Reviews by mommymac0508
The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145792
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
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Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh I loved it hehehehehehehe Rose is a lot of fun more please 

I hope you feel better soon

 

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Date: 20 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh my that was awesome and having Alice as a friend to help her like that was perfect  now I can't wait to what's next 

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow the way you wrote this I could picture it all I loved it 

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Well that was a great and important talk and now they are each in the play back hmmmmm what will happen hehehehehehe

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Date: 12 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Are you trying to make me spontaneously combust holy hell that was intense i loved it

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Date: 21 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh I love it heheheheheheh her dad makes me laugh though heheheheheheh more please 

Hmmmmm I say doctor Oh and military yeah those would be great 

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Date: 27 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

My oh my did someone see them and will they say anything but hot dame that was sexy

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Date: 20 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh my what the hell was her dad thinking I hope she can set him straight that man is up to no good 

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Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I loved it awe poor Bella she needed Edward to let it all out. Now Edward sure knows how to please her and even when they are in different countries heheheheheheh more please I can't wait to read what she says to her father 

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Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I loved it I hope her dad really gives Edward a chance but why didn't she tell them what a real disgusting man James is and what he said to her

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Date: 18 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wow what a welcome home 

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Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oh boy but I had a feeling that was the problem but will the stop Aro and his plan to take over

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Date: 06 May 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Oh boy so Aro was a pervert pepping tom but damn all this is about to blow up in his face

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Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh wow I loved it and hell yeah they nailed Aro to the wall 

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Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh wow I loved it and hell yeah they nailed Aro to the wall 

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I am loving it already more please lots more

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Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it wow it was like bam for both of them now will it work out for them update soon 

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh I loved it so sweet and cute too I can't wait for more 

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Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it how sweet and wonderful it all but the goodbye  but how will their time apart go and I think his parents had a little something to do with it

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Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh I loved it how sweet and Edward made the special day for lucy simply perfect 

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Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved it so sweet I wish there was more thank you again for another great story 

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Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126022
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
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Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow Oh wow I think they both feel the same way but I think he home life is not as it should be 

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Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh yeah he is in deep and so is she but when will Edward realize Emmett and Bella are just great friends 

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Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That went well and I think Edward is being smart about moving it will be to hard on them to just live with all that always going on around them and I hope Bella can see she now has a real family to stand by her 

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Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Tia is nice but she is not the one for Edward she doesn't like any of the things that makes him him

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Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow they both can't fight what is between them but will Edward end things with Tia

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh wow Edward is in deep but I don't think Bella and Emmett are dating I think it's a brother sister thing update soon 

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Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't think Emmett and Bella are boyfriend and girlfriend I think he cares like a good friend or brother but I don't think her parents care for her am I right on anything 

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Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh my poor poor Bella her parents are so selfish how could they do that to her now how long will Edward be able to hold himself back with Bella because he is slipping up more and more

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was a great Christmas but I think Rose and Emmett have a thing going on and Emmett was trying to get his dad hooked up with Bella because she is his match and the age difference I can't wait to find out if I am right 

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Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh boy when will Edward talk to Emmett and will Bella's parents become a problem 

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Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh wow poor poor Bella when will Edward talk and give into his feelings for her Oh and I can't wait to meet Charlie 

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Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow it's like they can't help it they just get closer and closer to each other without realizing it and I am happy he is not dating Tia and that she was right there with him on the friend thing

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Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella her parents are awful but will Edward and Emmett makes Christmas better for her update soon 

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that is bad to fail every class wow and what he said I would have done just the same and taken all electronics away

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Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it but how did Newton get that job but is the person Emmett says that needs to get away Bella is she ok

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my poor Bella and Edward has no clue the baby is his why won't Emmett just tell him it is making matters worse update soon I need to know what is next 

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh snap that was a sweet new year party but was it real or not I need to know asap 

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Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved it wow thank goodness Bella is doing well and they had time to just talk but what Tia did was awesome hehehehe now I think everyone will be happy for them 

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Date: 05 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh I loved it wow I am happy they are talking and now two babies wow they will have there hands full heheheheheheheh now what does Tia have planned for Mr Newton 

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Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I can't believe this I hope Bella gets the strength to go after the Newton family and finally stand strong as she really is. And Edward let Rosalie and Emmett off to easy he should still be upset over the lies and deceit and hurt they caused Bella by being selfish. I loved it. Update soon

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Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh that goodness she went somewhere safe poor Bella I hope her and Edward have a long talk and work it all out

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Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Emmett is funny and wow poor  Bella she has a very lonely life but I am getting the feeling Emmett is trying to set up his dad with Bella 

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved loved loved it thank you so much for writing this it was a great read I always look forward to updates I can't wait for the next ones 

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awe Edward is so romantic and sweet. Her parents ugh there are not enough bad words to express how much I hate them. I love the fact she see her new friends as family because they are

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Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh I loved it this was perfect they are so happy 

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 72890
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
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Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh I loved it he hehehe well it seems she has really found a home there and as for G it's going to be fun to see what he says or thinks next

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Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hehehe this is going to be fun I just know it I almost want to wait tell its done to read it all at once update soon 

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Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow I loved it I so can't wait for the pervy part

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Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh wow that house sounds like the 70's blew up in there I was in a house like that it had a mirror room too hahahahahah

