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Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I truly love this story and have for a while.
It's been in my favorites list for a long time now and it's one of those fics that when it updates, i almost squeal.
I noticed though that it hasn't updated in a while (2 months may not sound like much to some but considering this story used to update every few days...)
I'm not posting this to rush you or anything but i truly hope that this break is no more serious than just a case of writers block.
I know i'm not the only one out there who loves and supports this story so please let us know that everything is ok :)
Author's Response:
Hi Kate; I appreciate your words. I had quite a tragedy strike in August, and was just numb for many months. I just couldn't think, let alone write. I have not even poked my head in here for a long time. I am looking at Uprising again now, and hope I can finish the story soon. It is difficult to get the words to flow, but I need to try. Thank you for being so patient, and I am sorry that I have made you all wait so long.
Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.
Thank you to Julie for making me a banner!
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30287
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reviews. Keep up the great work :)
Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school. They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos. Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man? Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone. If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/
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This Banner is for the out-take that is now posted here as the final chapter.
Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
I second what the previous person has said.
Your idea sounds fantastic but it is simply unreadable like this.
I'm sure you've read some books before, you need to use quotation marks and paragraphs!
No two people may speak on the same line. So when one person says "My cat is black" Then go down the next line for the next person to say,
"My cat is white"
If i were you, i would find a person to proof read your story first. Fix up your first chapter and you will have many more readers.
Maybe read some other stories on here and look at how they use grammar and punctuation and incorporate that in your story.
I hope this didn't come out bitchy because i truly want this story to succeed! Your summary was fantastic and your idea sounds interesting - once you get the writing style down pat, i think this could be an excellent story!
Author's Response:
I am in no way at all offended. I had someone lined up to help me. Proof read and beta on another site and that person backed out whatever and I knew that if I tookt he first chapter and was outright open and honest and asked for help I would get it. I have a person on here that commented and has written a few stories looking at it now. I am not perfect and I like I said have only ever written a few poems here and there. So I am always glad for the critical side of reveiw because I know that I am spellign and grammar challenged at times and this is the very first tiem I have gotten the nerve to actually put it out there. It is a really great outline that I have and it will be a great story and I am really greatful to Thaigher Lillie who has agreed to help me by beta'ing my slop and helping me bring into a more readable form. I am happy to see that you thought the story has a fantastic summary and that the idea is interesting. The story will be good, I have no doubt about that. I am great at creating just not the writing I guess is how I look at it. I can tell them just not write them. We will see I am commited to see it through one way or another. Thank you for your honesty and please no fear you did not offend me I knew it is needing help! As soon as Thaigher Lillie gets done working some of the magic on the first chapter I will edit it and fix the error of my ways. So watch for it I think you will really like it when it is reader freindly!