Reviews by mommymac0508
Summary:

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Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192179
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
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Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Edward has is bad he is in so deep 

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Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Holy snap wow my brain is mush 

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I loved it hehe the girls know just what to ask hehehe

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Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Holy hell that was sexy and I cant wait for what is next more I need more please and I would love a pdf please

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh I love it yummy

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A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
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Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella why are they after her who is it and will they get to her

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Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How did Edward know where to send the flowers and is Bella is smart she will dump Sam he is no good and extremely selfish she just lost her friens and he is complaining about sex but who is the stalker 

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Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow I love it it keeps you on your toes who is who what is really going on and who is behind what

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Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved it and now they all are in a better place happy and together thank you for it all I always love getting lost in your stories

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Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow I so didn't see that coming damn now will Bella be ok will she ever be able to recover from this update soon

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Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh wow Jessica is believing the stalker over her life long friend and Sam is not right in the head Bella needs to tell the worker on Seths case and who is the killer and who is the stalker will Angela be OK 

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Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it wow poor Bella will her stalker hurt her or will the killer get her first and poor Edward he is judge to harshly update soon

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Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow it seems poor Edward is just awkward but observant does he see something Bella is missing and how did Sam know she and the girls were with 3 guys hmmmmmm

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A/U AH - Three Witch sisters move from Salem, MA to Houston TX where they rent to own the ancestral home of one Edward Cullen. For some reason Edward has a dream about a dark haired beauty that he has yet to meet. Does Bella already have Edward under her spell? What mayhem will the Witch Sisters bring into the lives of Edward, his family and his friends?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47434 Read Count: 30293
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2015
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Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream

Oh this is going to be beautiful and fun I can't wait 

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Date: 10 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Planning

Oh thank goodness it have a real starting point 



Author's Response:

Not sure what you mean, but get ready fir the HEA to come busting in.

Thank you so much for your readership and reviewing.

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinai

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Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - YES!

I loved it they all found their happily ever after and now how big will the weddings be



Author's Response:

Thank you.  We still have some chapters to go yet, so hang in there.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

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Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told

Would what will become of them all 



Author's Response:

An HEA that's what.  Of course.  I don't think I've written any story where the principals didn't end up with one.  :D

Have to wait until next chapter to know.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Oh I love it so far I can't wait for more tell them I said to start talking to you



Author's Response:

Thank  you.  I'm trying.  Alice is not being responsive!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well well well Edward is very drawn to Bella now will she be who he dreamed about and how will he find out what she is



Author's Response:

I just saw this this morning.  I'm sure I've answered reviews fro later chapter. Have no clue why I'm seeing this now.  *scratches head*

Hope you have enjoyed it.

Please don't give up on me I try to answer every review.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

 

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Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I loved it they have the guys bewitched he hehehe but will they find out there secret update soon 

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 First Date

Oh boy they are ready now how will there date go 

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well they have been around for a long time how will they find happiness and sadness update soon 



Author's Response:

Only time will tell if they find happiness or not.  I guess you'll just have to "hide and watch".  Thanks for reading me and thank you so much for reviewing.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Revelations

Oh wow is Bella free from the curse and will Edward say anything to her about his dream 



Author's Response:

No, sorry.  Bella is not free from the curse.  Not sure if she will be.  could be only Alice and Rosalie find "true" love and Bella will left alone to wander the earth.  We'll just have to wait and see what happens.  :) Evil.  I know.  *grinning*  Honestly.  I"m just the typist.  I have to wait until the characters talk to me.  I've already gotten 4 and 1/2 more chapters written.  Wish I had more, cause I'd like to know what they're going to do. 

Thank you so much for your support.  That, means a great deal to me.  Really.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow I loved it but when will she tell him I can't wait to read 



Author's Response:

Maybe Bella will be ok and Conner accept Edward.  Just never know with people do you.

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

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Date: 17 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night

I loved it wow they are very humble and sweet that is how it should be now how will there day setting up go



Author's Response:

Thank you!  They've had a lot of years to learn it's better to nice then not!

I look forward to your comments on the next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time

Well when will Bella figure out he is her soul mate and how will he take the news about her magic 



Author's Response:

Thak you reading and reviewing!  Bella will figure it all out in the fullness of time - I hope!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Realizations

Well that was faster than I thought but he was right in his thinking  UT did they all lose their powers update soon 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Well I hate to drag things out.  :D

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44718
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
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Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow he is a jerk but is he that good at his job to act that way and will Bella be able to work with him

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Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I had a feeling that was why he was rude to her but will he stop and just tell her how he feels

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Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow now the bombs are disabled how will Edward save Bella 

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Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh wow Edward took it too far what is his problem with Bella and now what is going down at the bank

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Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Will she figure out what is really going on before it's too late

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Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hot damn Bella is good real smart too now how will she finish the job

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Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow she is good now will she figure out what they are after and stop them before anyone gets hurt 

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well she took out more and knows what they are up to but what will be her next move update soon 

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well I think Edward has been trying to keep Bella away because her cares too much hmmm and will he disarm the  bombs in time and will her dad be ok 

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow they stopped them and they are all ok but did they really get them all 

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh thank goodness he got his head out of his ass but they are smart to take it slow update soon 

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Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh snap will she be OK will they find her in time update soon 

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Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow she is one smart cookie and now they caught the bad guys but did they get everyone

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Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh wow that was sweet what the guys did to send Bella off and I am happy Bree is being taken care of  but hmm mm will they come back with rings on their fingers  hehehe hehehe update soon 

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Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh I loved it and I was right they got married hehehe he and now they are trying for a baby so sweet update soon 

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Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved it he hehehe hehehe that was perfect thank you for everything 

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
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Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well well well now we know why Edward is the way he is but we can see he still has a Heart how will Bella bring it out of him 

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Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Where It All Began

Holy snap would you start with a big bang wow I love it and I need more

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Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow he just after what he wants and has no care to what anyone else wants but will this work out in the end

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh snap what a way to tell her parents and what shot who update soon 

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Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh boy what Edward did made him look a tiny bit better in everyone's eyes but how will his family take in Bella and the boys and will Bella give her sisters a taste of their own medicin 

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Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91261
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
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Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh I loved it so sweet and heartbreaking too but I loved it all Thank you 

Summary:

 

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Sometimes secrets aren’t meant to be hidden. Maybe it’s for the best that they are out in the open.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8372 Read Count: 2465
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2014 Updated: 02 Dec 2014
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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: For The Best

I loved it oh boy hehehehehe that was awesome Charlie is good hehehehe thank you

Smoke on the Water by FyreMasen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
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Smoke on the Water is an annual barbecue and music festival held in a small Georgia town. It draws crowds from far and wide. Only this year, country star Bella Swan is gonna be the main act. What happens when a couple of good ole country boys win passes to meet her?

An entry for the Get Your Southern On contest. We won First Place Honorable Mention

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33786 Read Count: 13392
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 May 2015
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Date: 28 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I loved it all of it so sweet

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It was that time of year where gifts are secretly exchanged with her co-workers. As each gift becomes more and more personal, she wonders who she should hug or junkpunch?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9052 Read Count: 1859
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2014 Updated: 25 Dec 2014
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Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Are You My Secret Santa?

Oh I loved it so beautiful funny and sweet with some sexy in there too thank you and Merry Christmas 

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Banner By: Tiffany Kennedy - thanks for making this banner for us.