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh poor Bella that has to be painful and Edward to lose his mother that way but they are cute hehehehe

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Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Holy shit that was erotic and so sensual I loved it and now I need a new pair heheheheheheheh

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Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awe even she make him go all sweet and cuddle 

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Holy shit that blew me away wow so erotic and sensual it was perfect 

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Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well this is her new beginning and so far so good what's next 

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Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh they have a connection how deep is it or will it go

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Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It's sweet and sensual I love it 

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Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Holy hell I think you melted my phone that was so hot it was a 3 alarm fire more I need more 

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Holy snap that was erotic and sensual and intense wow so very yummy I need more

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I really like this first chapter it drew me in i almost wish is was finished so I could keep reading 

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Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy hell blew my mind 

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Holy snap it's getting hot in here more please 

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Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I loved it so sweet now will they work all three of them I can't wait for the next thank you 

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Holy snap that blew my mind wow I am speechless yummy more please 

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh I loved it so sweet and hot but I can't wait for more 

Leftovers by honeyandholywater Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Twice divorced single mom of two, Bella Swan, is done with love. And men.

When a new man enters her life he brings with him new opportunities for love. 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4875 Read Count: 700
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Jul 2015
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Date: 24 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow poor Bella and her bad luck in men but I hope things change for them update soon 

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Date: 24 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it well Bella seems to do all she can but seems light on her daughter's but everyone is different update soon 

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32511
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hmm mm why did Edward bring her family here and who is her mom really and does Charlie know or his majesty Edward know

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Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh boy does Charlie know about her mom's past and does he know the real reason Bella is there

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man

Oh my heheheheheh I am new an I just read all 8 chapters I love it I am looking forward to more

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen meets Bella Swan. She's the young veterinary nurse who still believes in true love. He's the tattooed architect who finds himself very taken with the special girl. "There's something about you... Somehow you've got to me, Little Swan." This is their story of a fairytale romance in a modern world.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101028 Read Count: 39737
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Jan 2016
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Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh wow Edward and Bella are getting so close now he is unbelievably sweet with her now are we finally going to find out what is wrong with his parents update soon 

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Hello I was looking for something new to read and found this I really like it and I can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Hi,

Another new reader - welcome! It's lovely to have you joining this little journey with me.

i'm glad you've stumbled upon my story and that you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for leaving a review and letting me know what you thought!

The next chapter will be up in a few hours, so keep an eye out for it...

J x

 

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh boy will Carlisle tell him what is really going on  and Bella is too sweet and cute 

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Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Oh I loved it she is just too cute and Edward what a dream boat

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Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Wow Carlisle is more screwed up than I thought that dude needs major help now what will Esme do and what will Edward do about work hmmmm

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 81

Awe that was sweet and funny heheheh most guys can't wrap but my dad can hehehe

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Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 77

Wow poor Jared but he got to see Edward become free at least now how long will Esme get

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Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I loved it she is home and they seem happy now what is next for them 

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Date: 09 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 93

Wow I was so far behind damn I was really missing out I loved everything more please 

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Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 82

Oh how sweet their love is I can't wait for them to be mostly healed and be able to come together for real this time I bet it will so beautiful 

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

That was beautiful but heartbreaking too I loved it 

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 78

Wow poor Edward he doesn't need anymore pain right now but maybe he got a little something to high ten him up and I am not talking abou money but maybe a letter 

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Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oh wow I just read all 9 chapters I am hooked I wish is was finished so I didn't have to stop reading well I guess I have to get back to RL stuff heheheheheheheh 

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Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I loved it I think Bella is more intuitive with Edward than she knows but will he open up to her will she be able to save him

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Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh I loved it for someone reason I miss a couple of chapters but I am all caught up and hot damn they were hot 

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I loved it wow how cute is Edward in the morning now will Bella calm down after she wakes up and will she call for Edward again 

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I loved it go Bella she knows how to make a deal but she is spot on when it comes to Edward and Esme now what is next

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Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I loved it that has to be hard on everyone to relive it than have someone be nasty to them about but Edward sweet sweet Edward you gotta love the guy his heart is so big

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Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I loved it.  Poor Edward he needs to find a way to get out from under Esme will Bella be the key to his freedom and helping his mother 

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71

Oh wow I was so far behind I am kicking my self I was so into reading I didn't realize that is 2 am I loved it and need more I can't believe so much has happened update soon please 

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72

Awe Rose is a great friend and Edward such a beautiful heart but Charlie is hurting too but he needs to take a step back and really look at everything again 

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Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 95

I think she will die by someone's hands she hurt children men and woman she is going to suffer 

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Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 96

I loved it every one is finding there way it great

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Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73

I hope Charlie can come  to his senses and sees he is losing his daughter for good and Edward is so sweet with her I love it and go Jacob I would have done the same

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Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 79

Poor Edward I hope the letter helps in the long run but as for his mother I think that will take a very long time to fix that relationship update soon 

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Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 80

I hope that talk helped him but I know he has a long way to go

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Date: 04 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 84

I loved it wow Edward is really doing good but Jasper this is huge for him update soon 

Summary:



Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229009
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Hmm mm to many people are there at once they all know something 

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Oh boy so much happening poor Bella but Edward and family are there for her but who was it and why

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Wow she handled herself with strength and grace