Penname: cullens_pet [Contact] Real name: christine young
Member Since: 11 Apr 2010
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Fanfiction: Lady Moonwolf
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Summary:

stories/15495/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpgEdward isn't The only one lusting for Bella's blood!

Carlisle has a few DIRTY secrets ,involving how he creatively quenches his thirst.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 3790
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Sip

This is seriously sick and twisted.... and I love it. What does that say about me?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

What does that say about you....I think you are like ALOT of people who suspect what the Cullen family is REALLY like,lol.

Can you imagine how many more Twi fans there would be if they were exposed this way:O

 

Thanks for reading:)

The Distant Blue by camp30 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 215]
Summary:

Eric Northman kidnaps Sookie with his partner Alcide and they proceed to force her to commit unspeakable acts in the name of making her thier victim and slave.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85226 Read Count: 34945
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2012 Updated: 18 Nov 2012
Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face"

:) Nice chapter.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

Another lovely chapter, as always. Thanks for updating so quickly.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: The End's Not Near It's Here

You're right. This is possibly the darkest story that I've ever read. I must be some kind of deviant or something because I keep coming back for more. ;)

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cost

Nice chapter. How utterly twisted that he would sleep with his uncle to save her. On the same token, I'm sure that she will pay for it somehow later.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yeah it was twisted. You could be right. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Crumbs of Kindness, Chunks Of Cruelty

:) Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks I will try too.



Author's Response:

Thanks I will try too.



Author's Response:

Thanks I will try too.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Adulfanfiction is notoriously hard to navigate but don't be discouraged. The readers there don't really give much encouragement or support. My stories there don't garner nearly half the attention that they do on the other sites. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. I'm a big fan of your dark fics. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Well even though most people that read my stuff can't find me there at least the ones that do review. Here almost no one does (not including you of course) its just so frustrating because if I was writng this story on FF.net then I would be getting a ton of feedback. I really appreciate the encourgement cullens_pet. I didn't know you were a writer! Twilight fics?

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Hell On Earth

Love the darkness. I've never read an Alcide/Eric so I am very intrigued. I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hi! I'm still reading Hex House and liking it! Thanks for the review and when I did the Eric/Alcide pairing I wasn't sure if it had been done a million times already, glad it hasn't been!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lovely chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Against My Flesh

Who would have thought? I'm guessing that Cullen became complacent and even came to like the dastardly duo so they had to get rid of him becasue he wasn't any fun anymore. How terribly sad. But a nice twist.



Author's Response:

Who knows there might be another twist concering Cullen, not sure yet, thanks for your awesome reviews!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Heat

Only one word. Wow.



Author's Response:

HI, thanks and the next chapter is up!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Falling Light

Liked this chapter. I'm eager to see how this ends. I wonder how Cullen died. Will you ever tell us?



Author's Response:

Hi! I only have a vague ideal of how he died, but yes eventually I will spill the beans. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Darkness

Keep it up, girl. I don't know how you manage to write so fast. I'm slightly envious.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm a fast typer I guess :-D Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Domesticated Evil

Good chapter, I think you're doing a marvelous job conveying Sookie's emotional struggle. It's hard to remember that she is just a child so she would react just a bit differently than the average woman.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah I'm really having to dig deep on this one, its forcing me go darker and scarier than ever before. Thanks for a wonderul review!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Brandon And The Ghost That I'm Becoming

Another great chapter. You nailed her perfectly with the scene in the bedroom where she soiled herself. Sometimes that makes the whole dehumanization thing complete, makes you seem more like an animal. I can't wait to see how it all ends.



Author's Response:

Well I think its going to end bably,... but don't know for sure... Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Fade Into Black

: ) Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: No Way Out

: )

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Thorn Bushes

Personally, I liked this chapter. I wonder if they will find her in time. I'm almost rooting that they don't. But then, I'd hate to see them not get the justice that they deserve. I'd almost like her to get the drop on them somehow and let her treat them with some of their own medicine.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This story won't end well, I have a very tragic ending planned but who knows I might change my mind. Everyone seems to want her to come to love Eric but in this story that is beyond unrealistic. She will never grow to love him nor that sick fuck Alcide. There won't be any stockholm syndrome in this. Thank you for writing this review, you have been one of the only readers who has done that and I appreciate that!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Mercy Fists

Thanks for the quick update. I particularly anjoyed the last line. I can't wait to see their reaction to that.



