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Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ahhhhhhhhhh. Google is a very splendid thing in deed.  I can't believe the bite thing...too funny.  Very special first date.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I was so excited to see the post.  Poor Bella was blind sided on that one.  The "stuff" is really gonna hit the fan with the Rosalie reveal.....  Annoying Vicky is gonna have a blind siding of her own soon isn't see?  hee hee  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OK...I love this boy Quil and his whole view of the world.  Very funny.  It's true that some of the things you like about a place or thing can be a two edged sword in the long run.  Funny about the PDA of your parents. It's a good read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am very attached to Quil, I'm glad you like him.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I laughed at the toothbrush fiasco and Bella wanting to lick Jakes B-fast loud enought my son wanted to know what could be so funny in a boring ole story... Yeah he's 9 and if it doesn't beep, it couldn't possibly be entertaining.  ;-)



Author's Response:

Ha ha, that's awesome. At least it was something clean that you could tell him about, most funny fanfic moments would have been a bit much for a nine year old.

 

Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm



Author's Response:

I appreciate the review even though I'm not sure what it means. LOL

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The poop has begunn to hit the proverbial fan. I'm still reading...BTW.



Author's Response:

Ha ha. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, I can't believe the turn this has taken...  Gotta hit next now...bye



Author's Response:

Ha ha, thanks.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

But I would still look like a cougar," I said, laying my fear out there.

A devious smile came across Edward's face and he looked feral. "I like cougars," he purred       Such a good line!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The cougar line came to me VERY early in the writing process. LOL

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love that Rosie got a taste of fire....A laughing Carlisle is too great also!



Author's Response:

Yes, I love to see the jovial side of Carlisle as well.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Theres still so much going on I can't take it!!!!!  Claire is amazing and Quil is .... 16.  You can't really fault him his view on life, the wolf gene didn't just morph him into an all wise and knowing being....but you could still totally smack him!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. So many people are hating Quil, but he is so young.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

GAh.............I can't take the suspence....you kill me.



Author's Response:

Wow, you are almost caught up.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Holy shit!  Can we cuss in a review?  If  not.  SORRY! 



Author's Response:

You can totally fucking cuss the shit out of your reviews. : )

 

Thanks.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Now Quil has the moment of clarity?  Gah!



Author's Response:

Yeah, well it takes him a bit. :p

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This has been a really great ride.  I can't wait to see what comes next...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hmmmmmmmmmmm.  Didn't see that cliff coming.  Interesting as always though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: BPOV EPI

Wow.........did not see that coming!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, if you read my last three reviews, they are like identical!!

 

Thanks for the review. The final Epo should be up soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

I was sooooooooo excited to see this post.  Glad your up and at it again.  I knew it wouldn't be long before "the monster" would make an appearance.  Is it wrong I wasn't fazed by the torture...yeah probably.  Hurry please.



Author's Response:

oh I am glad you were antisipating my chapter :) I enjoyed writing it very much :) well the monster is constantly lurking beneath the surface, he just has to be sumoned :) it isnt wrong that you were fine by the torture, i thought that it was rather watered down, its just i know some people dont like it xx thank you very much xx

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I've been reading and I'll let you know............Bella and Edward are so insecure I could scream....but I like your story very much.  It is different from others in so many ways.  Good job on the originality.  bye

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This brought back the vortex of intrigue as soon an the new posts came.  Sucked right back in and ready for more.  Great!



Author's Response:

Thank You So Much! I always aim to please! next chapter is in the works so i hope you like it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!

 

Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: MY UNHAPPY ENDING

Funny....Maria?  Never a dull moment in this fic that's for sure.  Meeting Jacob William and that whole conversation made me cry....not to mention the letter we're supposed to have forgotten about from Jake....gah.........I can't take it I tell ya.  But I do love Peter the manpire.



Author's Response:

Thans for the review.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I don't know if I'm going to reveal what's in the letter, but we'll see...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn.........Carlisle knows how to lay it out there huh?  Was he shocked to hell about the sketches.  Charlie is a  bad....clueless man...hee hee



Author's Response:

Aren't all dad's at some point? They have to embarrass their daughters, it's their job...lol.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex

OK.  James needs to die and I doubt I'm the only one to say it.  He weilds way to much power and he needs to be brought down... It's hard to remember they are still just kids that have lived in this environment with no savior besides Carliesle for years.  Growl.......... 



Author's Response:

You're right everyone seems to want James dead-but Jasper's story needs to come out somewhat first. I think we might be at that part next, I need to check. I may go ahead and put it out this week if it is. I'm glad you kept in mind that they are still very young, and even though they are 'Bad Boys' James is the one person who has been there to manipulate them for years. They all fear him to an extent, even our Carlisle, who tries so hard to be the strong, protective big brother.

Thank You Kat for the review!  :) Diane

 

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Time to Talk

I'm so glad they came clean........well mostly huh?  Things are gonna be hoppin from here I think.



Author's Response:

Yeah mostly, it'll happen, it would be a hard thing to tell. I'm trying to get things hoppin' it's just that I keep changing directions with things. :) Take Care, Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420868
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Run this town

Horny Edward?  Never a bad thing.  hehe

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

The start of this chapter was brilliant.......if any damning should take place it would be after that first paragraph...haha