"She better have clothes on, Edward," "Nope, I've already taken them off and been sampling her fine body, now go away," lol best response Edward could make::))

"It's, Sir — Edward! You will be working for me, do you understand that?" jeez, this guy must have a 2 inch dick 'cause he seems to be compensating:( lol
"Just like I know you provide—find—arms, for those Masen leaches" ooh, he's got a small IQ to go along with the small dick!

It's sad Bella believes Edward will be afraid of her after she kills/shot all those men. If I remember correctly, this was her reaction after telling the story about killing the 2 men in the bank. Edward's a mob boss. I'd think he'd be more than glad to have her on his side::))

Since it seems everyone else is speculating, thought I'd do it too. So I spent 10 minutes typing out all my speculations....then I thought who gives a shit & erased it all! Just kill Donkey & I'll be happy::))

Bella seems like a con-artist with the skill of someone twice her age! Could be a great addition to the Masen crime family::))

Serious security issues? He's got uber crap security::)) And I can't believe he hired someone (Jessica) as a nanny that obviously hasn't a clue about or even likes kids.
So many interesting speculations!

"....I say looking around the room and my eyes land on Stark who seems cross as he makes his way over to me" lol Don't think Bella will be announcing the girls tonight::))

"....I move my hand, traveling down my body to grip my thick hardness" Yep, I know what's coming. He must have short term memory loss if he forgot about the broken lock::))

I'm now convinced that, even tho Bella dug up info on Edward & family/crew, she isn't out to harm him in any way:) Plus it's not like she went out looking for him unless this is a, yet undisclosed, supernatural story::))

"douche-nozzle" lol lol lol love it!

Author's Response:

Not really a supernatural story, but there are some elements of it that may come across that way ... HOWEVER I would liekt he chance to revisit this statement after the truth comes out if it is not explained enough in the storyline, which I think it is.  LOL 

Yeah Douche-Nozzle is one of my (Kasi) Favorite names to call someone who makes me upset.

As usual, Newton makes me throw up in my mouth!

"I look out my rearview mirror and sigh when I see Felix following in his car, who's being followed by Frank, and lastly Jasper is just behind him" lol lol priceless:)

Not sure if I've run into a character as delusional as Jabba the Marmaduke. He truly is 1 sick dude::))

Bella really didn't give poor Emmett a chance::)) She needs to go back & show them what she's got....without killing anyone:)
It seems that a growing number of Edward's family have ties to Bella's past. Esme & by default Carlisle, Aro (& I suspect Dora also). I betting Anna somehow got in this group too. Seems Bella might have found a new/old family:)

"to honor and obey" nice added touch to have both of them say "obey":) Considering the situation & who they are, it makes for great symbolism.

Sasha is so pathetic:(

Parasite - Chaos is hysterical::))

Great fun reading how everyone is messing with Sasha::))

Geez, how many kids can 1 person pop out? lol

Thanks for sharing this story! I completely enjoyed every chapter:)

I love the pictures & 'chapter quotes' at the beginning of each chapter. They do a great job of jarring my memory of the story before going on to read an update:)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I do surf the internet when I have to post a chapter like mad but it is good to know it has some effect, but if you want ot see more photoes you can check my facebook profile.

"....your family will be there until then protecting you, when the time comes will be there to look after you." It's interesting that Charlie is the last of the Swan's (I'm assuming) & Aysu wakes up during his time.
I have a feeling that when E & B find the pond, more will happen than having 2 people looking at a pretty pond.

Author's Response:

Ah! you guys have such lovely imaginations. Lets see what will happen, and thank you so much for the review I love reading them cause it makes me write faster and stimulate my imagination lol.

It's almost painful reading this Bella's thoughts & actions::)) For someone who grew up around her sperm donor, she doesn't have a clue.

Jasper's supposed actions are a big surprise. Even tho it looks really bad for him, I'm not completely convinced he's guilty.

Popping out an eyeball! Nice::)) omg!

