Reviews by Lulu M
My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272409
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I see you've updated in my five year hiatus lol. So since its been so long I've decided to just re-read it all :) 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

These are familiar chapters now coming back to me. I've read this story so many times and still have so much love for it.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Knowing what I know now, uuuugggggggggh Edvard

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I was always so upset at Edvard's arrogance here. Espeically knowing he knew from the very beginning. He just couldn't get over that pride. I'm a bit more leniant with Bella's miscomunication considering she was you know...kidnapped and enslaved lolol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It was around this time I ordered honey mead off of door dash because might as well do this re-read properly. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Fornicating lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It was around this time that I had a pretty good drunken honey mead buzz going on. Just in time too.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I feel like I need a more descriptive passage dedicated to Edvard's manhood. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm thoroughly drunk right now. But I'm gonna make my through this. And happily. I mean "Your mouth is glorious." says it all. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

""Should I stop?" I whispered." hahahahahaha

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hated remembering this chapter. I'm so sad for Ro-se. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I kept thinking through this whole chapter how Emundi called Ro-se his "little flower" and it about broke my heart. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love Ro-se's character in this. You really pulled her fierceness and loyalty from the source material along with a sweetness.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Does Lina represent anyone particular from the source material....Leah...? lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love this little free family.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Men. If i die you must find someone else. Like bitch. That's my choice. Don't tell me what to do. If i want to stay single for the rest of my life because you died then i very well damned will do so!

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

my mind is playing tricks one. have i read this before??? I know based on the date that you've updated since i've last read it but im just like bellaslashedhisfreakingneck!!yeeeeesss! lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

time for some people to die. i'm also on my third glass. best. night. ever.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i love jutta

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ok i definitely have not read this chapter and oh no! it's the last one. I mean i've stuck around with you since you first published this story. i've gone through three pen names. i'll stick around for another 5 years until you feel like updated. smooch. hope you're doing well! can't wait to read more. ill read mate tomorrow :)