Reviews by nora yar
Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Perfect!

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467285
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Thor, Loki, and the gang

You are doing great as usual, Lexi. Please do not stop. I would love to know what is going on in Michael’s head. He is my favorite.


Love


Nora Yar

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533153
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Dear, dear, my beloved Lexi, I am your long time loyal fan. I am reading every word you write and my honest opinion that you are THE BEST on FF and you are becoming better and better with every chapter. I am old woman and I am reading a lot since I learned to read. There are many wonderful writers but your talent is absolutely unique. Your ability to create so many different characters and make them act according to their personalities just never stop to amaze me. Your story lines extremely interesting, intriguing and in a same time very, very realistic. Your descriptions so vivid, I have no problem to transfer myself to your story world and go with your characters through all their ordeal and predicaments. And your humor is really funny. Lemons are very lemony. Children characters are best children characters I ever met. And on top of all that: You are wonderful, kind, honest, amazing person yourself. It is shining through all your writing and ANs. Every word you wrote belongs to where you placed it. Reading your stories is like watching well choreographed, beautiful ballet, so much grace and harmony. ALEX  and C POV very good addition to the story. I will try to pay my debt to you by going back and placing same short comment after each chapter I enjoyed before. I also will place this comment in each your story because it’s about my admiration of your talent and not just one story or chapter. Sorry, I just not equipped to do more.

Love you so much. You are god send to make my life sweeter.

Nora Yar

 

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Dear, dear, my beloved Lexi, I am your long  time loyal fan. I am reading every word you write and my honest opinion that you are THE BEST on FF and you are becoming better and better with every chapter. I am old woman and I am reading a lot since I learn to read.


There are many wonderful writers but your talent is absolutely unique. Your ability to create so many different characters and make them act according to their personalities just never stop to amaze me.


Your story lines extremely interesting, intriguing and in a same time very, very realistic. You description so vivid, I have no problem to transfer myself to your story world and go with your character thru all their ordeal  and predicaments. And your humor is really funny . Lemons are very lemony. Children characters are best children characters I ever met. And on top of all that: You are wonderful, kind, honest, amazing person yourself. It is shining through all your writing. If everything will continuing developing as it is now and I will live long enough there is no doubt in my mind that one day I will tell my friends: Do you know this multiple best sellers author Alexandra Great? I am proud to say I am following her, writing from her first story on FF.


NOW TO THE POINT! Who and most important WHY???? will write nasty review. There are several category of people who will do it. And it was only matter of time before  they attack you because you so high above of crowd and perfectly visible. Some of them just envious losers, some professional haters,


Stinky nothings who cannot stand another people success. Another group are people who have mental disorders. Ironically name for one of them : EMOTIONAL VAMPIRISM. This people feel withdrawn and lifeless till they upset and agitate another person and suck out emotional energy their victim radiate


It is like other way around adrenalin junky. They have their fix from their victim adrenalin. All this categories usually very skilful of hurting people’s feelings. They can found tender spot and find most painful


Way to wound you. Sometimes they wear friendly mask and smile and making look like they are want to help with constructive criticism but you feel hurt. Do not trust this kind of criticism. It has nothing to do with you writing, it is only about them enjoying you pain.  Every extraordinary person, like you my dear lexy ,destined to cross their ways with this kind of people ones in a while. Only way of protection is knowledge of their motivation and only way of discouraging them is totally ignore them. Please, please Lexi, learn to deal with them, build high wall between you and them and let them choke on another side. Do not honor them with any kind of response. Love you so much. Nora Yar.


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Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

Dear, dear, my beloved Lexi, I am your long  time loyal fan. I am reading every word you write and my honest opinion that you are THE BEST on FF and you are becoming better and better with every chapter. I am old woman and I am reading a lot since I learned to read.


There are many wonderful writers but your talent is absolutely unique. Your ability to create so many different characters and make them act according to their personalities just never stop to amaze me. Your story lines extremely interesting, intriguing and in a same time very, very realistic. Your description so vivid, I have no problem to transfer myself to your story world and go with your character through all their ordeal  and predicaments. And your humor is really funny. Lemons are very lemony. Children characters are best children characters I ever met. And on top of all that: You are wonderful, kind, honest, amazing person yourself. It is shining through all your writing. If everything will continuing developing as it is now and I will live long enough, there is no doubt in my mind that one day I will tell my friends: Do you know this multiple best sellers author Alexandra Great? I am proud to say I am following her writing from her first story on FF.


NOW TO THE POINT! Who and most important WHY???? will write nasty review. There are several category of people who will do it. And it was only matter of time before  they attack you because you so high above of crowd and perfectly visible. Some of them just envious losers, some professional haters,


Stinky nothings who cannot stand another people success. Another group are people who have mental disorders. Ironically name for one of them : EMOTIONAL VAMPIRISM. This people feel withdrawn and lifeless till they upset and agitate another person and suck out emotional energy their victim radiate.


It is like other way around adrenalin junky. They have their fix from their victim’s adrenalin. All this categories usually very skillful in hurting people’s feelings. They can found tender spot and find most painful way to wound you. Sometimes they wear friendly mask and smile and making look like they just want to help with constructive criticism but you feel hurt. Do not trust this kind of criticism. It has nothing to do with you writing, it is only about them enjoying your pain.  Every extraordinary person, like you my dear lexy ,destined to cross their ways with this kind of people ones in a while. Only way of protection is knowledge of their motivation and only way of discouraging them is totally ignore them. Please, please Lexi, learn to deal with them, build high wall between you and them and let them choke on another side. Do not honor them with any kind of response. Love you so much. Nora Yar.


.PS. Just fixed some typos

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Before I will place my thoughts about this chapter ( chapter 19) I need to tell something about what I learned from Lexi’s comments about flamers. Otherwise I will explode and we do not want that. Judging from intensity of negativity of their “reviews” I am absolutely sure that we deal not with conventional bellicose arrant fools or envious a..holes but with one (or more) numerous cases of Personality Disorders described in forensic psychiatry. Most likely this is malignant stage of emotional sadomasochism or one of branches of narcissism. In any Case thorough psychiatric evaluation highly recommended. Are we going to allow mentally disturbed people to mess with our emotions? F..k NO. I stick out my little cute middle finger and put it next to Lexi’s little cute middle finger. Vaffanculo, disse la principessa italiana! And I am with her.  


Love you Lexi


Chapter 19. Unbelievable , Lexi, your ability to create extremely complicated plot and make it feel like real life never fail to amaze me. Little comical bits, like Carlisle bathroom activity with IV rolling out in front of him or “There, resting in his linguine and clam sauce, was John's head”. Just a cherry on the top. Thanks’


And Bella! Viva Bella! Good girl.


Chapter 20


I have no idea what should happened to Esme.  She is mother too. Her girls need her. But I would rip her head off.

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Sure I read this on your blog. It was intense as hell. You kept me focused with iron fist regardless my severe ADD. Lexi I am in awe of your talant. You almost made me shape shifter. It is so easy to move from  damn RL in to world you created. Thanks girl. Love you more and more.
Nora Yar

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Great! Thank you!

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Just wonderful, Lexi. Never disappoint. Love and admiration. As writer and as a person you are just wonderful.
Nora Yar

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The doctors at this busy, New York hospital all have the same goals; saving lives, setting the on-call rooms on fire, and maybe, falling in love? Grey's Anatomy concept with Twilight character twist. Canon Couples. Rated: M - Romance/Humor - Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199786 Read Count: 177717
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good, captivating story. Perfect writing. Real joy to read. Love you Lexi.
Nora Yar

Summary:

Carlisle wants to be happy. With the holiday season approaching, he's left in a bitter and somber mood. His only source of enjoyment comes in the form of fantasizing about his son's girlfriend, Bella. Canon Coup. AH. MelissaMargaret/Me collab o/s


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7326 Read Count: 4109
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfect. Sad and beautiful. I am reading it second time and second time I feel like every word on its right place. Thanks Lexi

Love you

Nora Yar