Author's Response:

You're welcome! I'm writing the next one right now. I know I should be working on one of my other stories but this one is so addictive to write. Thank you for reviewing~

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: The Party

Hmmm... and things take another turn.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The High

Good chapter. I have to wonder what she is going to think when she comes down from her high.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm sorry I haven't replied recently. I have been very wrapped up in shit. I hope you like the chapter I just posted.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Hoop And The Brains

Hmmm... I'm almost amazed that he didn't shoot the other guy for asking to sleep with her. Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

I think you just reviewed my last chapter so now you know why they didn't kill him. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Vouyer

Hmmm... not sure what to think of anton yet. I have a sneaking suspicion that he may try something during his little sleepover.



Author's Response:

I personally think Anton was a much needed additon to the story and besides I always love throwing in orginal characters. I do evil males pretty well I think. You'll just have to tune in for the next chapter i wrote tonight I suppose to find out. Thank you for reviewing so faithfully, I love you for that.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Theme Songs of Torture

:) Loved it!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: I Like Her

Not sure what to think of this chapter. They were almost normal. i can't wait to see what happens next. Guess i'll click the little button and find out, ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for this review, I'm starting to think that no one really likes this story all that much.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Crush

I really liked this chapter. We got some of the answers that have been swirling around. I also like the fact  that you were able to create a character that even her captors are afraid of. And Anton is starting to grow on me. Before he was just creepy. Marvelous job.



Author's Response:

I liked it too. I always knew that I would grow to love Anton. Thank you for saying that as I have been proud of this story for last couple of days. Again I appreciate these reviews!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Barathrum

Not egotistical. It's alright to feel proud of your work. Not everyone has the gift for the art of good story telling. It takes a good writer to transport you to another time, another place, and to make you feel what the characters feel. Anyone can string a few words together and make a sentence, it takes a little something special for those words to take on a life of their own, to cause reactions and feelings in those that read them.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Enchantment Of The Grave

Wow, I wonder what Eric will do? Nice chapter.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: It Passed By And I Smiled

Nice chapter. I can't help but woder if Disney Land is code for something else? Maybe I'm just being a little paranoid. Good job.



Author's Response:

Its not lol, they really are taking her to Disneyland. Thanks and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: I Wish I Was The Moon Tonight

Nice chapter. I had wondered how Eric was going to make her cooperate. I figured that he would do something like that. The new question is, why was she sick? Hmm... Another thing to ponder.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: "Welcome To The Dark Side"

:) Good chapter.



Author's Response:

:) Thanks!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: "Why don't you save me?"

Another good chapter. Again, how do you find so much time to write?

 



Author's Response:

Well its easy because I don't work. I'm on disablity

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: The Moths

Sometimes stories do take on a life of their own and you can only hang on for the ride. I myself get hijacked all the time. It is irritating but you have to follow where the characters take you.



Author's Response:

So True! I just hate that I couldn't keep my word. Thanks for this review!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Matthew

Thanks for the update. : )

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: That's Me, The Cum Dumpster

Wonder what Anton wants. I'm beginning to wonder how much longer Eric and Alcide are going to let Anton's infatuation with her go on for? Oh well, questions, questions, so many questions. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Well he wants to Sookie's new owner I guess. I wonder about that too. Thanks for this review!



Author's Response:

Well he wants to Sookie's new owner I guess. I wonder about that too. Thanks for this review!



Author's Response:

Well he wants to Sookie's new owner I guess. I wonder about that too. Thanks for this review!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: The Exploding Light

I hate it when someone sends a nasty review. If it's not constructive, don't even bother leaving it. It does nothing but demorilize an author.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: The Genisis Of Pain

Good chapter.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 37: The Shadowed Truth

 

:) Nice chapter.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Eternal Candles

What a twist... hmmm... I can only imagine what Miguel is going to do.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 39: The Wedding Band

:) Nice chapter.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Hell Revised

:)

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 41: The Blackest Beauty

Aww... a little fluff after so much angst. Nice little break from all the horror. Good job.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 42: "He Was A Fucking Tool"

Awww... poor Stellan. I knew that his end would not be a good one. Wonder what Miguel will do now. Maybe he won't want to give Sookie back. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

I knew it too. I wonder too. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Oops He Did It Again

Good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Cloudy

:)

Reviewer: cullens_pet Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 47: The End

Good story. I'm sad to see it end but excited to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

Thanks I hope you like my new story The Hunger.