After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 21862
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
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Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow poor  Bella I don't think she knows how else to be and how different  does she look off  work and does no one remember her

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh poor poor poor Bella is is giving everything she owns to the company to save the whole town will Edward open there eyes to the real Bella 

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well Rose is a bitch and needs to know how ugly she looks but wow now that everyone knows the truth they understand and are helping them it's beautiful 

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh I loved it just what I needed to read thank you have a wonderful new year

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
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Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hello I found you on Facebook on sarges girls and with only two chapters I am already hooked more please and fast



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm so glad that Sarge's Girls post brought me so many more readers!  I'm also glad you're hooked!  Posting will be mostly once a week, until I finish some things, and then I'll likely make it twice a week.  :)

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I loved it wow did I ever the pure joy I got from reading this chapter was just what I needed so beautiful thank you 



Author's Response:

Aww ... I'm so glad you loved this one!  It was the perfect ending for them, wasn't it?  Thank you so much for reading!  :)

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I loved it you made me crate ugly tears but it was beautiful after that Edward said just what she needed to let go of her guilt and now she can I've on 



Author's Response:

Yes, at this point he was well enough to handle the truth, and to be able to support her without pulling away.  I do hope she can move on now.  :)

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Oh poor Edward his eyes are opening and he sees Tanya for what she is now how will she disappear can a house fall on her

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Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

I loved it poor Edward he is stuck with no way out 

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Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

Holy hot damn that was yummy more please 

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Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Hahahahahahah Edward is not the only one who is in trouble hehehehe

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Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 20 part 2

Hot damn now that is how to start your day right hehehehehehe

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Wow I know Edward is trying but you can't make yourself want someone 

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Wow it's like Tanya is just a friend and Edward and Bella are the family 

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Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Yes the sound of happiness makes a house a home but will Jasper be able to find a way to get Edward free 

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Awe he dedicated the award to Bella how sweet Tanya ever figure it out

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Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

Poor Edward Tanya didn't trip and break her neck damn

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Oh boy Tanya is not or will ever be a mother they should video how she acts towards her son and blackmail the bitch

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Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Wow these people are crazy and stupid if they didn't catch Tanya fumble about where the baby is I hate her I wish she broke a heal and fell down the stairs and broke her neck 

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Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

Oh wow what will she say I know she is going to talk about her daughter and sister

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Heheheheheheh heheheheheheh that was funny more please 

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Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

Hmmm do you think they are going to let her go or ask her to move in hmmmm I think it's the later but how will it work with her daughter and sister

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Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 19 Part 13

Hot damn that was sexy and yummy more please

happy holidays 

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Awe so sweet but Jasper I think he had more fun with Alice than he is willing to talk about hehehehehe

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Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

That was hot like an inferno 

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

With Tanya hiding it's like Bella and Edward are a real family with the kids

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Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

I loved it thank goodness the baby is getting better but Tanya the press is going to have a field day about her not showing up

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Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Oh snap Tanya got caught with her agent hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha man is she stupid 

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Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Hell yeah throw the bitch out she made her bed let her lie in it 

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Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Hahaha you gotta love Emmett heheheheheheheh 

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Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Hehehe I loved it but I don't Edward will be able to hold back much longer what is he going to do about it

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 19 Part 14

Oh I love it the anticipation is killing me 

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Oh yes but will Alice and Jasper do anything about it and when will Tanya die put her on a private plane and let it go down and she be the only one who died 

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Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

Hehehe I loved it he is too cute

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Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

Hehehehehehehe I loved it

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Oh my yummy in deed but that was awesome kids are the best hahahahahahahahaha

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Well she seems ok she just keeps her distance 

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 14 part 3

Oh wow she had a shock after hearing Edwards speech  

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Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

I loved it they are all happy this is great 

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Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

Wow I hope Tanya gets burned so bad for who she really is 

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Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

I loved it yes it worked and now he has to deal with poop but I don't think he will mind



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me either!

 

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

Well now she knows it's not a prank but will the want her to nurse him too

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

Oh boy what will he say to her and will her milk work

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 2 (part 7)

It worked thank goodness that poor baby and Edward now all will be better for them

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Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

Poor Edward but Bella was there just when he needed her

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Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 3 (part 4)

Bella to the rescue she is a life saver 

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Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

I loved it wow what an eye opener  what will he do

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

Well will he come up with something to help get more mile to his son from Bella