Reviews by jazzled89
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: jazzled89 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

That wasnt what I was expecting. Sure hope he doesnt act on that. But hey, at least he knows its wrong and is trying to do something about it.

 

I got my post.

Reviewer: jazzled89 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Thanks for the extra long chapter. I think I help my breath during most of that chpater.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625421
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: jazzled89 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I just started reading this a few days ago. Such a great story. I was so scared to read this chapter. I thought Edward was going to break his promise. It seriously took me a day to just bring myself to read it. And wow..it didnt go like I thought it would. And Im so happy about that. I cant wait to see what going on in the next chapter. And I glad we can finally see the answer to Esmes garden. Hope its plans on how to kill Carlisle without getting caught.

Reviewer: jazzled89 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Well I wasnt expecting that. I actually cried. I hope you make this into a novel. Thatd be awesome.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: jazzled89 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. But, and I'm not trying to be rude, you really need a beta. You tend to use commas when you should use periods and start another sentence. And then, many times when you need commas, you don't use them.