Reviews by queenxochitl
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: queenxochitl Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter

This was fuckhawt!



Author's Response:

Pssshhh!!! I heart you hard!!!

Reviewer: queenxochitl Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

*Raises hand, waves fingers anxiously, and bites her lower lip* I have so many questions! *Abruptly, lowers hand* Never mind! I am going to enjoy this delicious burn because I know they will all be answered. Sigh..OwnYourAssWard is fuck-hawt. Their need for each other is palpable. Its hilarious when Bella thinks "she is falling" for him...poor girl, too stubborn to know she already is. She is so done. You cliffie-h00r!



Author's Response:

HAHA!!! I'll never tell!!!! And YES I take pride in my cliffie-h00r status...though, this one wasnt that bad, come on!!! Thanks <3 you!

Reviewer: queenxochitl Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

I loved this chapter. The flashback was beautifully written. The imagery was detailed and well thought out. And omigawd, James' transformation was dramatic! The blood, Bella's and James' pain was palpable! James' innocence was evident and then his bitterness and vindicitve personality..wow! Very well done, sweet tits.

Oh! I would love and Edward pov when they...y'know..when they finally..*cough*fuck*cough*. That would be amazing because we will have an insight of what he goes through physically and emotionally when he drinks Bella's venom. Wouldn't that be amazing?! Jus' sayin..  ;)



Author's Response:

Are you answering the question I asked on your FB page!?!?!?! Hmmm????

Reviewer: queenxochitl Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1

OMG, I almost peed in my pants! Ownyourassward OWNS me. He is fuckhawt. This chapter is my favorite thus far. Wait...have I said that before? Perhaps because this fic just keeps getting better and better. It was a wonderful birthday gift. Thank you SO much. {I have been begging for a EPOV for a while people}. Sigh...it was lemony delicious. GREAT chapter.



Author's Response:

What Spicy wants...Spicy gets ;) Thanks, BB!

Reviewer: queenxochitl Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Sight

Umm..HI Lilith617! I just wanted to comment on the "review" by the previous reader. I took a glimpse at the supposed story she claims you have a similar plot-line. The only similiarity you both have is that both of your Bella's are vampires. Her Bella is a curse spewing bad ass, hers isnt. Your Edward is also a halfling, half vampire, half human- hers isnt. Perhaps she should read your story BEFORE making such grave accusations. BTW, LOVED your new chappie. It was intense! Keep it coming you cliffie-whore!



Author's Response:

Thank you...unfortunately I cannot delete her childish review...but I am certain that I made myself clear. I can report her if she continues...but I doubt she will....Btw...I want my stalkward missy ;)