Reviews by l-occitane11
Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

>a good start, will not wait to read the other chapters



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it.  There is some very funny stuff in this story, Edward having dinner with Charlie & Bella is one of them.

Summary:

Facing certain death for defending Bella’s honor, Jasper finds himself depending on Bella making the ultimate sacrifice; her complete surrender to the dark and dangerous Edward. But is the price too high? Will she succumb to Edward's persuasive calling?


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9579 Read Count: 8931
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello I just found your story by chance. The beginning is very catchy, will read the next chapters.

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Beautiful chapters, poor bella and jasper. I hope that Edward will not kill him. Ha look forward to following ire

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

ho my god, I can not wait that Bella is separated from her husband
of very good chapter, Angela injury landed her now was very very hot

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

sorry, I can not remember if I posted already but it's okay I start. I had already read the first 2 chapters and I already love what is funny is to see Angela in the role is a real bitch lol
Will go and read other chapters, to show the evolution of B / E
I appreciate very much your story
Sorry again, my writing in English, some difficulties because unfortunately am French and I appreciate fiction in English

 

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Then I just finished this chapter, the world is really small
Bella who is Angela's husband and the husband of Bella with the wife of Edward I really laugh

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

wonderful chapter just the statement
a real bitch angela
'm sorry I hardly read the last chapter or knows who Laurent

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Although the game of cat and mouse
Something done, missing with Angela Edward
In very good chapter, you have lots of talent

10/10

Author's Response:

Thank you so much....we try our best. Hope u enjoy the rest

 

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DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

ha no, turn me angela twice oops she did it outside



Author's Response:

LOL we are so glad you are liking our baby so far!

Thank you sweetie for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

Beautiful Bella and Edward



Author's Response:

:) Ah yes I wish I had someone like him LOL!

Thank you for your review sweetie!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

>hello, just finished the 10 chapters I'm up to date. >Really twists in these chapters. >Esmé a real bitch, I love a lot Rosalie. >The true mother of Edward and revelations as a measure
>Congratulations again for your writing



Author's Response:

Aw your so sweet! Glad you're caught up on the story. We like to keep our readers on edge. Like whoa I wasn't expecting that to happen LOL.

Thank you for reading and reviewing our story!

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Ari & DLIR

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

magnificent chapter am really love story
Edward is very mild in this chapter tarde me which transforms the thanks a big chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! =)

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Bella even afraid of the vampire I love it when she is very brave to defend his companion
  rebound of the mystery I hope that Edward will get better
great chapter we want to end up
A very good story and a very good chapter thank you Jay Sand

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

>Wonderful chapter, I feel that Jacob has some things to have in the history of bella. >View that alice can not see the future of Bella
>A wait to read more

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36393
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

Ho my god. Thank you, for letting us share your fiction with us. I'm a fan of the trio Edward / Bella / Jasper
This first chapter is really hot. the next chapters to know the secrets of each



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo