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Bio:
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mistress Tanya
sorry you havent been getting the reviews - i just started reading and couldn't stop - well except for some hot moments...
anyways, i'm really happy finally getting to read a more dominant bella and excited by all the anticipation you've built up...it's really the best part
also love all the other POV you've added - especially carlisle's - not sure if it was meant to be humorous but I enjoyed it.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor
The humilitation and BJ thing was done just right. It seems like that was the only option Edward would consider for someone unfamiliar to him. I think even as a sub he wants some sort of "control" and feels proud of his own self-control?
I'm looking foward to how you'll present Tanya pushing Edward's limits. At this point of the story I think Edward still has a lot of pride, and if Isabella is going to be present at the club, I think he'll want to "show-off" in front of her.
I love how you did Tanya's POV, it shows exactly how flaky and careless a person she is. I hope whatever scenario ends her relationship with Edward, that it'll reflect poorly on her reputation - hate to think she succeeds in anything else besides getting rid of Edward.
btw, loved how you put in little glimpses of Carlisle+Esme. I know it's a Bella/Edward story but gotta wonder about future play dates?
Author's Response:
I'm glad the BJ-thing wasn't over the top. I'm always debating whether to go more easy or harder on him, so it's nice to know when I do it right.
Yeah, Tanya is a real bitch, as she's supposed to be in this story :-)
Maybe we'll see Isabella and Carlisle arrange some scenes in the future, although that'll probably end up among the outtakes on my blog.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club
wow...Even though is was necessary for him to leave Tanya, I literally had to take a deep breath reading Edward's torture. I'm so glad he finally safeworde, Edward can be so stubborn! Hopefully his time with Bella - he won't be so stubborn.
Again, I love all the different POV's - though I think we need Carlisle's POV too - because I hope he isn't that cruel and would have wanted to help/save Edward. Also love all the suspense - you gave just enough - Edward only gets a peek of Bella.
Looking foward to the next chapter!
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush
Another great chapter - very intense but loved getting to see how much Bella cares for Edward already. Also loved reading EPOV - it's such a turning point for him, I can't wait to see what he'll be like after this. So many possibilities for the story from this point - Will he still engage in BDSM after this scene? Will he trust Bella to be his Dom? Will they seek revenge against Tanya?
...really exciting...look foward to the next chapter