Reviews by Kimmydonn
His Eyes Were Hers by vegetarianvamps Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

From the moment they met, their eyes, their shared smile, it had always been enough. She’d offered her hand, he’d taken it and they left together, their future was set. They would always be together.

Entry for the Not What It Seems contest.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2681 Read Count: 104
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Kimmydonn Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Great twist. Lovely time distortion. I wish it was just slightly less choppy, but, well, that's Alice! She doesn't like to jump about, doesn't she? Good luck in the contest.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! 

I didn't want it to be a vision when I was writing it :( But that's the contest idea, so I had to put that twist there! :P

Thanks for reading!