Reviews by arwen01
Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84331
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition

great start

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous

i love their interaction

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Ploy

loved it

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

thank you for this chapter

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

oh my god.

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

thank you for this chapter! and i'm incredibly thankful that his daughter lives!

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

i still don't get it why this story had to be deleted on the other site. this is beautiful, full of pain with a promise of healing. i love it.

ps. i'd appreciate some edward/bella lovin' too, just saying... LOL

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty

i don't want to hurt your feelings as you are a great writer, but i miss the lack of passion between Carlisle and Bella. No making out, no secret touches, lingering looks... apart from their confession of love there's a very few affectionate moments between them. Please, don't take my review as a mean comment, I try to be constructive in my review.
thank you for this chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi aand thank you for taking the time to read an d comment on my story.

No worries.....your words didn't hurt me and I do appreciate them.  It just tells me as a writer what my story is lacking.  If it is constructive I will take it.  It means just as much as someone who writes a positive review.

Bella is also very confusesd.  She has only been in one relationship with her high school sweet heart and that's it.  She doesn't have a whole lot of confidence in this department and is afraid.  She does hold his hand adn they do kiss.  They aren't really in hiding any more and realtionship is out in the open.  I promise (or at least hope) there will be more in the next chapter.

I hope you will stick around and let me know what you think of the next chapter!

-Lisa

The Mistress by filmmaker007 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

This is the sequel for The Master. 

That pretty much sums it up.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Royal Blood Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33 Read Count: 843
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2011
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i hope we don't have to wait another 25 chapters for a single kiss or smut... LOL
keep writing. this is promising.

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: The Mistress

thank you for this chapter. it was nice but i need a little more drama and definitely more passion between william and elizabeth

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

Oh my, this story is really hard to read! But in a very good way. I hope Edward finally gets a grip and builds up the courage to finally take what's his! :)
I don't know who and why attacked you for this amazing story, but they were definitely wrong. This story is deep and meaningful, carrying a message to everyone who is afraid to hope in something pure and unadultered. This story is beautiful and please update soon...
ps. Jasper needs to get laid. ASAP. lol

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: arwen01 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: None

hey sweetie, i honestly have no time to read this chapter through bc i have to leave to work in a few and won't back until late in the night but i wanted to express my support and i'll read this chapter once i get home.
Until then: NEVER DOUBT YOURSELF. You are an amazing writer!

Author's Response:

thank you love, i know you are always here for me, hugs x