolutely perfect! Thanks for sharing
Just a different PoV
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9117 Read Count: 509
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"David, just having finished a particularly gruesome case of kidnapping, took it on as a kind of rest...." lol lol lol
I completely enjoyed this one-shot! Well written - must read! My view of the lawyer did a 180 from what it was after reading chapter 30 of E.I. - he's a great guy after all:)
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This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways. What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478790
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
(So far) I was wrong in my Masen/Volturi speculation but what Bella found was way beyond what I expected. I remember Edward used donated eggs instead of Tanya's. Considering how much Bella's life intertwines with the Masen's, I'm surprised I never once wondered where the eggs came from:)
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
"Oh, really, Yeah! You better get ready and go to work right away, Daddy," lol lol Bet Edward's feeling the love right now::))
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
["Well?" he stands looking at us, as if he is ready to rip off my head.] lol oh, Charlie, you aren't really going there, are you?
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
"You two ran just over twenty miles." How is that possible? With Bella, I understand, but Stark?
[...his body begins to shake and he falls to the ground..."Wow...that's really something, and it turns me on a little."] lol I like this James:)
For some reason I've always thought of Garrett in his 30's::))
Wow, no sex until 18. Bella's hardcore:)
Full disclosure, family secrets destroy:( Tell the kids asap! Actually, the whole family should be told:)
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
"Please, Albatross, let me deal with this?" I kinda feel for Edward. He's head of the 'family' but a 21 yo female is 100 times more capable than he is & he knows it!
"Yeah, shut it or I will drop you on your ass." "Shut it or I'll have my woman drop you on yours," "Oh, the big man using a little girl to defend him?" "Oh, the big man, that gets beat up by the little girl," love the banter:) Glad Stark isn't having too much trouble keeping his man-card.
"They both seem to pick up on the fighting very easily—even more easily than some of the adults—which troubles me a little" Another speculation popped into my head!
Ok, I may be an idiot but one of my past speculations is screaming at me -- The Masen is the Volturi
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
"...I just didn't want to wrap my arms around you and cuddle you, and then explode all over your ass" lol hysterical:)
I suspected Edward had sex with Sasha. I think she may have drugged him
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
"It has been three hours since she started beating us up; please put a stop to it." lol lol lol There's been no mention that Bella's been cut, bruised or even out of breath::))
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
"Eh, we all hear you, you were talking out loud, Boss," lol lol omg I'm actually embarrassed & it wasn't me that talked:::)))
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Ah, a rogue faction within the Volturi. I've been wondering lately about the fact that Aro, Caius & Marcus aren't Volturi in this story....or are they::))
"...when killing her could help cure us" I suspect killing her wouldn't cure them. The cure is either in her blood or more likely her intelligence could create a cure. Either way, her death means no cure.
"Because," "Because, why?" "Yes, because I said..." lol lol groan:( I hate when parents say this::))