Great drabble. I rarely get to read this side of 'Bella'. Good thing my stomach was empty while reading::)) I'll be looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for sharing

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your reviews and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x

Great story:) Thanks for sharing

"...if it weren't for the white coat I would not have recognized he was a doctor. He looked more like a butcher..." lol Bella's funny when she's stressed:)

They're now calling you The Optometrist." Yep, I get all squeamish when I read mafia style torture but there usually ends up being some comedy to take the edge off::))

Shit! lol lol These people are crazy::))

Whoa, Rosalie is pregnant!

Peter's quite the turd! He's lucky he's still alive:)

As always, a great chapter

"What's next, is she going to put us in pink dresses...." lol lol
Their meeting with the 1st batch started out tense but Bella seems to have unknowingly softened the hardcore thugs::)) No doubt there will be bullets whizzing past E & B's heads before this is all over.

Looking back it's amazing I ever thought Maggy's online friend could possibly be Aro! My mental state must be declining::))

To state the obvious, Aro is a sick bastard:( Nasty!

"Edward looked up at Alec, who was white as a ghost, and practically choking himself with his tie" I may have a soft spot for & feel protective of Alec but that's still hysterical:)

lol Sean is expecting Edward, Bella, Maggie & few guards, not a whole plane load of people::))

I actually stuck that into my memory for my personal use::))

"You ever think that maybe he was conceived during anal sex?" lol lol lol

"A/N: What do you think of Jake?" I always love Jake if he's imprinted, gay or dead::)) lol

Geez, Charlie needs to have a little talk with Bella about stopping to talk to Daddy when he's giving someone a warning on the side of the road::))

I just went into speculation mode! I doubt she's sick, but something will be happening when she turns 21 that she doesn't want. Many other things are on my 'Hmm' list.

All the stress Edward went thru regarding the Swans & Bella turns out to be Aro's granddaughter::)) Seems Aro's been 'playing' Edward for awhile now!

"...then I'll get Jake to shoot you in the ass again." So Jake shot one of Aro's brother in the ass? lol lol
I have to agree that this is one of the best Jake's I've read::))

No doubt many other people will eventually need to be killed but it would be nice to see Mike, Tanya & Royce dead any time soon! Eleazer probably wouldn't be missed much either::))

Jake knowing more about Bella's periods than she does is kind of disturbing! lol

Great story! Thanks for sharing

"Perhaps Kate would take me in and hide me for a few weeks until Edward had given up looking for me" lol She's so naïve:)
Geez. Well, damn! Guess the guard won't be calling the authorities.

Personally I thing Bella acted pretty nice considering what's happening:) I can only imagine how I would act if my dad tried that crap on me::))

"No tears, please. Today is a joyous day, it's the first day of the rest of your life. You're going to be so happy Isabella, so please don't cry." lol Seems Esme is delusional or at the least in major denial::))
I gotta admit I'd like to bash everyone with a baseball bat for not telling Bella what the hell is going on! And if their lame excuse is that they didn't want Bella to worry...well I'm sure there's a few warehouses that could be put to good use::))

I was actually holding my breath until I read that Marcus was ok! I can't believe how worried I was about him::))

"What about the Russians and Billy?"...."The men will take care of it." This made me groan out loud speculating what insane thing Bella will be planning:)

I keep coming back to the thought 'would I have acted any different than Bella'. Actually, I might have been worse except I wouldn't have run off into the unknown. At least they're talking now.

lol Edward should hang the sheet off the side of the house, kind of like giving everyone the finger::) I actually snorted 2 times while thinking about this situation!

Damn! Emotionally, I'm on the fence with outright killing Liam. Altho, I know there was no other way. This is the mafia & he was acting weird:)

I may want to slap Bella around but it does seem like there's no one she can trust. Something's 'off' with both Maggie & Liam.

Carlisle as a passenger in Esme's golf cart is hysterical::))

I have to laugh that it took Edward waking up from a semi-coma to remind them about the tracking devices. All this time & no one even thought of it::))